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Old 2008-10-25, 15:37   Link #41
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@ Langus...Morbid? Did you not kill Orihime in your fanfic?
True, Orihime died in Shaken but I didn't include any graphic reference as to what happened to kill her. I just found the sword through her gut and blood coming out of her mouth as she talked to be a bit gore-ey for my liking. But part of being a writer is accepting that you can't possibly please everyone with what you put to paper. It's hard reading negative criticism sometimes (and believe me, I've had my fair share) but it's what happens after that counts. Do you let it get you down and stop writing, or do you take it in, evaluate what's useful from what isn't and continue to grow from there?
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Old 2008-10-25, 15:50   Link #42
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True, Orihime died in Shaken but I didn't include any graphic reference as to what happened to kill her. I just found the sword through her gut and blood coming out of her mouth as she talked to be a bit gore-ey for my liking. But part of being a writer is accepting that you can't possibly please everyone with what you put to paper. It's hard reading negative criticism sometimes (and believe me, I've had my fair share) but it's what happens after that counts. Do you let it get you down and stop writing, or do you take it in, evaluate what's useful from what isn't and continue to grow from there?
I get your point. You are a great fan fic writer so I appreciate all your tips. I will take what you all said and use it as guideline. It was only supposed to be a thin line of blood. When you are near death or dying you begin to bleed from your orifices. I was trying to be realistic. But I guess it was too realistic. ...You wouldn't happen to have a copy of "Fanfiction for dummies" lying around ?
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Old 2008-10-25, 16:47   Link #43
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Don't forget that it's just MY opinion. Someone else reading your fic might absolutely love the realism of the blood dripping from her mouth. Don't take what I say as the be all end all hahaha If you like it that way, keep it that way. In the end, you need to write what feels right for YOU Just keep at it and happy writing!
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Old 2008-10-25, 20:41   Link #44
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@ Langus...Morbid? Did you not kill Orihime in your fanfic? I didn't write out his whole name? Wow I am so used to abbreviating I didn't even notice that.

Thanks for the CC...it was my first try and I wrote on whim. I thought he talked to long and to much. I actually deleted parts of it.

But since Ulquiorra is emo-static, he is like a Blank page... You can keep him in character or add dimensions to his character. I wanted to take him to a place where he is begining to feel something other than curiosity and I wanted him to show it. . I wanted him to profess feelings that would seem like love, while he denies it. Because he's has pride and I am sure he would downplay Orihime's importance. I also made him state out loud all things Kubo has had him think about Orihime. I also wanted to show how much Orihime's being hurt disturbed him enough that he was OOC and talked to his enemy.

I didn't elaborate on the fight because he has not released yet, nor did the actual battle happen yet... and the fight was not the main focus of the story. His desire to keep Orihime was.

@Hari...You are right It was a bit messy but it was my first try and that was my rough draft. I didn't have the confidence to continue without opinions on it.
I used the words "Sonido" Because Arrancar use that instead of "Shun Po" (Flash step) I also attempted to inject humor like KT does during tense moments. "Moshi Moshi...is Hello?" but I felt the word "Hello" wouldn't work so I used the Japanese words. Next time I will try to use the english words if it fits or provide the translations.

@Amir...I agree with Monir. I read a lot of romance novels and sometimes perfect grammar does take a backseat to great storytelling.

sorry about the mess...it was my first try. Now I am scared to do the continuation

I appreciate all the tips and CC. I don't feel bad I am glad you guys gave me the advice. Thanks!

The next one will actually be an internal monologue...on his part.
I understand what you want to do with Uliquiorra, but just out-right stating his feelings seems a bit OOC, and makes the reader feel awkward (well, it made me feel that way). Don't feel discouraged~ you should have seen my first drafts; grammar and tense mistakes EVERYWHERE. My beta nearly cried.
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Old 2008-12-24, 08:12   Link #45
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Alrighty - I took a stab at Renji x Rukia with a bit of implied Ichigo x Rukia in the mix. Let me know what you guys think.

Merry Christmas everyone

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4738986/1/Confession
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Old 2010-07-26, 12:58   Link #46
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Boy, this thread has been dead for a long while! It took me a while to find it.

I suppose it won't be seen as thread necromancy to put this here, right? I mean, it's prefered to making another thread on the subject, isn't it?

Anyway, this is a crackfic piece I just wrote for another forum. I thought it could be amusing for someone here too.



Spoiler for Warning! Extreme crack ahead! Suggestive themes, too!:
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Old 2010-08-05, 01:27   Link #47
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I've had an idea for a Bleach fic for a while now. It actually involved Ichigo, Inoue, Ulq, and Hell. After finishing my current fic (who know when that'll be ) I want to make this my next project. I suppose this post can be a reminder to myself if I was to somehow forget.
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Old 2010-08-05, 17:04   Link #48
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I suck at fanfics. No, seriously. But for some reason i can't stop writing them once in a while. Maybe eventually i could get better.

