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Old 2010-08-12, 22:13   Link #61
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Well looks like I have work to do
By the way on page 3 what does ooyama says (last bubble)?
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Old 2010-08-13, 03:03   Link #62
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Ack, hard idiom on the last line. I mean it basically means he's terrified of her.

Page 5:
Yuri: Huh!? How could he be so afraid of me that's he's become like this!?
Yuri: He's like a mouse facing a cat!! What reason would there be to become like that!?
Hinata: I just told him the truth about you and he became like that
Yuri: Haaaah!?
Yuri: *Cough*
Yuri: Even though I don't know what kind of hogwash that oaf told you, but don't worry
Yuri: I'm your friend!
Ooyama: Waaaah!
Ooyama: I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Save me!!

Page 6:
Ooyama: I'm afraid of your violent tendencies like stabbing people in the eye with chopsticks and shooting guns, and so on!! I'm sorry!!
Yuri: ...
Yuri: Hinata-san
Yuri: ISN'T THIS ALL YOUR FAULT!?
Ooyama: Waah! Hinata-san!!
Sign: Nurse's
Hinata: ... Eh!

Page 7:
Yuri: Your roommate ran off
Hinata: Of course!!
Hinata: He just saw his roommate being kicked off the roof! Anyone would run!!
Yuri: Didn't I already say you won't die? Anyways, isn't this all your fault? Describing me as a violent girl?
Hinata: But isn't that the truth...?
Yuri: Okay, anyways, why don't you quickly fetch him again?
Yuri: Just tell him in this world you can't die. Falling off the roof gave me such an indescribable delight, making my whole body feel relaxed and comfortable. Yurippe is the best!
Hinata: Don't make me sound like a weirdo. Also, he's already scared of you to the point where it's left a shadow of fear on his mind.

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Old 2010-08-13, 20:51   Link #63
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OK Its done till page 7
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Old 2010-08-13, 20:54   Link #64
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Quote:
Yuri: Even though I don't know what kind of hogwash that oaf told you, but don't worry
Yuri: I'm your friend!
Ooyama: Waaaah!
Ooyama: I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Save me!!
This is hilarious
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Old 2010-08-14, 03:28   Link #65
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Need to sleep. I've given up on editing to make it flow better. I was right on my guess where I had no idea!

Page 8:
Yuri: Eh? You're saying something so unpleasant. But I'm so gentle.
Yuri: Just advise him that he should join us in getting revenge against God.
Hinata: You can't really say that's a gentle approach
Yuri: Oh it's gentle. Otherwise he won't be able to be with you anymore.
Hinata: You've gone too far
Hinata: How do I explain this to her? This person is missing some important pieces inside her
Hinata: No matter what I say I always end up getting beat up
Hinata: If this were a game, there would probably be these options. And then things would be easy...

Options:
Give Yurippe an explanation
Do whatever Yurippe wants
Give Yurippe a tight hug

Page 9:
Hinata: There's no way I'd do the last one!!
Yuri: Hey! Snap out of it (why are you in a daze?)
Yuri: If you want to help me, quickly go find him.
Yuri: You're really useless!
Hinata: ... Yurippe
Hinata: You... if you keep being like this no one is going to want to follow you

Page 10:
Yuri: ... what? Are you preaching to me now?
Hinata: ... didn't mean it like that. In order to accomplish the goal of revenge against God, we need more companions
Hinata: If we only have two people, not even considering God, we aren't able to put up a resistance against Tenshi, so...
Yuri: I know! That's why I told you to quickly go find him, isn't it?
Hinata: You're way too overbearing! I don't know how to but describe it in words... but anyways you're way too overbearing!
Yuri: So what? In this afterlife, no matter how you get hurt you'll immediately be fine
Hinata: ... so if you continue being like this, no one is giong to want to follow you...
Hinata: Ooyama or anyone else won't want to be your companion

Page 11:
Hinata: You're not as capable as you think you are
Yuri: ...
Hinata: So, if it's only you, you won't be able to achieve anything, so companions are definitely necessary. Although with you as you are now, you won't be able to find any companions!
Hinata: Don't just think of your goal. To find companions you need to think of various aspects
Hinata: Otherwise you'll just be an isolated force fighting by yourself bitterly.
Yuri: ...
Yuri: I get it
Hinata: Yurippe!
Yuri: Enough!

