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Old 2010-09-28, 08:09   Link #27261
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Heh... well, I promised I'd do this if one struck me, so...

It's possible I'm a horrible person.

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It's possible I'm an even more horrible person, as I was on the floor laughing after I read this. Awesome omake.
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Old 2010-09-28, 09:18   Link #27262
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Heh... well, I promised I'd do this if one struck me, so...

It's possible I'm a horrible person.

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Haha, awesome. Everything is better with zombies! Funny stuff as always Moczo
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Old 2010-09-28, 11:30   Link #27263
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Future Tense

Chapter 19: Family, Part 1


In which Nanoha meets some interesting people, and learns a shocking truth behind Carim's desperate gamble...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 19: Family, Part 1:

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Old 2010-09-28, 11:51   Link #27264
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Um... WOW! That's just... WOW!

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WOW!

...

I can't really think of anything more to say, honestly.
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Old 2010-09-28, 12:45   Link #27265
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I guess we don't have to worry about her support crew dying if they're already dead!
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Old 2010-09-28, 12:57   Link #27266
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Future Tense

Chapter 19: Family, Part 1


In which Nanoha meets some interesting people, and learns a shocking truth behind Carim's desperate gamble...

Previous chapters can be found here.

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Spoiler for Some thought:
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Old 2010-09-28, 13:08   Link #27267
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Well I for one am glad my theory about Hayate getting to her first was wrong...
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Old 2010-09-28, 13:42   Link #27268
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So, I'm not sure if this should be chapter 41 or 40.5

ANYWAY!

Thanks to Raiser for prereading for me.

Day in the Life

Gaiden Chapter

Flashback

Spoiler for Flashback:


Spoiler for Notes:


Alright, go on, call me a hypocrite. Go on. I deserve it.
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Old 2010-09-28, 14:28   Link #27269
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So, I'm not sure if this should be chapter 41 or 40.5

ANYWAY!

Thanks to Raiser for prereading for me.

Day in the Life

Gaiden Chapter

Flashback

Spoiler for Flashback:


Spoiler for Notes:


Alright, go on, call me a hypocrite. Go on. I deserve it.
HYPOCRITE, there you go.
On the plus side however learning backstories is always an enjoyable experience for me. The ending was good, i think it cut off with a nice little climax, perfect way to bring an end to this little side story...thing...flahsback...whatever.

Also, what's a gaiden chapter?
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Old 2010-09-28, 14:34   Link #27270
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Gaiden Chapter is similar to a Gaiden Game.

In that, you're able to give backstory to a character that you couldn't in the main story.

...

Basically it's just "take time out from the main story to explain the history of these characters" kind of chapter.
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Old 2010-09-28, 14:40   Link #27271
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Future Tense

Chapter 19: Family, Part 1


In which Nanoha meets some interesting people, and learns a shocking truth behind Carim's desperate gamble...

Previous chapters can be found here.

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So the first stage of the attack on the capital is a zombie invasion?



Awesome.

Now, what will happen? Here are my predictions:

-Whatever was done to RH, it will give the location of the hidden place. Most likely, the bounty hunters will see Fate and tell her of this, which Fate will use to locate Nanoha.
-Fate versus Nanoha, with Nanoha asking to fight her alone. Because... well, it would take one hell of an opening surprise attack for Fate to take out both Einhart and Vivio.
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Old 2010-09-28, 15:26   Link #27272
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Hey Nanya. You asked for it, so here it is.

Spoiler for Side Due X:
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tempy...

...

*Gives you the entire box of cookies and some milk*

You win the internets!

*Falls over laughing*
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Ditto for me. Whatever you're on Tempy, I want some so I can write as much awesome and funny as you.

Also, I would be forever grateful if you could allow us a glimpse of the crazy shenanigans that Yuuno has to put up dealing with the attention of three Aces and their 'alternates'. A 'Day in the Life' ficlet?

EDIT: Forgot to respond to Kaijo's new story bit...

