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Old 2010-06-17, 00:19   Link #25481
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I'm going to get so flamed when I start working on that fic again.
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Or maybe Daddy put her up as collateral for his gambling debts. You raise a good point. Whatever excuse she uses should be time sensitive as well. It'll make him desperate enough to steal the Shroud because there's no other way to get the money needed in time.
Yes, I think I'll use that one. On top of the time contraints there's also the fact that she would be taken away from him.

"They will certainly sell me to the highest bidder where I'll be forced to do all sorts of things. I don't want that to happen, I'm saving myself for you!"

Something like that.
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Old 2010-06-17, 00:50   Link #25482
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lmao, since I put the three completed chapters of Altered Course up on fanfiction.net, I've already got some people sensing danger!

and by danger I mean Yuunoha.

I'm going to get so flamed when I start working on that fic again.

Edit: the reviewer said that if I really wanted to make season one "darker" I should kill or maim Yuuno. (I guess they missed Yuuno's severe injury in the prologue?)

The hatedom is strong in this one!
Yeah, so?

I won't flame it.

I look forward to more from it.
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Old 2010-06-17, 00:52   Link #25483
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Hello everyone. been a long time lurker here at this forum.

Used to be a fanfic writer a few years ago.

There is a story idea that been on my head for a little while. I'm just hoping that I can finish it even with the lack of free time that I have.

Nanya, you know what I'm talking about.

Even though this fic set place in the PSP timeline I hope that I don't mess up too much with the already establish continuity of the main timeline.

maybe I should think about using my neglected FF.net account.

Well, enjoy.

Spoiler for The Unbreakable Darkness: Prologue:


The thing about writing fanfic is that I got some ideas, especially at the beginning and the end of the story, but it seems like there are holes in between those ideas. Is it common to write stuff and have ideas to just jump at you during writing or should I just wait and try to get everything down first?
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Old 2010-06-17, 01:46   Link #25484
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Well, this'll be... Interesting.

They REALLY needed to do something about that thing...

Of course, I made a suggestion already.

Still... I would like to see more about this.
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Old 2010-06-17, 07:20   Link #25485
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Hello everyone. been a long time lurker here at this forum.

Used to be a fanfic writer a few years ago.

There is a story idea that been on my head for a little while. I'm just hoping that I can finish it even with the lack of free time that I have.

Nanya, you know what I'm talking about.

Even though this fic set place in the PSP timeline I hope that I don't mess up too much with the already establish continuity of the main timeline.

maybe I should think about using my neglected FF.net account.

Well, enjoy.

Spoiler for The Unbreakable Darkness: Prologue:


The thing about writing fanfic is that I got some ideas, especially at the beginning and the end of the story, but it seems like there are holes in between those ideas. Is it common to write stuff and have ideas to just jump at you during writing or should I just wait and try to get everything down first?
Hey, more authors writing about those crazy and cute Materials works for me! And I'm not exactly sure what you meant by that last question but I usually try to iron out ideas in my head or just throw out a rough note outline with some core dialogue/ideas that go with those notes.

Pageclaim for the Materials Authors!
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Old 2010-06-17, 07:37   Link #25486
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The thing about writing fanfic is that I got some ideas, especially at the beginning and the end of the story, but it seems like there are holes in between those ideas. Is it common to write stuff and have ideas to just jump at you during writing or should I just wait and try to get everything down first?
The way I write involves ideas popping out all over my planned timeline. I do not try to force my thoughts onto the chronological sequence but take them as they come and fit them in after the fact. Do what you think works best for you.

I wonder if I am suffering from Cookie-Cutter Condition.

DEATH OF A NOBODY

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Old 2010-06-17, 07:37   Link #25487
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lmao, since I put the three completed chapters of Altered Course up on fanfiction.net, I've already got some people sensing danger!

and by danger I mean Yuunoha.

I'm going to get so flamed when I start working on that fic again.

Edit: the reviewer said that if I really wanted to make season one "darker" I should kill or maim Yuuno. (I guess they missed Yuuno's severe injury in the prologue?)

The hatedom is strong in this one!
Good, gooooood! Let their hate flow through you. It will make you strong. You don't know the power, of the Dark Side of the Fandom.

Seriously, though: pairing matters to me very little under nearly any circumstances. The only way the pairing could make me not read a good story is if I don't like one of the characters involved no matter who they're paired to, and while there are a ton of characters in the Nanoha fandom that I am basically neutral towards (Like, 90% of the characters introduced in StrikerS. Including, amusingly enough considering I'm writing a fic about them, Vivio and Lutecia. Though admittedly, ViVid has seriously improved my opinion of the latter. Which is also sort of amusing considering it's the former's series.), there aren't really any that I actively dislike. Except for the ones you're supposed to hate, like Precia and Quattro, and I enjoy hating them so that doesn't count.

