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Old 2010-10-03, 16:46   Link #27361
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As usual, good job. I personally don't have much of a problem with the whole Ixy deal right now.

And if the video you posted earlier about what the Nanoha and Fate fight would be like I guess it'll be a
Spoiler for Be careful! It's spoilerriffic!:
Yeah, I'm finding quite a few who think how Ix was handled was decent. As for the spoiler vid, it was more of a joke, heh, so wouldn't read too much into it. ;p
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Old 2010-10-03, 19:20   Link #27362
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I'm bored and Hayate needs more love, the natural conclusion is......

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Somewhat inspired by deathcurse's fic, in some strange way. My mind is weird, okay?
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Old 2010-10-03, 20:22   Link #27363
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I'm bored and Hayate needs more love, the natural conclusion is......

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Somewhat inspired by deathcurse's fic, in some strange way. My mind is weird, okay?
Hayate always needs more love!

LOL! So we people on Earth are gullible, eh? Yes, it's always the "training exercises" that cause these disturbances .....

Clever Hayate, she knows that she always has to have a back-up plan for her back-up plan for her first plan!

Depending on where your punchline is supposed to be, I personally found that it would have been a good place to end right after that press conference part ^^. Nice humourous short though!
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Old 2010-10-04, 12:04   Link #27364
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Future Tense, Chapter 19: Family Part 1 is up on ff.net.
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Old 2010-10-05, 23:22   Link #27365
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EDIT: Crap, skipped a section . Added it in! You guys get a double bonus!

Now it looks like Ginga's pet project is pulled into the mess around Hayate and Auris' case. And the second day of the Gallant Trial is here...and slowly, things start to come to light... (from the shadows..... *shot*)

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 8

Part 1-4A, Part 4B, Part 5: Trial Day 1A, Part 5: Trial Day 1B, Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 and New Part 7

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Part 9: Trial Day 2

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Last edited by deathcurse; 2010-10-06 at 00:41. Reason: Added a new part
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Old 2010-10-06, 01:34   Link #27366
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EDIT: Crap, skipped a section . Added it in! You guys get a double bonus!

Now it looks like Ginga's pet project is pulled into the mess around Hayate and Auris' case. And the second day of the Gallant Trial is here...and slowly, things start to come to light... (from the shadows..... *shot*)

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 8

Part 1-4A, Part 4B, Part 5: Trial Day 1A, Part 5: Trial Day 1B, Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 and New Part 7

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Part 9: Trial Day 2

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Hmm... That's an interesting way to end the chapter, dc.

...

Darn it, now I want more!
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Old 2010-10-06, 01:48   Link #27367
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EDIT: Crap, skipped a section . Added it in! You guys get a double bonus!

Now it looks like Ginga's pet project is pulled into the mess around Hayate and Auris' case. And the second day of the Gallant Trial is here...and slowly, things start to come to light... (from the shadows..... *shot*)

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 8

Part 1-4A, Part 4B, Part 5: Trial Day 1A, Part 5: Trial Day 1B, Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 and New Part 7

Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, Part 8:

Part 9: Trial Day 2

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Ehe, so little Raven have her own little secrets. Well, I`ll wait for continuation to know...
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Old 2010-10-06, 12:49   Link #27368
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EDIT: Crap, skipped a section . Added it in! You guys get a double bonus!

Now it looks like Ginga's pet project is pulled into the mess around Hayate and Auris' case. And the second day of the Gallant Trial is here...and slowly, things start to come to light... (from the shadows..... *shot*)

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 8

Part 1-4A, Part 4B, Part 5: Trial Day 1A, Part 5: Trial Day 1B, Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 and New Part 7

Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, Part 8:

Part 9: Trial Day 2

Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, Part 9: Trial Day 2:

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WHOO, plot twist! I'm starting to think Raven might not be as innocent as she was originally potrayed in the early scenes.... which would make sense, since you dropped hints before that Raven might not be quite as much of a victim as some people seem to think. So... yes, most awesome plot twist.
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Old 2010-10-06, 20:07   Link #27369
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(from the shadows..... *shot*)

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Part 8

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Heh. My evening just got a little better.

