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Old 2011-01-11, 11:51   Link #61
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A very darker red works much better IMHO .. dark red blood color... no kindergarten red. I can't sense any menacing feel which I think was your intention.
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Old 2011-01-11, 18:55   Link #62
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Couldn't do a lot to fix the hair, but I tried to sharpen it some.
Also played around with the text, and added an outer glow to the light texture.
C&C/which version is best?

textv1
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6...ilstartish.png

textv2
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/1...lstartish2.png

textv3
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no text
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/6025/notextw.png
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Old 2011-01-11, 19:14   Link #63
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Couldn't do a lot to fix the hair, but I tried to sharpen it some.
Also played around with the text, and added an outer glow to the light texture.
C&C/which version is best?

textv1
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6...ilstartish.png

textv2
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/1...lstartish2.png

textv3
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/408/text3.png

no text
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/6025/notextw.png
I think I like the no text version, personally.
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Old 2011-01-11, 19:18   Link #64
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Newest version, I reworked the render.
The left side doesn't seem to blend very well (background with silhouette and vice versa). Also, the details of the facial profile is a bit lost.

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New try.....



c&c?
Pretty good. Only thing I suggest (aside for the text, which has already been mentioned) is to add realistic light into the yellow sun beams...if that makes any sense.

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Added a light texture. C&C?
If you can, you should animate her actually spinning around.

...and I prefer either the text on top left or no text.

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Version 2
I made 2 versions of version 2. An A and a B, if you will.

A has a deeper shade of red for the expanding power.


B has no red at all.


I also changed the text slightly in both versions. Comments?

Spoiler for Version 1:
The red and blue colours don't go well together. I suggest using one colour but multiple shades. Or use warm colours together (like red, orange, etc)
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Old 2011-01-11, 21:07   Link #65
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Ano, eto... after a few months of absence in Photoshop, here I go. First draft:



C&C, onegai!
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Old 2011-01-11, 21:10   Link #66
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Ano, eto... after a few months of absence in Photoshop, here I go. First draft:



C&C, onegai!
Looking great so far, my only gripe atm is the text's location, I think it looks a little bit weird hovering over their heads like that. I also think the SOTM text, which I just saw, could be a little lighter and perhaps moved a bit to the right?
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Old 2011-01-11, 22:48   Link #67
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Thank you for the advice Halad-sama!

Well, after some more random PS-ing I came up with an updated version and a totally new draft ^^:





Which one is better and what should I improve?

:-?
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Old 2011-01-11, 23:29   Link #68
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Thank you for the advice Halad-sama!

Well, after some more random PS-ing I came up with an updated version and a totally new draft ^^:





Which one is better and what should I improve?

:-?
the second draft is GORGEOUS AS HELL. I think you should go with that one, I really have no complaints
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Old 2011-01-12, 00:49   Link #69
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I'm agreeing with Illusore. The second one's colors are great.

Maybe incorporate the style you did for the text in the V2 of the first one you posted, into this new one. If that makes any sense.
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Old 2011-01-12, 09:11   Link #70
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Mittwoch, to me it's obvious: I would stick with the second one. The only think I would try to rework is the text.

I try something new again, I'm not sure if I should make her all balck or not. C&C would be appreciated.
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Old 2011-01-12, 15:25   Link #71
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Thank you for the advice Halad-sama!

Well, after some more random PS-ing I came up with an updated version and a totally new draft ^^:





Which one is better and what should I improve?

:-?
There both are extremely beautiful!!! But the second one is even more beautiful.
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Old 2011-01-13, 13:02   Link #72
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I made two version

version 1


version 2


witch on is the best? and C&C ?
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Old 2011-01-13, 13:26   Link #73
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@ rikitai sorry to say this but I don't see any difference betweem both version.

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Old 2011-01-13, 13:42   Link #74
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@ rikitai sorry to say this but I don't see any difference betweem both version.
The second version is a slightly darker blue at the top

@Rikikai: I prefer v1 but I would suggest revising the text. It doesn't seem to work well with the sig.
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Old 2011-01-13, 16:24   Link #75
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@ rikitai sorry to say this but I don't see any difference betweem both version.
And the 2nd has more sparkles behind the render >.<

I'd go with the first, though I agree with PreSage that the text feels...hmm, off. You could do something that fits the sig and the render a bit more, no?

Though I like the idea of the sparkles in the 2nd version, I don't like how they're all behind the silhouettes. I might take that idea and try to overlap them a bit in the front.
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Old 2011-01-13, 17:43   Link #76
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This idea suddenly struck me yesterday...one of the most classic and probaby well known silhouettes out there.

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Old 2011-01-13, 18:54   Link #77
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I actually spit my drink out when I remembered where it was from Excellent idea there PreSage
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Old 2011-01-13, 19:06   Link #78
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This idea suddenly struck me yesterday...one of the most classic and probaby well known silhouettes out there.

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Old 2011-01-13, 19:11   Link #79
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... That is totally priceless, PreSage.
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Old 2011-01-13, 19:37   Link #80
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I made two version

version 1


version 2


witch on is the best? and C&C ?
I like v1. But contrary to the others I actually like the text, but that's just me.
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