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Old 2010-09-27, 09:06   Link #27241
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Daily Activity Log of Officers F. Testarossa and N. Takamachi

Sorry for the long delay between posts, but Daily Activity Logs, Jan. 7, Family is now on Fanfiction.net ^^.

I've made some edits in the chapter, to fix some grammar stuff and to make certain scenes flow smoother .
Wheeeeee!! It's like christmas again!

Been waiting for this one to get updated The only thing disappointing about it is that I'd already read it on these forums before.
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Old 2010-09-27, 09:45   Link #27242
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@Tiresias: nice hehe

@DC: Its about time! Hahaha. Nice to have you back

Raiser, sorry this is a little late. Heres the next short part. Yeah I chose a bunch of minor characters since...well they need some love too XD

Spoiler for Startcraft!Vivio pt 2 lolz:
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Old 2010-09-27, 09:51   Link #27243
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Closely following the game was good enough for a one-shot, but if you're seriously going to expand it, you'll need to do more than replace names.
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Old 2010-09-27, 10:05   Link #27244
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Yep, planning on doing that once people get off-world. Going to send them all into some chaotic crap ^.^
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Old 2010-09-27, 12:42   Link #27245
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Hmm... curious. If Nanoha shows up in Starcraft!Vivio, then will she still have (had? maybe not anymore?) a Mother/Daughter relationship with her, or will they be strangers?

But in any case, moar plz.
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Old 2010-09-27, 12:45   Link #27246
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New update for "Shadowfire" is up and running: Curiosity Killed.
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Old 2010-09-27, 15:11   Link #27247
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Hmm... curious. If Nanoha shows up in Starcraft!Vivio, then will she still have (had? maybe not anymore?) a Mother/Daughter relationship with her, or will they be strangers?
Considering that Alicia is alive and is an acquaintance of Vivio here...who knows?

Anyway, I don't know what's gotten into me, but Starlight of Liberty got a second chapter:
Spoiler for 2:
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Old 2010-09-27, 16:10   Link #27248
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Chapter 12 - Battle


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Old 2010-09-27, 16:11   Link #27249
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@Tiresias: Tense problems, LOTS of tense problems.

Try to keep it past tense as much as possible.

Otherwise, well, this is interesting.
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Old 2010-09-27, 16:20   Link #27250
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Wasn't entirely satisfied with this but finally managed to get over this hurdle. More to come whenever I can write.
Well, the stuff with Sette is good, but I still think it'd be better off as its own fic. The fic is about the Materials, so Sette doesn't quite fit in.

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So, inspired by the latest Nanoha/Wings of Liberty fic as well as the jokes that I and Skane made at the humour thread, I was tempted to try my own.

Nowhere as good as the other, of course, but it's worth the shot anyway. Here goes nothing:
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Heh, so much Starcraft lately Well I like Vice's role in it

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@Tiresias: nice hehe

@DC: Its about time! Hahaha. Nice to have you back

Raiser, sorry this is a little late. Heres the next short part. Yeah I chose a bunch of minor characters since...well they need some love too XD

Spoiler for Startcraft!Vivio pt 2 lolz:
Hm... I think it would have been better if it was done as a possible future of the Nanoha verse instead of an AU. Using Alicia as Tychus doesn't make much sense... I still think Rio would work better.

Otherwise, good job.

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Considering that Alicia is alive and is an acquaintance of Vivio here...who knows?

Anyway, I don't know what's gotten into me, but Starlight of Liberty got a second chapter:
Spoiler for 2:
Hm, interesting. So the drones stand in for the Zerg, eh? Seeing more would be nice

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Chapter 12 - Battle


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Yeah, I'm really wondering what's up with Hayate... How did she free herself and what did Fate see when she woke up?

And ouch, man, that sucks big time... I hope things get better for you soon!
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Old 2010-09-27, 16:45   Link #27251
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Future Tense
Chapter 18: Price

In which Nanoha becomes a target, gains help from an unexpected and mysterious ally, while Teana begins her trip into the deeper mysterious surrounding Hayate's regime....

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 18: Price:


Been over two weeks since my last update, so sorry about that. But the good news is that the next chapter is mostly written, and thus I hope to get it out within a week. For those who have been keeping up with this, I promise the next chapter will be very special, and hopefully quite enjoyable.^^

Of course, the next few chapters after that should be quite interesting, too, heh....
Plots within plots, all colliding with opposing schemes... this is going to get very messy before the end, isn't it?

Also, I'm quite curious about how the whole shebang came to be so screwed up in the first place. I mean, we know that the deaths of several characters contributed to it, but somehow the Nanoha cast just don't seem like the types to take a collective swan dive off the Slippery Slope like this; there has to be something else going on behind the scenes. People have been bringing up the possibility of extensive manipulation by Quattro (and let's be honest, you've been hinting at it more and more strongly yourself), and I find myself strongly agreeing with that hypothesis.

Sounds like the next chapter might just give some answers. Can't wait!

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Moczo and I were just shooting the breeze when the idea of my version of Due meeting his version of Sette came up...

And look at what happened!

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...I just about melted after reading this! Especially at the end.

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So, for no reason at all, I was remembering the old Steven Spielberg cartoons...

