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Old 2010-09-11, 01:14   Link #901
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I have a fan fiction idea for someone, who might want to tackle it, Kyon vs. The World, a parody of sorts of Scott Pilgram vs The World. Where Kyon as to fight Haruhi's exs, and apparently she has a quite a few from what I remember.
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Old 2010-09-13, 04:04   Link #902
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Personally, I don't mind so much, as long as they don't have Kyon adressing people as "Mikuru" or having Yuki call him "Kyon" or even worse, "Kyon-kun".
What is your take on how Yuki should refer to Kyon in the third person, given that Kyon's proper name is not to be revealed to the audience?
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Old 2010-09-13, 20:42   Link #903
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Yuki will address Kyon only as "you" or "your", and when speaking about Kyon, she'll use "he","his", or "him".

If you REALLY need to, have her identify him as some other label like "observation subject" or "the chosen". Its actually a plot point how Yuki never calls him by his nickname or real name, so keeping it the same in your fanfiction greatly helps with source material congruence.
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Old 2010-10-29, 06:56   Link #904
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Hi, long time lurker(who loves quite a few Haruhi stories on FF.net.) first time poster.

I wrote my normal Haruhi fanfic not too long ago, and it seems that I haven't been able to get any reviews to my story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6425105/...Myth_of_Nagato

It's a short story that involves Nagato and Tsuruya. I was hoping that maybe I got Tsuruya's character right in it.
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Old 2010-12-23, 13:43   Link #905
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I just finished the first chapter of a new crossover fanfic - one involving The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzuamiya and Ore no Imouto.

Here's a link to it.

I'd love to know what everybody here thinks of it so far.

Even if you're not familiar with Ore no Imouto, I think this is an easy read for a Haruhi fan, as it has Kyon narration and only one character from Ore no Imouto so far.
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Old 2010-12-27, 12:44   Link #906
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Triple R, your story looks good so far. Kyon sounds in character, the plot is interesting, and the story moves smoothly. Nice work.

To go off-topic, I wrote a story awhile ago and I'm plugging it here. Don't be afraid to tell me what you think of it. Being the Dominant One.
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Old 2011-01-06, 01:03   Link #907
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I just finished the first chapter of a new crossover fanfic - one involving The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzuamiya and Ore no Imouto.

Here's a link to it.

I'd love to know what everybody here thinks of it so far.

Even if you're not familiar with Ore no Imouto, I think this is an easy read for a Haruhi fan, as it has Kyon narration and only one character from Ore no Imouto so far.
That's moronically awesome. And I've never seen the Ore No Imouto show.
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Old 2011-01-11, 23:23   Link #908
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I started The Gamma Dimension in December of 2009. As of January 2011, it is complete. The Light Novel's current cliffhanger heavily inspired this above anything else. It was a fun project for my first major one. Yuki/Kyon, and a bonus Ryoko chapter. Enjoy!
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Old 2011-01-26, 17:06   Link #909
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I know it's been forever and a day since I've last posted here, but I thought you guys might like to know that I've finally finished my omake!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4994973/..._the_Suzumiyas

I'm also announcing the sequel Life with the Suzumiyas: The Darker Half. Hope you all enjoy!
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Old 2011-01-29, 10:46   Link #910
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As promised, here is the first chapter of the sequel. Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6695261/..._the_Suzumiyas
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Old 2011-02-03, 12:34   Link #911
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As promised, here is the first chapter of the sequel. Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6695261/..._the_Suzumiyas
For someone who still writes fanfics of awesome series fading into obscurity, you really don't get enough love, my good man...

Also, I just read The Apology by Durandall, what a total mind bomb... Plausible between Kyon and Tsuruya, but wrong on an infinite number of levels She ain't that stupid or easy...
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Old 2011-02-04, 22:00   Link #912
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I seriously gotta stop coming across written stuff here at 9 in the evening. Give me more slack to actually read it...
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Also, I just read The Apology by Durandall, what a total mind bomb... Plausible between Kyon and Tsuruya, but wrong on an infinite number of levels She ain't that stupid or easy...
ooooh?
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Old 2011-03-06, 10:39   Link #913
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I just thought I'd come here to spread my fiction around. It's one chapter away from being finished so there's plenty to read until then. About 25000 words actually, so please, enjoy yourselves.

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Title: Blue
Summary: The Sports Meets is a week away. Haruhi plans to have the Brigade take part in the Relay Race. An old friend returns and strange Closed Spaces appear. Can Kyon win first place and save the world? Or will he not even make it to the battle?
Genre: Supernatural, Friendship
Characters: Kyon, Asakura Ryoko
http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?t=102457
If you liked this one, please be sure to support me and at least read the first few lines of my other fics. my FF.net profile link is up and working down at my signature.
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Old 2011-05-23, 18:04   Link #914
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As promised, here is the first chapter of the sequel. Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6695261/..._the_Suzumiyas
You could have made it on 21 though XD. The 3rd coming XD
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Old 2011-05-31, 20:24   Link #915
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I want to apologize for taking so long to update. Here it is!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6695261/..._the_Suzumiyas

Hope you guys enjoy!
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Old 2011-06-21, 16:59   Link #916
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I've finished chapter 3. It's not as long as some of the others, but it's important nevertheless.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6695261/..._the_Suzumiyas

Enjoy!
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Old 2011-06-22, 18:10   Link #917
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Not a bad update Jonbob.

Now THAT is a disturbing thing to vomit out
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Old 2011-06-23, 03:53   Link #918
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Not a bad update Jonbob.

Now THAT is a disturbing thing to vomit out
He technically sneezed it out, but yeah. That thing isn't good. heh...
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Old 2011-10-14, 16:59   Link #919
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Also, I just read The Apology by Durandall, what a total mind bomb... Plausible between Kyon and Tsuruya, but wrong on an infinite number of levels She ain't that stupid or easy...
I didn't think she was particularly stupid, personally, but I guess that's an issue of YMMV. A lot of people think about that story too hard and take it the wrong way, IMO.

If anyone's (still) looking for that link, it's here (now with epic fanart of Tsuruya being insanely cute by Saraparilla). I'm not really on ff.net myself anymore for ... reasons. Anyway:

http://pishoque.net/brian/fanfic/short/apology.htm

Not for everyone. You may instead prefer a milder AU:

http://pishoque.net/brian/fanfic/short/aag.htm

Or its sequel:

http://pishoque.net/brian/fanfic/short/dg.htm

Admittedly. My goals in writing seem to be almost counter to everyone else, here.

Speaking of Sarsaparilla, and to avoid just plugging my own fanfics (though, that certainly seems to be acceptable here), I found these stories immensely worth reading.

Be of strong heart and good cheer; this is a difficult journey with a rewarding end. I felt it was worth it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7087510/...aruhi_Suzumiya

And the spin-off/sequel:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7358613/...he_End_of_Time

And an unrelated, but awesome story about Kyon and Haruhi, and missing memories (A Haruhi story with amnesia as it should be):

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6995765/...aruhi_Suzumiya

And if you think that's not to your tastes, some happy WAFF written by another friend of mine:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7252550/1/Under_Review
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Old 2011-11-29, 01:13   Link #920
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Being.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7593402/1/Koibito

Lovers.
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