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Old 2010-08-23, 12:16   Link #26681
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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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Old 2010-08-23, 12:20   Link #26682
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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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Old 2010-08-23, 12:24   Link #26683
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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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Somehow I can no longer remember the angst from the original one
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Old 2010-08-23, 12:25   Link #26684
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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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I just couldn't stop laughing when I read that it was just so, so - i don't know how to describe it. Plus I love those specials.
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Old 2010-08-23, 12:32   Link #26685
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Um... Sorry that it's basically canon again.
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Old 2010-08-23, 13:36   Link #26686
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Somehow I can no longer remember the angst from the original one
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Old 2010-08-23, 13:52   Link #26687
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I meant her size I don't think Fate's gonna be the only one resized

Wait. Agito-->Fire, Rein Zwei-->Ice, Fate-->......Lightning? Nice...
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Old 2010-08-23, 15:09   Link #26688
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Sorry about the MASSIVE delay.

Rising Dragon, my pre-reader, had some major RL problems (he can tell you if he wants to), so, it's understandable.

Previous chapters can be found via my sig.

Day in the Life

Chapter 38

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Some corrections in the quote.

Certainly an action packed chapter and ends on yet another cliffhanger The mini-boss squad seems to have been taken down a bit too easily, but maybe that's just to lull us into a false sense of security.

Well, keep up the good work.

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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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Haha! Next thing you know Fate'll be pulling out Nanoha's hair and telling her to go bald

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Um... Sorry that it's basically canon again.
You showed things differently, so reusing canon events is fine. Now to wait and see how things change further.
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Old 2010-08-23, 15:32   Link #26689
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Escape Part IV is now up on FF.Net
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Old 2010-08-23, 19:21   Link #26690
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So between my other stuff, I did manage to squeeze this one out, if only because I wanted to get some dark thoughts out of my head. Yes, this fic has some dark twists pertaining to Hayate's past. No, deathcurse hasn't cornered the market on giving Hayate a hard time Wasn't quite sure where I was gonna take this idea, but it managed to drag me along instead

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Old 2010-08-23, 19:43   Link #26691
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So between my other stuff, I did manage to squeeze this one out, if only because I wanted to get some dark thoughts out of my head. Yes, this fic has some dark twists pertaining to Hayate's past. No, deathcurse hasn't cornered the market on giving Hayate a hard time Wasn't quite sure where I was gonna take this idea, but it managed to drag me along instead

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Great, now I feel depressed (which also mean you did a great job with the mood of this). Going to read some happy stories now to counter this.
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Old 2010-08-23, 20:27   Link #26692
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Raiser: Nice to see that you took some risks there with your take on her background. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 2010-08-23, 20:30   Link #26693
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Nice to see Fate getting some care and affection .

The last line wasn't as nice as the rest, it seemed pretty odd to me . A lot more "telling" than "showing" there...

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And now, everyone's favorite socially inept Number continues her mission to find out what her mission is!

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FF.net link right here. Hopefully this one won't get boned by the site.
Very amusing!

I'm eager to see what comes about after this, such as how Cinque is going to convince Sette to have a normal life XD.

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Sorry about the MASSIVE delay.

Rising Dragon, my pre-reader, had some major RL problems (he can tell you if he wants to), so, it's understandable.

Previous chapters can be found via my sig.

Day in the Life

Chapter 38

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Nice action-packed chapter. I admit, I love the first guard of Nanohaverse, so seeing the new, younger characters come in to save the day isn't quite my thing . Nonetheless, it's nice to see the Numbers and the ex-Forwards getting some spotlight.

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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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LOL, Nanoha gets her revenge, eh? XDDDD I wondered for a moment where it was going, as I doubted that you were going to make Fate a familiar, but the ending was still a surprise .

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Um... Sorry that it's basically canon again.
Yay, Amy and Lindy! It's nice to see more of what Amy might have been thinking about Chrono .

A general comment, can you please label each part more clearly? It's hard to keep track of which part is where, and such... Numbering the sections would be nice !

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So between my other stuff, I did manage to squeeze this one out, if only because I wanted to get some dark thoughts out of my head. Yes, this fic has some dark twists pertaining to Hayate's past. No, deathcurse hasn't cornered the market on giving Hayate a hard time Wasn't quite sure where I was gonna take this idea, but it managed to drag me along instead

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Er, nice to see that I'm inspiring more Hayate darkfics! More seriously, this is pretty grim, but keeping out of the melodramatic angst territory .

Hayate's mental thoughts were written really well, still keeping her relatively determined and optimistic while adding that more serious, grimmer side to her.

I loved the ending, it was humourous and very in character. It does let this potentially very emotionally downer story become more optimistic at the end ^^.
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Old 2010-08-23, 22:57   Link #26694
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A small one-shot, simply because DC's fic had me thinking.... and that's never a good thing...

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Nice one-shot I can just picture Fate stabbing a mini version of Bardiche in Zamber mode into Nanoha's head.
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Old 2010-08-23, 23:09   Link #26695
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Does this mean we can have yandere!Yuuno staring at them from behind corners?
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Old 2010-08-23, 23:29   Link #26696
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Does this mean we can have yandere!Yuuno staring at them from behind corners?
I was just wondering who could play that role, shame we've got no one to stare at him from behind corners. Or maybe we could have a chain of yandere stalkers all the way down the road.
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Old 2010-08-24, 01:22   Link #26697
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So between my other stuff, I did manage to squeeze this one out, if only because I wanted to get some dark thoughts out of my head. Yes, this fic has some dark twists pertaining to Hayate's past. No, deathcurse hasn't cornered the market on giving Hayate a hard time Wasn't quite sure where I was gonna take this idea, but it managed to drag me along instead

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Old 2010-08-24, 01:46   Link #26698
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I'm calling this part 10.

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Hooray for screwing with canon!
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Old 2010-08-24, 01:57   Link #26699
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I'm calling this part 10.

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Hooray for screwing with canon!
Hm, interesting... Though I admit I'd like to have seen what would happen if they refused to give up a Jewel Seed and Yuuno got taken back as a hostage until they changed their minds. Having Yuuno hang out with the Testarossa family would be fun

Oh well, let's see what Alicia will do now.
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Yuuno, taken back by Linith as a hostage, finds himself helping out with the Testarossas. In meeting Alicia and observing Precia's condition, he recognizes something! In his wealth of knowledge procured by numerous days in the field and hours upon hours of studying, Yuuno manages to develop a treatment for Precia that does not require the Jewel Seeds!

Suddenly, Alicia decides that she really likes this guy. Too bad he's too young.

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