I like Yuuno, and I like Nanoha, so Yuunoha holds no terror for me. Write what you wish.
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Old 2010-06-17, 09:26   Link #25488
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lmao, since I put the three completed chapters of Altered Course up on fanfiction.net, I've already got some people sensing danger!

and by danger I mean Yuunoha.

I'm going to get so flamed when I start working on that fic again.

Edit: the reviewer said that if I really wanted to make season one "darker" I should kill or maim Yuuno. (I guess they missed Yuuno's severe injury in the prologue?)

The hatedom is strong in this one!
Isn't it sad, Yuuno-kun?
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Old 2010-06-17, 10:18   Link #25489
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Chapter 6 of false light will expand the OC cast by one (adding Victor Stormhawk) and expand the canon cast by... a lot. Vivio and Yuuno return in a big way, but otherwise, adding Hayate, Sein, Otto, Deed, Verossa, Carim and that nun from the Saint Church who I can never remember how to spell her name.

Yeah, Chrono calls in the really big guns.
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Old 2010-06-17, 10:26   Link #25490
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adding Hayate, Sein, Otto, Deed, Verossa, Carim and that nun from the Saint Church who I can never remember how to spell her name.
Sister Schach Nouera, the one who personally taught Verossa and is teaching Sein in canon right now.
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Old 2010-06-17, 10:34   Link #25491
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Thank you.
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Old 2010-06-17, 14:41   Link #25492
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Old 2010-06-17, 14:46   Link #25493
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A Wallachia back-to-the-roots short with extra cake.
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Old 2010-06-17, 15:26   Link #25494
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*Snicker* Never underestimate the power of the paper fan of doom.

It'll be interesting to see what happens next.
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Old 2010-06-17, 18:51   Link #25495
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Yeah, Chrono calls in the really big guns.
Oh yea!!! I think that will jack up False Light's awesomenss by 30%

Although that puts it at like 130%.....
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Old 2010-06-17, 21:20   Link #25496
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Yeah, Chrono calls in the really big guns.
As long as the really big guns are shiny and powerful as all heck and blow the other side to kingdom come, I have no complaints.
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Old 2010-06-17, 22:39   Link #25497
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Well, it still doesn't have a title yet, but hey, it still has Fate! And Bardiche! That should count for something!

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Old 2010-06-17, 22:51   Link #25498
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Well, it still doesn't have a title yet, but hey, it still has Fate! And Bardiche! That should count for something!

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Chapter 1
You know... it really needs a title.

Very nice; I like it very much. The ending paragraphs continue to do an excellent job of building up from where you left off with chapter one, only now we seem to have thrown in flashes of the past, increased pain and suffering in general.... oh, man, this thing must have bonded with him pretty deep, and yet even so a part of me wonders why. Was it an accident? Perhaps he suited it magically or in terms of personality? Or was it all some kind of sick experiment?

Fate definitely took a page from Nanoha's book, though I get the feeling Yaris didn't quite appreciate her decision; that talk next chapter should be very interesting. I'm forever amused by Yaris herself; she can't seem to decide if she's Fate's guardian, her partner in equal terms, or an annoyed baby-sitter with a difficult charge. I'm beginning to think she believes she's a little bit of all three!

Zil's take on this will be interesting. Was he simply managing the trade, or did he want the artificat for himself, only for something to go wrong? Is the man suffering at the end of the chapter his friend, a family relative, or perhaps an innocent mook who was in the wrong place at the wrong time?

So many questions! I love it!
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Old 2010-06-17, 22:57   Link #25499
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Well, it still doesn't have a title yet, but hey, it still has Fate! And Bardiche! That should count for something!
Well, yeah, Bardiche is the best character in the series. I'm still waiting for the spin-off where he and Thoma's Divider team up to fight Nazi vampires.

Oh, and... nice chapter. I particularly enjoyed the part where Fate, y'know, beat the tar out of everybody. I think Yaris's annoyance is one part 'Oh my God this little kid just flipped out and beat up everybody without so much as warning me, does she not realize we were supposed to be talking here?' and one part '... ... ... uh-oh, she could kick my ass'.
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Old 2010-06-18, 10:45   Link #25500
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A Wallachia back-to-the-roots short with extra cake.
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I don't even know what Wallachia looks like but I keep thinking "kinda like Remilia Scarlet..."

The ending was pretty WTF.
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