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Old 2010-05-10, 11:30   Link #21
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@Rikimtasu the signature is nice but the text lack subtility, it big, black and overlaping the render.
@JRendell the effects are interesting but I am not sure than it's a good idea
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Old 2010-05-10, 11:52   Link #22
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just trying ^_^

The efects are really good and the colors are perfect, quite the ideals. Hmmm... perhaps the text is juts a bit hard to read.

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hi hi here my firt try



tsugoeee if it is difficult this competition I have many signatures of seifukus
Nice efects but the colors feel a bit pale :/

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I reworked my 2 possible entries`:
first.1
A lot better, like how does this looks, try to leave the border as pure black.

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C&C would be welcome
Hmmm... is better but I'm afraid that the pink text doesn't add good contrats to the grayscale and gradients of yellow, orange and green who're mostly at the right side, try a color of these scales for the text so it'll feet better.

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C&C will be welcome~
It's okay but the text... I don't know, feels like it's there because it needs to be there, the font doesn't help a lot either.

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Nice one caps, that'll save me alot of time

Here's an extremely rough draft;



Yes, I know that it doesn't have a border :P You can see the stock used by following the Konachan link in capture's post.
Too dark I'm afarid, almost imposible to "understand" what's there.

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and yea..here's the version 3..



seems like I can't add more into the dark side.=.=
A lot better, hmmm... the quality feels a bit low tough.
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Old 2010-05-10, 11:53   Link #23
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and yea..here's the version 3..



seems like I can't add more into the dark side.=.=
Well, I know you don't really want to hear this, but the original render looks very low quality. Edges, jpeg artifacts, limited sharpness, contrast loss... It will be hard to build a great sig upon such a foundation, ya know.
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Old 2010-05-10, 11:58   Link #24
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It looks kind of plain and the text could use a bit more work
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Old 2010-05-10, 13:23   Link #25
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Draft #2

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Old 2010-05-10, 16:02   Link #26
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@ JRendell to be honest, I don't see any difference betweem the 2 version.

This will be my Final Entry
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Old 2010-05-10, 16:43   Link #27
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Draft #2

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Any better?
Yeah, I think the render's a bit oversharp in some parts and still too dark, also you can do with a more noticeable border

My ver. 2:

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Old 2010-05-10, 17:28   Link #28
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First try. Ugh, exams are coming up, not much time this month



C&C please!
It's fine. Headless is a bit disturbing to some sure, but it's not graphic gore.




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First Try

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hi hi here my firt try



tsugoeee if it is difficult this competition I have many signatures of seifukus
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C&C will be welcome~
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Nice one caps, that'll save me alot of time

Here's an extremely rough draft;



Yes, I know that it doesn't have a border :P You can see the stock used by following the Konachan link in capture's post.
Forgive me for being picky, but none of these appear to fit the theme. Where exactly is the school uniform look? I could accept males with blazers maybe, but these are all female and none of them appear to be wearing sailor uniforms.
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Old 2010-05-10, 17:55   Link #29
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Forgive me for being picky, but none of these appear to fit the theme. Where exactly is the school uniform look? I could accept males with blazers maybe, but these are all female and none of them appear to be wearing sailor uniforms.
The fact than the ''seifuku'' has to be a sailor uniforms wasn't confirmed by Malin may have caused this...
BTW, JRendell's render is hearing a sailor uniform, it's just than the ''cadrage'' and the general darkness of the sig are not making it obvious.
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Old 2010-05-10, 19:41   Link #30
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That's understandable but even if that is the case none of those entries show a recognizable school uniform. Rikimatsu's entry could be any uniform or formal clothing, and JR's is far too dark to make out much. Mekdra's and katiemirmo's look like shirts any girl could wear, nothing suggests they are school uniforms.

The entries don't specifically have to be sailor uniforms, but they must be school uniforms, and viewers shouldn't have to know the series the characters are from or otherwise have to guess if the entry fits the theme.
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Old 2010-05-10, 19:48   Link #31
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Wow, suddenly this topic became confusing. D:
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Old 2010-05-10, 19:49   Link #32
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First try. Ugh, exams are coming up, not much time this month



C&C please!
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Old 2010-05-10, 20:56   Link #33
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C&C much appreciated!
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Old 2010-05-10, 21:40   Link #34
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C&C much appreciated!
Cute signature =D I really like the text.

My attempt at the theme ^^
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Old 2010-05-10, 21:47   Link #35
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Heres my try dont know if i am happy with it or go with someone else..

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Old 2010-05-10, 22:38   Link #36
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My try this month I made 2 vers because i can't transparent this sign

Spoiler for ver 2:
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Old 2010-05-10, 23:01   Link #37
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Draft #2

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Any better?
Still too dark, it's hard to "understand"

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My ver. 2:

lol, okay, I think it looks nice this way

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C&C much appreciated!
Really cute, cute style and cute choose of colors, really good job.

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My attempt at the theme ^^
It's nice but the ight is too bright.

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Heres my try dont know if i am happy with it or go with someone else..

Overall it's really good, I'm a bit yes/no about the yellow plant ontop, it looks good but at the same time a bit distracting, perhaps placing it undere the render....

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My try this month I made 2 vers because i can't transparent this sign

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I don't see the school uniform
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Old 2010-05-11, 00:59   Link #38
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It is pretty clear that ONLY classic seifuku is correct for this SOTM.
Giving up my previous entry and make this:

I need to think a good font to fit in this sig.Any idea?
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Old 2010-05-11, 02:12   Link #39
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And hell yes, this theme is really hard. ><
anyway, this is probably a seifuku now..since it's from To Heart ..

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Old 2010-05-11, 02:44   Link #40
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My take on the theme. :3 Oh Kino~



Background is a picture of Ginza, which has totally gold vibes on the source pic (pun intended).
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