Page 12:
Yuri: Let's disband!
Hinata: How can you be like this? No way!
Yuri: I only have to say I don't want to. I've already said I don't want to be with you anymore!
Hinata: No! I've already decided that I would always be with you!
Yuri: Eh? That's disgusting! You're like a stalker!
Yuri: I don't need any companions. Just myself is enough.
Yuri: That's how I've always gotten by

Page 13:
Yuri: Bye!
Yuri: Farewell!
Hinata: Yurippe...
Hinata: ...
Hinata: ... shit
Hinata: Although... I was only stating the truth, right? Even though I've gotten myself disliked.

Page 14:
Hinata (bar): That girl should have at least understood at little of what I was talking about, right?
Hinata: Oh! Ooyama!
Ooyama: Ah! Hinata-san, you're okay, right?
Hinata: Haha, I'm fine, I'm fine! I've already died once so in this world no matter how I'm injured I'm immediately fine again.
Ooyama: ... Hinata-san's also already dead? ... That's so sad
Hinata: ... you're really a good guy

Page 15:
Ooyama: Hinata-san, you sacrificed yourself to let me me escape... and you're surprisingly friends with that girl. You're pretty awesome.
Hinata: ... ah... don't flatter me
Hinata: It looks like I'm not friends with her anymore
Ooyama: Eh? ... did you guys have a fight?
Hinata: Yeah, we split up
Ooyama: ... really...
Ooyama: So that's why you have such a long face
Hinata: ... it's not because of that
Hinata: .... ah. I'm alone again. What should I do?
Ooyama: Don't you still have me?
Hinata: Ah, right. I forgot.
Ooyama: Eh? That's too much

Page 16:
Ooyama: Aren't I right in front of your eyes? Seriously!
Hinata: Hahaha, sorry, sorry
Hinata: ... Ooyama, what do you want to do now? Straighten out your feelings?
Ooyama: The-the physiology of fe-feelings? (note: Ooyama misheard what Hinata said)
Ooyama: There's the physiology of feelings? I didn't know that!!
Hinata: No... not physiology, sorting out your feelings
Ooyama: Wah! I've made such an embarrassing mistake!
Ooyama: Although, what do you mean straigtening out my feelings?
Hinata: Ah, right. You still don't know anything about this world. This world exists to allow us dead people to remember the pains we had before we died
Hinata: Sorting out our feelings will allow us to reach heaven
Ooyama: Ah! So that's what it's like?

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Old 2010-08-14, 03:35   Link #66
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Options:
Give Yurippe an explanation
Do whatever Yurippe wants
Give Yurippe a tight hug
*Chooses option 3*

Quote:
Yuri: Eh? That's disgusting! You're like a stalker!
Yuri: I don't need any companions. Just myself is enough.
Yuri: That's how I've always gotten by
You gotta love Yuri's Tsundere traits sometimes (she seems a whole lot different from the anime)
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Old 2010-08-14, 22:47   Link #67
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Going to go watch Spirited Away, will finish later.

Page 17:
Hinata: But your life shouldn't have been so complicated that you would need to sort out your feelings, right? ...
Ooyama: Sorting out my feelings, eh?
Ooyama: Hmm..
Hinata: Hang on, who are you!? You're playing a character like this? Where did the real Ooyama go!? Give me back my cute Ooyama, you bastard!!
Ooyama: Wha-what? Hinata-san?
Ooyama: Although, regarding sorting out my feelings... it really is irrelevant to me (don't feel like doing it, from novel translation)
Ooyama: Life is always full of hardships, yeah?

Page 18:
Ooyama: How about you, Hinata-san? Do you think you are able to sort out your feelings?
Hinata: Me? Don't mind me. It's my business.
Ooyama: Eh?
Ooyama: Then my business doesn't matter either, right?
Hinata: That's no good!
Hinata: My personality is such that I won't leave my friends alone if they have problems
Ooyama: ... Hinata-san, you're like the protagonist (of a game).
Ooyama: One person alone solving everyone's problems, rescuing everyone
Ooyama: Such a friend, if I had one... that would be great

Page 19:
Hinata: You have one now, don't you?
Ooyama: Eh?
Hinata: We're already friends, right?
Hinata: Weren't you the one that said it first?
Ooyama: Hinata-san...
Ooyama: Haha, it really seems like I've fallen into a game world. Hinata-san is the main character, and I'm the annoying villager A
Hinata: Stupid! Since we're friends, we're a team. So we'll go on an adventure together!
Ooyama: Then my class will be a monk
Hinata: That's too dull! Be a swordsman!
Ooyama: Don't we already have a swordsman?