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Anyone else we're missing in this epic?
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Old 2010-09-28, 17:35   Link #27275
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I see tempy's finally confessed to Kevin being a lolicon. =D
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Old 2010-09-28, 18:07   Link #27276
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Old 2010-09-28, 18:23   Link #27277
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Always nice to get a little confirmation on these things, let's you say "I knew it, now i can prove it" which is fairly satisfying i always thought
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Old 2010-09-28, 20:40   Link #27278
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Future Tense

Chapter 19: Family, Part 1


In which Nanoha meets some interesting people, and learns a shocking truth behind Carim's desperate gamble...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 19: Family, Part 1:
Corrections in quote.

Whoo! I got it right!

An interesting chapter, though I figured the whole undead army thing when Einhart said a shipment came in. Tying it back to the scene with the coffins made it pretty apparent.

About Ix, though... I don't agree with your characterization of her. Being older than she looks, she's actually quite wise and mature, so I definitely don't think she'd be all child like and calling Vivio and Einhart her mamas. Heck, she's older than them and if the events of SSX didn't change that much, Ix and Vivio knew each other back then briefly.

I get what you're trying to do with the whole Nanoha and Fate parrallel, and being ambiguous about Vivio and Einhart being a couple or not, but I don't think it's proper for Ix to be the one to introduce that. Hell, giving them a little orphan girl that some how stumbled down the hole while escaping from a wild animal would work better. Having Ix be the daughter feels OOC to me. If Ix would view anyone like that, it'd be Subaru, but SSX had that come off as a friendly/sisterly thing.

To further this, Vivio has known Ix for years and considered her a friend even when she was in her coma. To switch to being her 'mama' just doesn't work. You're friends with some one for over 50 years, so how easy could it be to suddenly view them as your daughter?

Other than that point, everything works well.

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Alright, go on, call me a hypocrite. Go on. I deserve it.
Not really. Just because you hate OCs doesn't mean writing them makes you a hypocrite. If you said "OCs are terrible and no one should use them ever!" but you use them then you'd be a hypocrite. Sometimes OCs are just necessary to the story, and giving them a backstory at least shows you put more thought into them than just making them toss away characters.

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Hey Nanya. You asked for it, so here it is.

Spoiler for Side Due X:
Haha, that was great! This should be obvious, but I really liked the conversation about Yuuno I'd love to see a fic where Kevin has to handle all 3 of his daughter's feelings. Would certainly be a sticky situation if all his girls wanted his support, but Kevin can't pick just one to root for.

Also, what Yasanagi said.

But in regards to his own love life, hm... me thinks Cinque might be open to the idea! She is older than she looks after all

And Sheffield? Damn it why does that sound familiar? x_x
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Old 2010-09-28, 20:54   Link #27279
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Ditto for me. Whatever you're on Tempy, I want some so I can write as much awesome and funny as you.
It's just my thought patterns. I'm told I'm rather dry and at times nonsensically sensible with my humor. Frequent visitors to the IRC channel would know.

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Also, I would be forever grateful if you could allow us a glimpse of the crazy shenanigans that Yuuno has to put up dealing with the attention of three Aces and their 'alternates'. A 'Day in the Life' ficlet?
Perhaps, perhaps.

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I see tempy's finally confessed to Kevin being a lolicon. =D
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Always nice to get a little confirmation on these things, let's you say "I knew it, now i can prove it" which is fairly satisfying i always thought.
Dammit, guys.

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Not really. Just because you hate OCs doesn't mean writing them makes you a hypocrite. If you said "OCs are terrible and no one should use them ever!" but you use them then you'd be a hypocrite. Sometimes OCs are just necessary to the story, and giving them a backstory at least shows you put more thought into them than just making them toss away characters.
Nanya haet OC, but Nanya liek Kevin the OC? I am slowly converting Nanya >:3

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Haha, that was great! This should be obvious, but I really liked the conversation about Yuuno I'd love to see a fic where Kevin has to handle all 3 of his daughter's feelings. Would certainly be a sticky situation if all his girls wanted his support, but Kevin can't pick just one to root for.

Also, what Yasanagi said.

But in regards to his own love life, hm... me thinks Cinque might be open to the idea! She is older than she looks after all

And Sheffield? Damn it why does that sound familiar? x_x
Hmm.
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Nanya doesn't hate OCs per se, but he is wary around them in case they end up going down the Sue route.
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