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Old 2010-11-02, 02:27   Link #27681
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By that time, a Screaming Orgasm would be more appropriate.

But perhaps that writer typo wasn't a typo at all? Author cameo? I'll allow it.

Also, oh look, a continuation.

First part

Spoiler for Responsibility:
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Now, Erio have two opinion - either to hide for the rest of his life... or have a harem.

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Old 2010-11-02, 07:15   Link #27682
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Now, Erio have two opinion - either to hide fro the rest of his life... or have a harem.
You, my friend, are operating under the wildly mistaken belief that Erio has any 'options' at all. His 'options' are to accept whatever Caro and Lutecia choose to do to him, nothing more, nothing less. They are quite officially Women Scorned, like whom Hell Hath No Fury. That baby better get used to the idea of being an only child, because one gets the impression Erio's testicles are going to end up a trophy on someone's mantle by the end of the week.
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Old 2010-11-02, 08:46   Link #27683
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Now, Erio have two opinion - either to hide fro the rest of his life... or have a harem.
You assume that Erio has an option in the first place. And somehow, I get the feeling that Signum won't be too keen on sharing...
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Old 2010-11-02, 12:06   Link #27684
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Old 2010-11-02, 12:24   Link #27685
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So, here's part 12...

Parts 1 through 10

Part 11

*nods*

Spoiler for Nanoha Slayers Part 12:
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Old 2010-11-02, 12:37   Link #27686
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Johannes: Erio, you now have the problem of keeping 3 women happy. Most men fail at keeping one happy. Good luck, you'll need it. *salute*
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Old 2010-11-02, 13:17   Link #27687
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So, here's part 12...

Parts 1 through 10

Part 11

*nods*

Spoiler for Nanoha Slayers Part 12:
So, the story reaching the end, i like it, but the shame that we didn`t meet the mazoku.
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Old 2010-11-02, 13:26   Link #27688
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So, the story reaching the end, i like it, but the shame that we didn`t meet the mazoku.
Don't worry...

I have...

Plans...

BTW, Wolkenritter.. *points* there's Moczo! he did it!
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Old 2010-11-02, 16:35   Link #27689
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Don't worry...

I have...

Plans...

BTW, Wolkenritter.. *points* there's Moczo! he did it!
Are they secret plans?

Somehow I think I'm going to have nightmares about that kind of an explosion. It's like nuclear war IN SPACE!

It seems to me like Nanoha's having a little trouble dealing with this seperate method of magic, Is this going to cause a problem in the forseeable (or perhaps unforseeable) future?
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Old 2010-11-02, 16:50   Link #27690
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Don't worry...

I have...

Plans...

BTW, Wolkenritter.. *points* there's Moczo! he did it!
Stop blaming me for your evil!

Ladies and dog, I didn't do anything. All I did was suggest a Lina/Nanoha team-up, because why have a crossover without one? He decided to torture you all on his own.
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Old 2010-11-02, 16:59   Link #27691
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Evil is contagious it seems *reaches for ten foot pole* Its not going to do me any good is it? I've been corrupted, true what they say about the dark side though.
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Old 2010-11-02, 17:23   Link #27692
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"This Device of mine glows with an awesome POWER! It's mild computerized voice tells me to grasp VICTORY! Now take this! My love, my anger, and all of my FRIENDSHIP! STARLIIIIIIIGHT! BREAKEEEEEEEER!"
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"This staff of mine glows with an awesome power! It's pink grip tells me to befriend you! Take this! My love, my friendship, and all of our expended magic! STARLIGHT FINGER!"
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Old 2010-11-02, 21:43   Link #27693
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What can I say? All the posts recently put me back in the mood!

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 5:


Spoiler for Author's Note:

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Old 2010-11-02, 22:16   Link #27694
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What can I say? All the posts recently put me back in the mood!

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 5:


Spoiler for Author's Note:
Oh wow. Wendi went crazy as I expected, but not exactly the way I imagined. I expected 'Go nuts shot everything everywhere', but this is just as good.

I'll hope Nove's idea will work... Then again, I'm also wondering how you can make it go wrong.
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Old 2010-11-02, 22:27   Link #27695
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What can I say? All the posts recently put me back in the mood!

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 5:


Spoiler for Author's Note:

I feel weak-minded because I didn't realize that Sette was narrating the background information until Paragraph 6. Considerable laughter was subsequently invoked, making coherent review impossible for a period of one point four two minutes following reading. Especial attention was given to Wendi. Best line, though: " I am used to explosions in contained quarters."

Does this mean we get cameos from the ViVid cast next chapter?

But you stole my 'tact' bit from a GrimGrimoire fic that I haven't posted yet, you darned time-traveling plagarist, you!!!
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Old 2010-11-02, 22:42   Link #27696
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Oh wow. Wendi went crazy as I expected, but not exactly the way I imagined. I expected 'Go nuts shot everything everywhere', but this is just as good.