And then I decided to change them a bit.

So, the Numbers take over!

Enjoy!

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Heh. Feels maybe a wee bit forced, but still worth a chuckle.

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Wasn't entirely satisfied with this but finally managed to get over this hurdle. More to come whenever I can write.
It's rather endearing how Sette jumps to Dr. Miura's defense there; sure, self-preservation probably plays a part, but I honestly got the feeling that she'd genuinely warmed up to the Doc, as much as she can anyway. Good to see that she might get a shred of normalcy in her life at last... assuming she survives the encounter with Material-L, that is.

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New update for "Shadowfire" is up and running: Curiosity Killed.
Funny little interplay between Lio/Rio and Corona at the end.

Also, the... well, for lack of a better term, product placement is a little odd, though I understand it's something of a running gag. In that case, it might be worth hanging a lampshade about horrendous import prices or something. :P
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Old 2010-09-27, 16:48   Link #27252
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Alright people, settle down...

...

I don't know Starcraft.

*Pouts*

@ SNobleJr Glad you liked that. ^_^

ANYWAY!

BIG thanks to Raiser for his help.

For everyone waiting...

Day in the Life...

Chapter 40...

The title is...

Spoiler for Death:


Spoiler for Notes:
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Old 2010-09-27, 16:51   Link #27253
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Alright people, settle down...

...

I don't know Starcraft.

*Pouts*

@ SNobleJr Glad you liked that. ^_^

ANYWAY!

BIG thanks to Raiser for his help.

For everyone waiting...

Day in the Life...

Chapter 40...

The title is...

Spoiler for Death:


Spoiler for Notes:
Like I said, I think it turned out for the best. The alternative wouldn't have been a very good idea...

Still, it allowed for an introspective into life and I'm sure a big change will be in the near future.
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Old 2010-09-27, 17:05   Link #27254
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Hmm I considered that, but then It would just sound like a AU of Future Tense XD

Dont worry, I got a reason why Alicia is taking over instead of Rio. I have...other plans for that girl fufufu~

Well heres the next part of it. I finally start breaking off from the general storyline into my own world fufufu~

Spoiler for Starcraft!Vivio part 3 XD:


I'm glad this isnt a serious fic LOL Otherwise I wouldnt be able to throw all those game jokes in there XD
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Old 2010-09-27, 17:51   Link #27255
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Different differences are different!

1. Alicia's fighting style is more reminiscent of Zeratul's and the Lenassa tribe than it is a ghost's.
2. The strikethroughs got a chuckle out of me.
3. And lastly, did anyone else expect the Solar Flare to blind the target instead?
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Old 2010-09-27, 18:18   Link #27256
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Different differences are different!

1. Alicia's fighting style is more reminiscent of Zeratul's and the Lenassa tribe than it is a ghost's.
2. The strikethroughs got a chuckle out of me.
3. And lastly, did anyone else expect the Solar Flare to blind the target instead?
I did, it must be a case of over exposure. I enoyed this chapter though, it was very entertaining to say the least.
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Old 2010-09-27, 18:46   Link #27257
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Also, the... well, for lack of a better term, product placement is a little odd, though I understand it's something of a running gag. In that case, it might be worth hanging a lampshade about horrendous import prices or something. :P
To be honest, I never even considered how the stuff gets to Mid. Most of the time whenever people ask, I just say Lutecia has a secret stash of it that she keeps under her bed. I might have to start rethinking my response.
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Hmm I considered that, but then It would just sound like a AU of Future Tense XD

Dont worry, I got a reason why Alicia is taking over instead of Rio. I have...other plans for that girl fufufu~

Well heres the next part of it. I finally start breaking off from the general storyline into my own world fufufu~

Spoiler for Starcraft!Vivio part 3 XD:


I'm glad this isnt a serious fic LOL Otherwise I wouldnt be able to throw all those game jokes in there XD
Heh, I liked the strike outs too! But if Einhart was corrupted by the Borg Gadgets, I'm surprised she didn't say "Resistance is futile."
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Old 2010-09-28, 00:58   Link #27259
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Chapter 12 - Battle


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So Hayate is missing, can`t wait for Fate`s reaction. And Bureau still on Chrono`s tail...

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Alright people, settle down...

...

I don't know Starcraft.

*Pouts*

@ SNobleJr Glad you liked that. ^_^

ANYWAY!

BIG thanks to Raiser for his help.

For everyone waiting...

Day in the Life...

Chapter 40...

The title is...

Spoiler for Death:


Spoiler for Notes:
Ororo, i hoped that Miyuki didn`t listen to Due speech, but her interaction with Shamal will be interesting to watch.
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Old 2010-09-28, 07:39   Link #27260
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Alright people, settle down...

...

I don't know Starcraft.

*Pouts*

@ SNobleJr Glad you liked that. ^_^

ANYWAY!

BIG thanks to Raiser for his help.

For everyone waiting...

Day in the Life...

Chapter 40...

The title is...

Spoiler for Death:


Spoiler for Notes:
Heh... well, I promised I'd do this if one struck me, so...

It's possible I'm a horrible person.

Spoiler for Omake Fun Times!:
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