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Old 2010-09-11, 00:49   Link #101
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Yeah I also want it but we have to wait for icihandofcrap
And I was kinda busy with school's homeworks XD so I didn't look for the raw I just checked a few times here
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Old 2010-09-11, 06:49   Link #102
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Well, since everyone wants to get this chapter translated, i have translated some pages, and might do the rest over the weekend. I used the same format as the other translator.

Page3 :
Hinata: Crap(something along those lines)
Hinata: Where did Yuri run off to?
Hinata: There is no way that wild girl will quietly abide with the rules
Hinata: Certainly, she must be somewhere causing complete chaos

Page 4:
Hinata: You see!
Hinata: Finding her is as easy as finding a shiny beautiful bead on a tranquil beach at night
Hinata: Inside?
Yuri: Hurry! Spit out everything in full detail

Page 5:
Yuri: Where is the mastermind behind this world?
Yuri: where are we actually being observed?
Tenshi: I don’t know
Yuri: if you don’t say it to me clearly, I will not let go!
Yuri: And this kind of trouble will be very difficult for you to end
Tenshi: This is not true…
Yuri: what, are you planning on using that weapon to stab me down?
Yuri: What do you think that kind of forceful violence will be able to solve?
Tenshi: You should also ask yourself that

Page 6:
Yuri: how about I give you a taste of the pain of death…
Hinata: the hell?
Hinata: She totally lost her reasoning
Hinata: is it because I was no longer by her side that it caused such a big blow to her?
Hinata: hey hey, Yuri stop…
Teachers: Hey! What are you doing?

Page 7:
Yuri: huh?
Yuri: Don’t disturb me! I have a few things I need to talk about with this student council president
Teacher: on the contrary, all I see you doing is bullying a fellow student.
Yuri: She’s not human
Yuri: She is an angel that wields unique powers. If I don’t do this, then we will not be able to talk on equal ground
Teacher: What you’re saying make no sense. Come to the teaching guidance room and then give me an explanation.
Yuri: Do what! Let go
Teacher: Behave yourself!
Yuri: You…

Page 8
Yuri: On what basis do I need to behave!!
Yuri: you morons
Yuri: What right do you have to offer teaching guidance to humans? Morons
Yuri: Can you understand human emotions! Morons
Yuri: need me.. to behave?
Yuri: You morons understand my humanity as crumpled nonsense.
Yuri: You morons are the ones behaving unreasonably
Yuri: let me go! Move aside! Let me though! Everyone get away from me!

Page 9:
Hinata: Yuri
Tenshi:..
Teacher: You brat, respect your elders

Page 10:
Yuri: …
Yuri: What? Now it is your turn to appear!! Let me go!!
Hinata: I won’t
Yuri: Why not!!

Not really exprienced in translating Chinese to English, so it might have some issues. I tried to make it that the dialogue could be easily understood.
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Old 2010-09-11, 21:01   Link #103
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Thank you very much Attoney!
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Old 2010-09-11, 23:49   Link #104
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Hey, someone else has started! Nice.

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Old 2010-09-12, 00:51   Link #105
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Which means, translations!

Page 12:
Hinata: I understand what you're trying to say
Hinata: I understand your feelings
Yuri: ... you understand?
Yuri: You...
Yuri: Don't you say that so easily!

Page 13:
Hinata: Don't...
Hinata: Don't be so worried, Yurippe... Please calm down...
Hinata: I'll stand by your side. I've already decided to not let you be alone
Yuri: You... what are you scheming!?
Hinata: Don't be so worried
Hinata: Yurippe
Hinata: You already don't have to worry anymore
Hinata: Relax, Yurippe

Page 14:
Yuri: You...
Yuri: You...
Yuri: What are you hugging me for, you bastard!

Page 15:
Hinata: Shit! This hurts!
Hinata: She really doesn't hold her strength back
Hinata: If it weren't for Ooyama's cure magic I would have already lost consciousness
Hinata: However, I can't pass out, otherwise I would let Yurippe would become alone again
Hinata: I don't want that to happen
Hinata: Anyone would dislike being alone
Hinata: I'm like that

Page 16:
Hinata: You're like that too, right?
Yuri: *pant* *pant*
Yuri: *pant* why... why are you still smiling? Do you think you're cool?
Yuri: You suck! You suck! There's no one in this world that sucks more than you!
Hinata: ... there's already nothing to worry about, right Yurippe?
Hinata: There's nothing to worry about

Page 17:
Hinata: I'm sorry for letting you be alone
Hinata: Next time don't go off fighting alone
Yuri: Don't be an idiot...
Yuri: Idiot...
Tenshi: It's about time you forgave him

Page 18:
Yuri: Eh? Forgive him? Why?
Tenshi: Even if you're angry, you still shouldn't vent it on your companions
Tenshi: Sorry
Tenshi: It seems like you've become my scapegoat
Yuri: Hey, hey, what are you talking about?

