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Old 2010-07-15, 01:14   Link #41
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YEY! More work to do xD


On page 17 are you sure is that what it says?
I mean it doesn't make sense at least to me but reading the whole Tenshi's dialogue I think it should be something more like "people who feel they haven't received fair treatment will all focus...
Oh damn you're right, I misread a character. 无 versus 天. Fixed above.

Btw, these are very literal translations, so editing is encouraged.
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Old 2010-07-15, 02:10   Link #42
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Darn, gotta sleep for work tomorrow.

Page 25:
Hinata: Eh...?
Yuri: ... sorry to trouble you, Hinata.
Hinata: Yurippe, you're okay, right? Ow ow ow...
Yuri: Me...
Yuri: I don't have any big problems
Hinata: So don't make that worried expression, then...
Yuri: Who would worry about you?! The gun, the gun. It was destroyed and smashed by that girl.
Yuri: With that handsonic, in one strike.

Page 26:
Hinata: handsonic... so it's that kind of weapon (cutting tool)?
Hinata: It's like a weapon name from an anime.
Hinata: Maybe she's unexpectedly an otaku?
Hinata: After that, what happened?
Yuri: Nothing. Only that I carried you with that girl here
Yuri: In brief!
Yuri: I'm hungry. Let's go to the cafeteria and reflect on things.
Yuri: ... it's okay if I treat you for a meal today, right?

Page 27:
Hinata: ... isn't she saying... that she wants to return the favor?...
Hinata: How strange. It couldn't be.
Yuri: ... wait, what's that?
Hinata: Eh? It's curry and natto. I want to eat natto curry.
Yuri: Heh? You're serious!?
Yuri: BLEEEGGHH (vomiting sound)
Hinata: ... hello?
Hinata:
Hinata (little subtext): Don't be like that
Yuri: That which gives off the super digusting scent of a pair of socks that have been continuously worn by a male athlete for a week? Along with curry? Let's still split up.
Hinata: I already... can't eat it anymore.

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Old 2010-07-15, 12:57   Link #43
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OK its done till page 27. Uploaded and good to go.
When the translation is complete Ill post the whole chapter

LOL "MAC no Fansub" already exist. Ill change the name to "MACVazquez no Fansub" XD

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Old 2010-07-16, 00:43   Link #44
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Done! I'm not forgetting any pages, am I?

Page 28:
Hinata: So, from this battle, have we learned anything? Perhaps about the student council president?
Yuri: What are you thinking? Ah, could you bring the nattou back to your room and not open it here?
Hinata: Ah I know! That student council president is a monster. That's about it from me.
Yuri: Really, that kind of simple thought... who are you (are you an idiot)?
Hinata: I'm your companion. Then what are your thoughts?
Yuri: As of now, I can only say that she's similar to God.
Hinata: You said similar? Not is?
Yuri: She's like God. Or maybe second only to God. Wait, who are you again?
Hinata: I'm your partner. Then, what kind of power is handsonic?
Yuri: According to my conjecture, it's a power bestowed on her by God

Page 29:
Yuri: It's to respond to things like the principal getting taken hostage and other similar emergency situations that happen in this world
Yuri: Probably that girl's purpose is to maintain the order and existence of this world, acting as God's emissary.
Yuri: Do you get it yet, Mr. unfamiliar passerbyer?
Hinata: I'm your partner! I get it. So that's how it is, right?
Hinata: So basically, she's an angel?

Page 30:
Yuri: An angel?
Hinata: The ones that serve God? Aren't those angels?
Yuri: She really is like an angel. What you said is pretty spot on.
Yuri: Then we'll call her Tenshi, Mr. unknown strange person
Hinata: I'm your partner. Then what? What should we do next?
Yuri: If Tenshi is protecting the order of this world, then we'll destroy that order.
Yuri: Then how about God?
Hinata: We'll drive him out!

Page 31:
Yuri: Good answer.
Hinata: It's because I'm your partner
Yuri: Speaking of partners, we really need more people so we will have enough to confront Tenshi
Hinata: In this kind of world, those won't be that easy to find
Yuri: Yeah, you're right
Ooyama: Welcome! You came back really late today, Hinata. Did anything happen?
Hinata: Nothing really - I just got stabbed a little once, that's it
Ooyama: You have such survival power!?

Page 32:
Ooyama: Does it have to do with that friend that stabbed you in the eyes earlier?
Ooyama: It's better of to cut off relations with that girl!
Hinata: No, no, it's not like that. It was another person.
Ooyama: It's the third time. You have such survival power!? It's really too dangerous by your side!!
Hinata: Okay, okay. But isn't it a little fun with this kind of excitement?
Hinata: Although I was laughing at your concern, I'm giving you this gift I got for surviving
Ooyama: That kind of charged (literally: fiery or strong, regarding being a gift for Hinata surviving), I don't want it... Wow! It's nattou!!
Ooyama: It's my favorite! Thanks!!
Hinata: Oh - villager A is happy. Maybe I've triggered a special event and he'll give me some kind of item.
Ooyama: Villager A what? An item what?
Hinata: It's like this world is a game. It's got that kind of feeling.