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Old 2010-08-14, 22:57   Link #68
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Partway through 19, going to go watch Spirited Away.

Hinata: Hang on, who are you!? You're playing a character like this? Where did the real Ooyama go!? Give me back my cute Ooyama, you bastard!!
Ooyama: Wha-what? Hinata-san?
That was just random but hilarious

Quote:
Hinata: That's no good!
Hinata: My personality is such that I won't leave my friends alone if they have problems
For some reason I would like a friend like that also

Thank you for translating these icyhandofcrap.
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Old 2010-08-15, 03:31   Link #69
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I am unable to determine the first character of Ooyama's magic spell. I will go find a more fluent Chinese speaker.

Page 20:
Ooyama: 'Hundred Man Beheading'? Or maybe 'Hundred Men Kick'?
Ooyama: A very valiant swordswoman
Ooyama: That girl, surely she's also our companion, right?
Ooyama: She's definitely deeply distressed

Page 21:
Ooyama: A game's main character and his companions will occasionally have a conflict and be overcritical of each other. Although -
Ooyama: In the end the main character and his companions will definitely unite to go on their endless journey
Ooyama: So -
Ooyama: Right now, being alone, is definitely only a transitory period

Page 22:
Ooyama: That girl will become our companion again, right?
Hinata (I think): Being by yourself in this world is just too lonely
Hinata: ...
Hinata: But would she reach out and grab my hand again?
Hinata: I'm sure to encounter another crisis. Can I ask monk Ooyama to cast a super strong defensive magic on me?
Ooyama: Hey! Recovery spell!!

Page 23:
Ooyama: With this you'll be OK
Hinata: Although that felt like it was only a simple recovery magic,
Hinata: Nevertheless, thanks, monk Ooyama
Hinata: I'll be right back
Hinata: Right!
Hinata: I've realized, coming to this world
Hinata: Because of Yurippe I've never felt lonely

Page 24:
Hinata: Didn't I decide before
Hinata: That I wouldn't let her isolate herself?
Hinata: That I wouldn't ever let her feel lonely?
Hinata: But then how did I let myself become alone...
Hinata: Wait, wait for me! Yurippe!

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Old 2010-08-15, 14:37   Link #70
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OK if im not busy today it will be ready around 9 or 10 o clock
Page 10 Im not sure I can split the dialogue in all the bubbles but I think theres a lot of words missing
But I dont really know so check that please
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Old 2010-08-15, 15:22   Link #71
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Oh, the last bubble for Ooyama on page 3 is like a quick exhale or pant.
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Old 2010-08-15, 16:52   Link #72
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Oh, the last bubble for Ooyama on page 3 is like a quick exhale or pant.
Oh dint see you post well look up XD
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Old 2010-08-15, 17:03   Link #73
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Oh dint see you post well look up XD
Oh crap I am missing a panel.
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All the way from Page 20-24

I could never understand what they are trying to put by saying stuff like "spells" and etc
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Old 2010-08-15, 17:11   Link #75
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Page 10 is fixed.
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Old 2010-08-15, 17:12   Link #76
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All the way from Page 20-24

I could never understand what they are trying to put by saying stuff like "spells" and etc
I think it's a continuation on the idea that they are stuck in a game world.
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Old 2010-08-15, 18:50   Link #77
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Good to go till page 15
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Old 2010-08-15, 22:35   Link #78
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I am unable to determine the first character of Ooyama's magic spell. I will go find a more fluent Chinese speaker.

Ooyama: Hey! *SOMETHING* recovery skill!!
The 治愈术 part? You've got it, just "recovery skill/spell" is fine. Sumisora's got a ver out too if you need reference, though better still if someone could find the Japanese raw.
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Old 2010-08-15, 22:39   Link #79
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The 治愈术 part? You've got it, just "recovery skill/spell" is fine. Sumisora's got a ver out too if you need reference, though better still if someone could find the Japanese raw.
Thanks. I checked with my parents to figure it out.

Ah, where does Sumisora release their manga?

(Darn I thought they were an English sub group. I still think it's funny I'm the fastest translator even though I require heavy use of a dictionary.)
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Sumisora's JS archive. They are Chinese only.
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