Were this a tv show, the ominous background music would start playing just about the point where Auris makes her little dramatic pause. As always, I like.
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Old 2010-10-06, 20:52   Link #27370
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... and in the name of mood whiplash, it's just begging for a Boston Legal-style omake.
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Old 2010-10-06, 22:19   Link #27371
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Hmm... That's an interesting way to end the chapter, dc.

...

Darn it, now I want more!
I swear, I never come up with these on purpose...I just write and when a line like that comes up, well, I'm not strong enough to resist!

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Ehe, so little Raven have her own little secrets. Well, I`ll wait for continuation to know...
She does indeed .

Argh, it's so aggravating...I've got a lot more already written, which I can only post if I can get myself over my writer's block on this Trial Day 2 .....

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WHOO, plot twist! I'm starting to think Raven might not be as innocent as she was originally potrayed in the early scenes.... which would make sense, since you dropped hints before that Raven might not be quite as much of a victim as some people seem to think. So... yes, most awesome plot twist.
Yay, picked up on the hints!

Part of the credit for some of this plot twist goes to Dezo, who helped me tie everything together into an exciting knot .

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Heh. My evening just got a little better.

Were this a tv show, the ominous background music would start playing just about the point where Auris makes her little dramatic pause. As always, I like.
Aw, thanks ^^.

Not to mention a commercial cut or the end credits fall right after her line!

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... and in the name of mood whiplash, it's just begging for a Boston Legal-style omake.
I haven't watched Boston Legal , so someone else may have to do the omake for me .
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Old 2010-10-07, 14:32   Link #27372
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EDIT: Crap, skipped a section . Added it in! You guys get a double bonus!

Now it looks like Ginga's pet project is pulled into the mess around Hayate and Auris' case. And the second day of the Gallant Trial is here...and slowly, things start to come to light... (from the shadows..... *shot*)

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 8

Part 1-4A, Part 4B, Part 5: Trial Day 1A, Part 5: Trial Day 1B, Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 and New Part 7

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Part 9: Trial Day 2

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more. now. I demand.
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Old 2010-10-08, 12:01   Link #27373
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Old 2010-10-08, 20:54   Link #27374
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Old 2010-10-10, 01:37   Link #27375
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A new offering for the FFT on 10-10-10!

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Old 2010-10-10, 02:10   Link #27376
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A new offering for the FFT on 10-10-10!

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While I'm still against adding Sette to the group on the grounds of it being completely unsuitable, I guess you did give a believable basis for it. Other than that... I dunno, maybe tone Rai down a little? Lately she's seemed far too over the top and it feels forced.
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Old 2010-10-10, 02:18   Link #27377
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A new offering for the FFT on 10-10-10!

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Yay, continuation!

I suppose Rai-chan really love the role of evil overlord and her behavior more lika a play for her rather than sheer sadism (still, she very bloodthirsty, but we like her for that aren`t we?)
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Old 2010-10-10, 15:18   Link #27378
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Finally got around to uploading Future Tense, Chapter 20: Family, Part 2 to ff.net. Made a few corrections and edits, and added a short omake.
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Old 2010-10-10, 15:25   Link #27379
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A new offering for the FFT on 10-10-10!

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Wow...Rai's suprisingly ruthless isn't she? I mean no matter how it's phrased "If you don't come with me to perform an unknown, incredibly long, and probably dangerous mission while leaving the first person to treat you like a human then I'll kill everyone i meet as long as i'm on this planet." is a sadistic choice suitable for a true evil villian.
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Old 2010-10-10, 16:24   Link #27380
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Wow...Rai's suprisingly ruthless isn't she? I mean no matter how it's phrased "If you don't come with me to perform an unknown, incredibly long, and probably dangerous mission while leaving the first person to treat you like a human then I'll kill everyone i meet as long as i'm on this planet." is a sadistic choice suitable for a true evil villian.
Sadistic it is, definitely. Material-L might act all bubbly and cheerful, but this shows quite clearly that she's quite the sociopath underneath. Kinda like Quattro, except the cheerful facade is not a deliberate, methodical act.

Hats off to Sette, though. She's definitely grown as a person here, what with letting herself get kidnapped to spare the lives of both the prison staff and the inmates. That's quite a selfless act.
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