Will post something if i ever come up with any.
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Old 2010-08-06, 16:40   Link #49
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Heres a fanfic that makes you LOL so hard you cough up a lung
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5065809/1/
I LUV THIS FANFIC!! (mostly cause im in it)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5988061/...bMy_b_bHeart_b
This is so sad but its IchixRuki!!!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4324979/...s_bSacrifice_b
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Old 2010-09-30, 17:13   Link #50
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6332964/...ching_DarknessAnd here is a Bleach fanfic being wrote by a very good friend of mine

Sorry for the double post
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Old 2010-09-30, 21:34   Link #51
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You could just edit you know to avoid double posting
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Old 2010-10-12, 20:27   Link #52
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One story that I read on FanFiction is a story called Gypsy my Gypsy. Its a IchixRuki and its really good!!! I think its by boston_terrier24??? Not sure..
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Old 2010-10-12, 20:49   Link #53
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This is one that is 130 chapters long
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4400784/1/Inner_Hollow
and I am on chapter 8
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Old 2011-01-15, 06:24   Link #54
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not a writer myself, but a reader


just in case anyone on God's green Earth has not read this yet - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3505858/1/Uninvited_Guests .. this man deserves a Nobel Prize for this fic .. AND it's good for Hitsu-haters AND Hitsu-lovers simultaneously .. but really, it's just a crack-fic with plot! that'll make you chuckle every few lines



another ongoing - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6412294/...das_Masquerade .. Starrk (with Lilynette), Halibel, Ulquiorra, Grimmy and an OC espada Tyn (very well done) survive the winter war (Aizen's dead) and .. live in the human world in gigai's (Urahara + Ichigo & Co. helped em out) like 'normal' humans, low-paying jobs and all .. and it's awesome .. features a Tia pairing (eventually) .. a sort of prequel by the same author (not really necessary to read for the sequel, but it's a good read as well) deals with an OC shinigami, his experiences and Neliel in SS



short and funny one-shot about captain auditions - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3565234/1/Next (other Bleach fics of this author are well done too)



http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5591380/...ack_Reflection - Bleach + Fate/Stay Night x-over .. well written, features Rider on the Karakura guys side



http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5982232/...ll_Butterflies - funny, random and crackish





http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5146491/...ing_Vasto_Lord - this one I haven't read myself yet, but plan to .. if someone has read, maybe some thoughts ?
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Old 2011-03-19, 19:39   Link #55
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Heres a very good Bleach fanfic baced around a series of Oc's but i have to admit this is the best fanfics ive read in a while, the first 2 stories are a bit shaky i admit but that helps you get to know the charaters. Is more recent chapters far surpass anything kubo could write and there is no trolling. he comes up with original spicies and it dosent feel like its recycled badguys like kubo dose. its fresh, original and a great read
there are about 4 books (thats what there grouped into) and have between 15 to 30 chapters in each one
there is great charater devolment. apart from the first few chapters the is nothing but pure gold in these stories I would seriously recommend you read them
heres the prologue to story no.1 "The coven" written in first person
http://drazoniandeath.deviantart.com...t=120#/d2rwstb
the writer has also commisioned a large amount of fabulos (and expensive) artwork
here is some of them
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Old 2011-04-03, 03:20   Link #56
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I've just being an author for fun and I love to write rate M for IchiRuki.
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Old 2011-04-03, 04:39   Link #57
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That's the best attitude to have. Keep at it!
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Old 2011-04-10, 00:19   Link #58
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Hello, Bleach Thread. My name is Hagoshod (it's "Shagohod" with some of the letters switched around), and I'm interested in writing a one-shot Bleach fanfic where Orihime turns into a full Arrancar and slaughters Ichigo and his crew when they come to rescue her from that Spanish-sounding place.

The problem is, I have never seen a single episode of Bleach in my entire life. I just like Orihime for her character design and her happy, derpy personality.

Do you have any suggestions? I don't want to watch 300+ episodes of something just so I know how to write a standard corruption story, so please try to be realistic.
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Old 2011-04-10, 00:28   Link #59
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Hahaha!

Are you being serious? What exactly do you want to know? Personalities? Storyline? A wiki page would probably be sufficient if you're not even going to look at the series.
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Old 2011-04-10, 00:50   Link #60
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Are you being serious?
Yes, I'm being serious.

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What exactly do you want to know? Personalities? Storyline?
I suppose I just need a basic outline of the particular story arc my fanfic will be based it. I want to keep it simple, so Ichigo and Rukia will probably be the only characters mentioned by name during the botched rescue attempt.
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