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Old 2010-10-11, 21:21   Link #81
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On a whim from some pictures Patchy found for me for general usage I tried this... no text yet though.



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Old 2010-10-11, 21:44   Link #82
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So your switching entries Sworn? But other then that... I instantly fell in love with the looks of that new entry I find nothing wrong in my end..
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Old 2010-10-11, 21:55   Link #83
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Great image and nice background, but the text puts me off a lot. >_<

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another draft: sorry fake transparency
c&c?
Another nice entry!
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Old 2010-10-12, 00:58   Link #84
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On a whim from some pictures Patchy found for me for general usage I tried this... no text yet though.



C&C please?
It doesn't give the autumn vibe because of the sparkles make it look like it's snowing.
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Old 2010-10-12, 02:07   Link #85
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milan kyuubi ,the color of the text could be reworked to gain in readability.
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I agree. Try using a color that contrasts the background to make the text clearer.
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@milan kyuubi Nice, but I think you should add a little bit of color variety. The signature features a lot of details and all of them have very similar color range, making it a bit difficult for the viewer to pick out the most important parts.
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@milan kyuubi, there's too much yellow in it, even like that the render doesn't seem to blend in, and that quote, I'm not so sure. I believe text should be closer to the main focus so it doesn't distract.
Thanks for the c&c I changed the background using gradient but only on BG, the colors sre still similar but now it's easier to distinguish the BG (branches and falling leaves). I also changed the text (also I put the text closer to the render), I don't have many fonts and I don't know how to install new ones And non of the colors I put are able to blend the text much so I had to use blending option and came up with this.

V6
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Old 2010-10-12, 03:21   Link #86
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milan kyuubi there's still some part of the text than hard to read. You could use the ''Horizontal type mask tool'' combined with a adjustement layer insted of the ''Horizontal type tool''. And about the font, monotype corsiva is the type than I usually trust for text and you should have it if you have Photoshop or Photoshop Element.
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Old 2010-10-12, 07:06   Link #87
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previous draft but in fake transparency:


Spoiler for previous version:
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Old 2010-10-12, 08:05   Link #88
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previous draft but in fake transparency:


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The background of the newer version is better that the first one you've used but the only thing that I don't like about it is that Aya is a bit blurry.
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Old 2010-10-12, 08:36   Link #89
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After some thinking I decided to remove 'quote'. Ganbaru I tried to do what you told me, but I don't have that font in my photoshoop (the only font I have that resemblance yours is ''Brush Script Std'' but it was still not good), also ''Horizontal type mask tool'' only made text animated and it was even more impossible to read it.

V7 (probably final)


Edit:
Well after reading your post Star-Wing I decided to make small changes after all

V8


c&c? Please, for both versions I would like to know what version you like the better
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Old 2010-10-12, 08:37   Link #90
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Finally got an hour free Was browsing through the thread and…..

@Namiey
Spoiler for RnR:


@MK
Spoiler for RnR:


@Sworn
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@CM
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@RGC
Hey, I think you are a fresh face here! Welcome to the forums and so glad to see you taking interest in SOTM <3
(On a side note, loved your signature )
Spoiler for RnR:


@Mittwoch
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EDIT @MK
Ooops, my RnR is for your v7 ^^;
@Ganbaru I think I missed your entry -.-"
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Old 2010-10-12, 09:07   Link #91
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@ milan kyuubi I don't know which softeare you are using but, in Photoshop Element 7 '' Monotype Corsiva'' isn't place inthe right order, look for ''Corsiva''. I have to say than v8 is better.

Edit; my new version, I replaced the blow (but lighter) and some shade. C&C would be appreciate.
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Old 2010-10-12, 16:57   Link #92
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Ganbaru: love it. I would give it a solid 9.8.

without sparkles now:


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Old 2010-10-12, 17:23   Link #93
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@ milan kyuubi I don't know which softeare you are using but, in Photoshop Element 7 '' Monotype Corsiva'' isn't place inthe right order, look for ''Corsiva''. I have to say than v8 is better.

Edit; my new version, I replaced the blow (but lighter) and some shade. C&C would be appreciate.
It looks absolutely beautiful. I don't see anything wrong with it in my eyes.
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Old 2010-10-12, 18:42   Link #94
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@ Sworn to Belive, if you want to give more of a autumn feel, may I suggest to rework the background's colors, the leafs don'd look much readdy to fall or autumn-colored.
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Old 2010-10-12, 18:52   Link #95
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which is better? I tried blending the render more, but i think i did a bad job on that.

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Old 2010-10-12, 22:46   Link #96
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Ganbaru-senpai, more like this?
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Old 2010-10-12, 22:46   Link #97
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My first entry...


@RGC Railgun
I prefer the second one, although her face can be a bit brighter, and a border may look nice.
@ganbaru
It's perfect!
@MK
I prefer the second version, the darker colour at the bottom looks good, but her hands looks a bit blurred.
@Sworn
definitely better now
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Old 2010-10-12, 22:53   Link #98
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Railgun: it's better but still needs more orange. Photo filter or gradient map?
Chimuts: it's a nice start, cute idea. I think though you should smooth some of the edges of the leaves and choose a different font.
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Old 2010-10-13, 02:32   Link #99
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Old 2010-10-13, 07:42   Link #100
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Sworn to Belive, your latest version is better, the more autumn-like.
Chimuts the idea is nice but the quality is kind of lacking. Fake transparency or a background might be a better idea
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