I'll hope Nove's idea will work... Then again, I'm also wondering how you can make it go wrong.
I have my ways.

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I feel weak-minded because I didn't realize that Sette was narrating the background information until Paragraph 6. Considerable laughter was subsequently invoked, making coherent review impossible for a period of one point four two minutes following reading. Especial attention was given to Wendi. Best line, though: " I am used to explosions in contained quarters."

Does this mean we get cameos from the ViVid cast next chapter?

But you stole my 'tact' bit from a GrimGrimoire fic that I haven't posted yet, you darned time-traveling plagarist, you!!!
Glad you enjoyed it!

Yes!

Sorry I... um... time-robbed you?

EDIT: New chapter is up on FF.net. Along with all previous ones, of course

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Old 2010-11-02, 23:52   Link #27697
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What can I say? All the posts recently put me back in the mood!

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 5:


Spoiler for Author's Note:
*Pops from lurking to review awesomeness*

I loved this part:
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And, of course, the famous difficulty was only enhanced by this, despite what Wendi seemed to believe. This will become important later in the report. I have here used what is called 'foreshadowing', or the use of current events to imply future ones.
Real laughing out loud ensued once I had reached that part .

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"My scores were excellent. However, I do not believe that device's memory system survived, and therefore it will be impossible to compare to existing scores to determine my placement." I said, imparting positive information in an attempt to 'lighten' the mood.
Oh Sette, your attempts to fit in are funnier than your intentional statements!

The conversations between all the Nakajimas flowed well like real conversations, even though they're talking crack . That amused me to no end .

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"I am currently awaiting Cinque's approval to commence my second mission, tentatively titled 'tact'."

"... so in other words, you're open." Nove said.
Like I said, it flows oddly well as a conversation. But it's not supposed to be so normal!!! The deadpan, banal way they handle all the idiosyncrasies of their conversations is just hilarious .

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But you stole my 'tact' bit from a GrimGrimoire fic that I haven't posted yet, you darned time-traveling plagarist, you!!!
I vouch for Dezo! It's a nice fic ^^.

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Sorry I... um... time-robbed you?
Teach us your skills, wise one! I could use some more time!

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Old 2010-11-03, 07:16   Link #27698
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What can I say? All the posts recently put me back in the mood!

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 5:


Spoiler for Author's Note:
"This concerned me briefly, until I recalled that none of my current mission objectives required giving Wendi aid."

This line just made me want to murder Quattro for what she had done to the poor girl and her empathy. Or maybe dip her into a volcano as slow as possible, just as long as that witch suffer!

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Glad you enjoyed it!

Yes!

Sorry I... um... time-robbed you?
I see. So in the future you will make a contract with The World and become a Heroic Spirit placed on a realm outside normal timeline, only to be summoned into a Magical War where you secretly gambit to meet your past self and...give him/you DezoPenguin's script?

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PS: This is why I hate time-travel, there's already too much tense trouble for me already without it...
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Old 2010-11-03, 07:53   Link #27699
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*Pops from lurking to review awesomeness*

I loved this part:

Real laughing out loud ensued once I had reached that part .
*Bow* Thank you. It just seemed so... Sette.

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The conversations between all the Nakajimas flowed well like real conversations, even though they're talking crack . That amused me to no end .


Like I said, it flows oddly well as a conversation. But it's not supposed to be so normal!!! The deadpan, banal way they handle all the idiosyncrasies of their conversations is just hilarious .
Hee, hee... well, I guess I'm operating under the dual assumptions:

1) They are probably all pretty used to Sette by this point.

2) They aren't exactly normal girls themselves

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"This concerned me briefly, until I recalled that none of my current mission objectives required giving Wendi aid."

This line just made me want to murder Quattro for what she had done to the poor girl and her empathy. Or maybe dip her into a volcano as slow as possible, just as long as that witch suffer!
Well, Wendi kinda deserved it this time. But ordinarily, I'm right there with ya!

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I see. So in the future you will make a contract with The World and become a Heroic Spirit placed on a realm outside normal timeline, only to be summoned into a Magical War where you secretly gambit to meet your past self and...give him/you DezoPenguin's script?

UNLIMITED FANFIC WORKS!

PS: This is why I hate time-travel, there's already too much tense trouble for me already without it...
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Old 2010-11-03, 09:27   Link #27700
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Well, here's parts 13 till the end.

They aren't that long over-all.

Previous parts

Parts 1 through 10

Part 11

Part 12

*Shifty*

The end of S1. Then it's off to A's!

oh, and I finally have a name for this story!

Spoiler for Blood that Flows Part 13:


Spoiler for Blood That Flows Part 14:


Spoiler for Blood that Flows Part 15:


Spoiler for Blood That Flows End:
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