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Old 2010-09-23, 01:46   Link #27201
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Here's something I've been meaning to write for awhile. It takes place after Vivid chapter 16 and features Lutecia and Erio.

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Fate easy to embarrass, aren`t she? Hmm, what will she do when Erio and Lu decide to go further in their relationship?

Very cute story
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Old 2010-09-23, 02:18   Link #27202
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Posted up Hot Tub to FF.Net.

It's the Erio/Lutecia fluff that I wrote for Raiser.

Also posted up Tempy's Hijack of Due.
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Old 2010-09-23, 11:44   Link #27203
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Nanoha-universe-related snippet from my Naruto/Nanoha/Grand Chase crossover Twin Fates:

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If you want to know what that abstract was, it's here.
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Old 2010-09-23, 12:45   Link #27204
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So... Apparently Erio managing to "tag" Fate in ViVid doesn't count because it wasn't a battle that was done logically and was just meant for fanservice.

(Even though, you know, as an Enforcer, Fate spends a lot of time flying in ships, doing paperwork, sitting at a desk and occasionally going out to fight physically and magically, while Erio, as a "ranger" of sorts, spends his time dealing with magical creatures that are extremely dangerous and (most likely) deals with poachers of these creatures, so he's far more physically active than Fate is.)

So... I gotta make fun of that attitude somehow...

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Old 2010-09-23, 12:59   Link #27205
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So... Apparently Erio managing to "tag" Fate in ViVid doesn't count because it wasn't a battle that was done logically and was just meant for fanservice.

(Even though, you know, as an Enforcer, Fate spends a lot of time flying in ships, doing paperwork, sitting at a desk and occasionally going out to fight physically and magically, while Erio, as a "ranger" of sorts, spends his time dealing with magical creatures that are extremely dangerous and (most likely) deals with poachers of these creatures, so he's far more physically active than Fate is.)

So... I gotta make fun of that attitude somehow...

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Erio does fight poachers in SSX

But yeah, I can't say I respect people saying things like that. All it does is give the impression that they'll cling to any weak excuse to justify Fate losing. Saying it was just for fanservice is ridiculous as proven from the reaction itself: Fate losing is being seen as a fan dis-service instead. Heck, if they really wanted to have Fate lose clothing, why didn't they just have Nanoha blast it off? They picked Erio for a reason other than just "we need some one to take Fate's clothes off."

Anywho, funny little exchange there, Nanya. Fate actually doesn't have that great a track record, does she?
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Old 2010-09-23, 13:27   Link #27206
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Continuation of Forbidden to cry.

Subaru exhausted by her work and mental suffering comforted by Cinque.


Sister`s help

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Thank 00-Raiser for beta reading. You`re life-saver.
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Old 2010-09-23, 14:06   Link #27207
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Continuation of Forbidden to cry.

Subaru exhausted by her work and mental suffering comforted by Cinque.


Sister`s help

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Thank 00-Raiser for beta reading. You`re life-saver.
I really liked the part with Subaru and Cinque. Made me feel all warm of fuzzy Good job.
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Old 2010-09-23, 14:45   Link #27208
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Fixed a number of errors and such, and uploaded Future Tense Chapter 18: Price to ff.net.
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Old 2010-09-23, 15:11   Link #27209
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Erio does fight poachers in SSX

But yeah, I can't say I respect people saying things like that. All it does is give the impression that they'll cling to any weak excuse to justify Fate losing. Saying it was just for fanservice is ridiculous as proven from the reaction itself: Fate losing is being seen as a fan dis-service instead. Heck, if they really wanted to have Fate lose clothing, why didn't they just have Nanoha blast it off? They picked Erio for a reason other than just "we need some one to take Fate's clothes off."

Anywho, funny little exchange there, Nanya. Fate actually doesn't have that great a track record, does she?
Fanboy/fangirl goggles are the only type of goggles that have no equal.

Which reminds me... did she ever win any of her fights with Signum? I don't recall she did...
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Old 2010-09-23, 15:31   Link #27210
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Fanboy/fangirl goggles are the only type of goggles that have no equal.

Which reminds me... did she ever win any of her fights with Signum? I don't recall she did...
Nope. Interrupted each time.
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Old 2010-09-23, 17:05   Link #27211
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And all of Fate's rematches against Signum between A's and StrikerS she lost as well.

@vic-vic. That was pretty good, even though there's all that extra death going on in the background.
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Old 2010-09-23, 17:19   Link #27212
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And all of Fate's rematches against Signum between A's and StrikerS she lost as well.
So wait. Since TOS she hasn't won a fight on screen?

...Clearly she just doesn't live up to her press clippings :flees!:
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Old 2010-09-23, 17:25   Link #27213
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So wait. Since TOS she hasn't won a fight on screen?

...Clearly she just doesn't live up to her press clippings :flees!:
Well, if she didn't have her super mode in StrikerS, she would have lost to Tre, Sette and Jail.

Edit: Due Part 5 is up on FF.Net
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Old 2010-09-23, 18:04   Link #27214
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Moczo and I were just shooting the breeze when the idea of my version of Due meeting his version of Sette came up...

And look at what happened!

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Old 2010-09-23, 18:04   Link #27215
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Fixed a number of errors and such, and uploaded Future Tense Chapter 18: Price to ff.net.
Gah, I forgot to read this earlier today x_x

Well, here's more errors

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Well the obvious answer to who the eye patch person is would be Cinque, but that's a bit too obvious. I'm gonna go out on a limb and guess it's actually Vice's little sister Laguna! She has eye trouble, and could pick up marksmanship skills from her brother. Either her, or Freid's presence suggests it could be Erio and Caro's daughter.
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Old 2010-09-23, 18:05   Link #27216
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Here's something I've been meaning to write for awhile. It takes place after Vivid chapter 16 and features Lutecia and Erio.

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Ha! That was great, especially Fate's meltdown and Lutecia's last line!
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Old 2010-09-23, 18:39   Link #27217
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Future Tense
Chapter 18: Price

In which Nanoha becomes a target, gains help from an unexpected and mysterious ally, while Teana begins her trip into the deeper mysterious surrounding Hayate's regime....

Previous chapters can be found here.

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Been over two weeks since my last update, so sorry about that. But the good news is that the next chapter is mostly written, and thus I hope to get it out within a week. For those who have been keeping up with this, I promise the next chapter will be very special, and hopefully quite enjoyable.^^

Of course, the next few chapters after that should be quite interesting, too, heh....
Oh hell, that family is not just Nanoha and Vivio, but Fate too. They're finally going all out against each other next chapter, right? And considering that Fate had all those years to get better... Like that fight in season one, it will be experience versus willpower.

And something tells me that whatever Mariel planned for the Tome, it may... affect Hayate's mind. Like, if it removes all the knights and Reinforce, Hayate will go totally nuts.
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Old 2010-09-23, 18:40   Link #27218
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I'm sensing a Thirty Xanatos Pile-Up in the works on Future Tense.
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Old 2010-09-23, 19:21   Link #27219
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Old 2010-09-23, 19:27   Link #27220
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Aftermath has been posted to FF.net.

Page claim for Lutecia/Erio!
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