Page 33:
Ooyama: A game?
Ooyama: This world is a game?
Ooyama: Given that, then how do we exit this world?
Hinata: ... eh?
Ooyama: Let's go take a bath. Today we'll go together. I'll wait for you!
Hinata: Wrong wrong wrong!! Wait wait wait!!

Page 34:
Hinata: Ooyama!? Do you know anything about this world?
Ooyama: Eh? You don't know anything? It feels like this is probably the afterlife.
Hinata (in a box): Yurippe
Hinata: You were once also a human?
Ooyama: ? Yeah. As you can see, I'm a human, yeah?
Hinata (in a box): A new companion is unexpectedly in such a nearby place
Ooyama: Though I've died already
Hinata (in a box): (is there)
(probably better off splitting off "existing in such a nearby place" to the second box, the above is very literally what was written.)

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Old 2010-07-16, 15:57   Link #45
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Its almost done Im kinda confused in the last page I dont know if the heat is killing me and I cant think clearly xD but theres a missing dialogue in the last page
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Old 2010-07-16, 19:08   Link #46
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In the last bubble Ooyama says "Though I've died already."

PS. Anyone got the Japanese raw for 4koma chap8? I'd love to have it. That chapter deserves to be scanlated.
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Old 2010-07-16, 19:16   Link #47
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In the last bubble Ooyama says "Though I've died already."

PS. Anyone got the Japanese raw for 4koma chap8? I'd love to have it. That chapter deserves to be scanlated.
Oops, I missed that, fixed.
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Old 2010-07-16, 20:32   Link #48
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And its done. The Chapter 4 of Heaven's Door
MACVazquez no Fansub, translated by icyhandofcrap

Spoiler for Manga:

Hope you like it
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Old 2010-07-19, 09:10   Link #49
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Arigatou...

Hinata is so cute trying to protect Yurippe when both of them cant die LOL

PS:^Your signature has only "no" as romanji LOL you should use Japanese "no" so it will look better! "の"
   or you want your signature to be readable for those who doesn't understand Japanese?
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Old 2010-07-22, 06:54   Link #50
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Wow, the manga is good. I hope more is coming out soon. How often does it come out?
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Old 2010-07-23, 01:40   Link #51
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I also wonder when it comes out but who knows? XD

About the signature yeah it is for people who doesnt know japanese can read it, besides i dont know much japanese maybe "の" and the numbers are the only kanjis I know
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Old 2010-07-23, 11:49   Link #52
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It's on the monthly Dengeki G mag.
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Old 2010-07-23, 20:20   Link #53
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And its done. The Chapter 4 of Heaven's Door
MACVazquez no Fansub, translated by icyhandofcrap

Hope you like it
where can we download your work?
thanks!
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Old 2010-07-23, 20:54   Link #54
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Did anyone ever end up translating the 4-komas?
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Old 2010-07-23, 22:24   Link #55
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Can't find the raws for the 4koma so can't do much~
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Old 2010-07-24, 02:08   Link #56
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where can we download your work?
thanks!
Here it is http://www.megaupload.com/?d=2B3LO3MM
Im glad you liked it


By the way I saw this manga on tenmanga and mangafox I dont mind if you post it anywhere else just give the credits to the ones who made it and this is not "MAC no Fansub" thats another fansub
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Old 2010-08-12, 01:21   Link #57
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RAW chapter 5

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Old 2010-08-12, 02:09   Link #58
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Is it time for my shitty translations again? We'll see how my work schedule goes.
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Old 2010-08-12, 02:12   Link #59
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Just by seeing the RAW I'm gonna enjoy what Yurripe will say when someone translates it
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Old 2010-08-12, 02:51   Link #60
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Got work tomorrow, gotta sleep. I'll try to make this translation flow better instead of being as literal. At least it's only 24 pages.

Page 1:
Sidebar: Finally found a human, but he's resisting completely...!!
Ooyama: Hey, hey! Hinata-san!!
Ooyama: Where are you taking me?
Hinata: To my companion, of course
Ooyama: Is it that violent friend!? I don't want to go! I don't want to go!
Hinata: Don't worry, don't worry *musically*
Ooyama: No!! Help me!!

Page 2:
Sidebar: As Hinata is enjoying a period of quiet - he always has KEY coffee to keep him company

Page 3:
Yuri: Who's this person?
Hinata: I found him! A new companion.
Hinata: You've met him before, yeah? My dormmate, Ooyama-san.
Hinata: This person actually is like us, a human!!
Ooyama: *quick exhale*

Page 4:
Yuri: He really is unusually timid... he can't be an ordinary student
Yuri: He's shaking so pitifully... he's obviously thinking of the memories before he died...
Hinata: No, Yurippe
Hinata: He's afraid of you.
Yuri: You're joking, right?
Hinata: No, really

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