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Old 2010-09-12, 01:30   Link #106
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Now we have icyhandofcrap, and Attoney probably helping us out with the translation of pages, then we have MACVazquez inserting the translations into the images, this is quite some nice work
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Old 2010-09-12, 04:59   Link #107
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Here is the rest, page 19-30, enjoy!

Page 19:
Tenshi: your assumption is wrong
Yuri: You don’t need to say anything anymore, angel.
Tenshi: Angel?
Yuri: I will use that name to address your existence from now on
Yuri: Let’s go Hinata
Yuri: I will definitely uncovered God from you.

Page 20:
Yuri: I will make careful preparations, Angel
Tenshi:…

Page 21:
Ooyama: Wah, hinata!
Ooyama: You look absolutely terrible!
Hinata: hey?
Ooyama: Wah! Magic, Mystical ward!
Hinata: I think you are using it at the wrong place?
Ooyama: However, it seems like you two have been able to make up. That’s great!
Yuri: Make up? Did you say?
Ooyama: Eh? Weren’t you both having an argument?
Yuri: Huh…what did you say? What is your name?
Ooyama: I’m called Ooyama

Page 22:
Yuri: Ooyama ! Honestly speaking, you don’t need to worry about what happened. Everything was set up to lure you out, so you can join me.
Ooyama: What did you say?
Hinata: its bullshit.
Yuri: because in your state earlier, you did not want to become my comrade, so to encourage you, we created an act.
Ooyama: It kind of make sense….
Yuri: so everything was premeditated.
Yuri: Please become our comrade, Sage Ooyama.
Hinata: Well, you can’t refuse an invitation from the main protagonist.

Page 23:
Ooyama: then what is your name?
Yuri: My name is Yuri
Hinata. However, to strengthen our bond between comrades, please call her Yurippe.
Yuri: Hey! What did you just say!
Ooyama: You’re called Yurippe? That’s so cute. Then I will call you that too, Yurippe.
Yuri: ugh…
Hianta: This is my little payback.
Hinata: You should just give up.
Yuri: You...

Page:24
Hinata: please take care in the future.
Hinata: Yurippe
Yuri:…
Yuri Hinata
Hinata: Hmm

Page 25:
pow!
Hinata: That hurt a lot. Why did you hit me?
Yuri: Who told you to be in front of the captain! Pig head!


Page 26
Hinata: ugh, the bottom of my face is still hurting. (don’t know if this is what it actually means)
Ooyama: Hinata, your face…
Yuri. Hey, there is no one inside the tennis court. Hurry! Let’s get in and start our operational meeting.
Ooyama: Coming!

Page:27
Hinata: I would always want to follow you.
Hinata: Wait for me, Yurippe
Ooyama: So specifically, what do I need to do?
Yuri: revenge against god!

Page 28:
Hinata: When Ooyama became our comrade, he mostly already agreed to our cause(might need to check this, I’m not sure)
Ooyama: If we do that, won’t we incur the judgment of god?
Yuri: Screw the judgment! Who will come to judge us?
Yuri: why should I be at the mercy of others when I have arrived in this world? So, I will use my own power to revolt!
Ooyama: so that’s how it is. So what do we do first?
Yuri: First, we need to have every order in this world that Angel protects

Page 29:
Yuri: To be destroyed
Ooyama: Such brute force!
Hinata: No
Yuri: The final remaining chess piece
Yuri: has come on his own.

