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Old 2010-04-05, 20:14   Link #21
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@Cyz , she is Yukari Yakumo
@ Mr.ghost a unrelated comment: you might have some problem with the way you used that text on your signature.
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Old 2010-04-05, 21:04   Link #22
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I tried a different lighting scheme. Which looks better?

ver. 1

ver. 2

edit: ver. 3
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Old 2010-04-05, 21:36   Link #23
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I tried a different lighting scheme. Which looks better?

ver. 1

ver. 2

edit: ver. 3
I think ver. 2 is the best
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Old 2010-04-05, 22:37   Link #24
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Here's my Version One of one of my possible entries: Mystia Lorelei in Crimsonfall.



Any ideas on which text to put in? My first idea is "Night falls, money follows."
The bright area looks a bit unmatching with the rest of the sig wich is dark.

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I've done this sig quite a few months back


C&C?

note: the one on the sig is Shikieki
I like overall the style of the sig, it's really good, my only problem would be that pink border wich looks a bit of.

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@Marcus H. I have no idea for a text, but I think than the background's lightning might be improved.
@ fraility great choice of render and good lightning, just need to add something on the empty space.
My first try C&C would be welcome;
I don't know, the gary scale doesn't look to atractive with the type of render and background.

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koo?

I really like it, can't think in anything it needs.

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Hmm, not familiar with the characters but I manage to find one. Do educate me of whom she might be....

Love the colors and the style, the font is a bit of, probably a more "artistic2 or 2gamour" one would do.

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This is Yuka Kazami according to two sites. I think it was a fan-made render.
It's a good style, I think it may need a border isnce the bg is a bit bright.

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I tried a different lighting scheme. Which looks better?

ver. 1

ver. 2

edit: ver. 3
I like V2 more, but I'm not sure about the text, the font and color don't seem to the the proper ones. :/
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Old 2010-04-06, 03:08   Link #25
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Old 2010-04-06, 05:20   Link #26
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First draft.




Edit: Almost forgot.
I'm guessing the character is Kazami Yuuka.
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Old 2010-04-06, 06:09   Link #27
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Old 2010-04-06, 08:55   Link #28
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Old 2010-04-06, 08:56   Link #29
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Haladflire65 I would go with the 2nd version
escimo is she supposed to be on a train? I think th the darkest spot ( on the animation) might be too dark compared to the rest of the animation.
Endrance where's the rest of the tree's shadow?
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I don't know, the gary scale doesn't look to atractive with the type of render and background.
In fact, the original picture was gray scale, otherwise I would have kept at least the eyes's color.
My second try, C&C are always welcome:



( Previous version)
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Old 2010-04-06, 09:41   Link #30
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^ I like the rectangular version.
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Old 2010-04-06, 10:45   Link #31
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Version 1. I'll probably find something to change before final submissions.

Reimu Hakurei.
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Old 2010-04-06, 11:25   Link #32
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First draft.




Edit: Almost forgot.
I'm guessing the character is Kazami Yuuka.
Oh, nice as always escimo. I like the anim,ation a lot, mix very well with the text and the general style of the sig.

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1st attempt using Patchouli Knowledge
Hmmm... looks way to simple, like a mere crop image, but I could be wrong. Well the colors and contrast are okay,. the text is a bit lost among the sky tough.

Also, Endrance makes a non-animated sig! Spooky... O_O

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Haladflire65 I would go with the 2nd version
escimo is she supposed to be on a train? I think th the darkest spot ( on the animation) might be too dark compared to the rest of the animation.
Endrance where's the rest of the tree's shadow?

In fact, the original picture was gray scale, otherwise I would have kept at least the eyes's color.
My second try, C&C are always welcome:



( Previous version)
In that case, I think you could work something here very cool, since in photoshop it's really easy to add color to a grayscale image, you could work a really cool efect and style with this sig, I sugest to stick with the square sig.

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Version 1. I'll probably find something to change before final submissions.

Reimu Hakurei.
Overall I like it, can't think in anyhing it needs... maybe a border.
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Old 2010-04-06, 13:13   Link #33
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I have no idea what the name of the charactes are, but... here are my attempts






...yeah, file sizes are a bit too big, but I'll fix that
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Old 2010-04-06, 13:15   Link #34
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The second one is better by far periwinkle. Nice color choice.

@evil rick - i don't like borders on bright sigs. I personally try to avoid borders as much as possible actually.
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Old 2010-04-06, 15:24   Link #35
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I tried reworking the text, a totally different style. Should I stay with it or just choose a simpler font?

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Old 2010-04-06, 15:38   Link #36
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I like the font, but perhaps making it a little bit more readable (maybe more gray then black) will work out.
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Old 2010-04-06, 16:46   Link #37
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I like the font, but perhaps making it a little bit more readable (maybe more gray then black) will work out.
Thanks for the suggestion I also got feedback saying that the style of the font didn't fit the sig so I tried another combo.

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Old 2010-04-06, 17:23   Link #38
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Thanks for the suggestion I also got feedback saying that the style of the font didn't fit the sig so I tried another combo.
I liked that font!

The new choice doesn't excite me, though... See if any fonts here tickle your fancy.
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Old 2010-04-06, 17:43   Link #39
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This is Yuka Kazami according to two sites. I think it was a fan-made render.
The shiny bubbles on the bottom make the background too distracting. Try to bring the focus towards your render using contrast, etc. Also, it seems a bit muted. Are you intentionally keeping stronger blacks and whites out of your signature? You could try to use some differentiation between the values on the render and the background. Right now, the contrast is stronger on the sides than in the center, which usually isn't what you want.

I'm just throwing out random ideas, since I can't test them right now.
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Old 2010-04-06, 17:46   Link #40
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Love the colors and the style, the font is a bit of, probably a more "artistic2 or 2gamour" one would do.
Oookay, version 2:



^ Changed the font
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