Page 30:
Chaa: You guys are quite enjoyable
Chaa: If you don’t want your head blown off
Chaa: then obediently listen to me
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Old 2010-09-12, 15:14   Link #108
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Yuri losing it in school (Which I suppose) and Hinata coming to tell her that its all ok, that he understands the feeling of loneliness, and them going to back to Ooyama and saying that the whole thing they did earlier was an act is funny I'm not sure it was really an act though
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Old 2010-09-12, 21:06   Link #109
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WOW looks like Im late for work XD
Lets see what I can do
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Old 2010-09-12, 23:01   Link #110
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OK Im kinda confused
this is page 8 right?

and i dont think the translation fit here
It could be from page 9

Page 9 is page 10

And page 10 should be page 11
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Old 2010-09-12, 23:44   Link #111
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OK Im kinda confused
this is page 8 right?

and i dont think the translation fit here
It could be from page 9

Page 9 is page 10

And page 10 should be page 11
Yea, you are correct, the raw i translated this from is posted as one big image, so sometimes I can't really tell when the page ends. So i guess i accidently mistook page 8 and 9 as 1 page

Page 8: should be:
Yuri: On what basis do I need to behave!!
Yuri: you morons
Yuri: What right do you have to offer teaching guidance to humans? Morons
Yuri: Can you understand human emotions! Morons

Page 9:
Yuri: need me.. to behave?
Yuri: You morons understand my humanity as crumpled nonsense.
Yuri: You morons are the ones behaving unreasonably
Yuri: let me go! Move aside! Let me though! Everyone get away from me!

page 10
Hinata: Yuri
Tenshi:..
Teacher: You brat, respect your elders

Page 11:
Yuri: …
Yuri: What? Now it is your turn to appear!! Let me go!!
Hinata: I won’t
Yuri: Why not!!

Sorry for the confusion.
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Old 2010-09-13, 00:00   Link #112
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Yeah you missed a page, page 19 then. Also I've renumbered my pages. I got the parental units to help on this.

Page 1:
Looking through the door at Tenshi, with an aura of persistence

Page 2:
Relax! Let's drink a can of KEY coffee

Page 19:
Yuri: You say I'm angry? Like hell I am. I wouldn't lose myself like that in front of you.
Tenshi: Why?
Yuri: Because I'm the captain of the troops seeking revenge on God
Tenshi: ... there's such a thing?
Yuri: Yes, and you unwittingly let it form
Yuri: I've now realized that this world is set up for our comfort
Yuri: There are things that the ordinary students in this world would absolutely never do

Page 20:
Yuri: This world's residents would never reveal anything about the setting of this world. But your existence has revealed some information.
Yuri: This is how you stand out from the rest of the students
Tenshi: ... what you're saying does make sense
Yuri: Won't you smile for me then?
Tenshi: ...
Yuri: Can't do it? Then you aren't a human like us.

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Old 2010-09-13, 00:38   Link #113
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Okay, now i'm kinda confused.

Cause for my page 19-30 translation i used this better raw, which numbered the pages.

http://www.89890.com/comic/9281/6/?1

And it doesn't seem to match.

If we are planning to translate this manga together in the future, i think we should know how each other are organizing the pages to avoid further confusion.
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Old 2010-09-13, 00:58   Link #114
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Okay, now i'm kinda confused.

Cause for my page 19-30 translation i used this better raw, which numbered the pages.

http://www.89890.com/comic/9281/6/?1

And it doesn't seem to match.

If we are planning to translate this manga together in the future, i think we should know how each other are organizing the pages to avoid further confusion.
That raw you linked to is missing two pages after 15.
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Old 2010-09-13, 01:19   Link #115
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Ah, you are right, no wonder i was confused. So that means i translated page 21-32 instead of 19-30.
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Old 2010-09-13, 15:56   Link #116
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This is amazing teamwork by you 3
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Old 2010-09-13, 19:56   Link #117
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OK i'm gonna be extra busy this week
I'll see what I can do this weekend
We should make a real fansub I did MACVazquez no Fansub just for fun
but honestly I'm only copy/pasting XD icyhandofcrap did everything and know Attoney
So is not really my fansub
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Old 2010-09-18, 22:14   Link #118
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Done 'till page 11
Sorry for being so late this time but I've been busy I hope I can made the whole chapter by tomorrow night
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Old 2010-09-19, 00:02   Link #119
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Done 'till page 11
Sorry for being so late this time but I've been busy I hope I can made the whole chapter by tomorrow night
Hope you can also Would like to see this chapter with page and translation
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Old 2010-09-19, 23:48   Link #120
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OK Done till page 18
If I don't have homework tomorrow I'll upload it tomorrow night
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