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Old 2011-02-14, 03:50   Link #221
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Now I want to make a bad guy codenamed Harbinger, with a specialization in hacking.

"I am assuming direct control."

Maybe he could use those unmanned drone-IS for that... No flying it like a pilot, but controlling them from a distance.

Hmm...
Then we need a good guy named Shepard.
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So now... all my three characters portraits have been brushed and polished (redid Alex's Background, Personality, and Chronological Appearance Sections)! Fixed the final description for every single mecha (yes, the girls pilots the two unknown IS I posted earlier).


Spoiler for First, we have our very famous Alex Hikari::



Spoiler for Then, we have his sister, Haruka Hikari:




Spoiler for And we have their dear precious friend, Sarah Delavalliere!:



Will be adding a third fan-fic of their arrival at the school...
I think you might enjoy those two new girls... although I reckon they do arrive a bit late (just Houki gets her better IS, which should be around 2 or 3 episodes away in the anime).
Holy... Awesome drawings.
Did you draw that? Or was it a friend?

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Look on the bright side, at least, you're not part of The Boys group, who now have a nice big X painted on their backs. Prime targets for stabbity-stab action from the new resident yangire(?) "Unlimited Blade Works" girl. But, hey, she's an equal opportunity Paladin arsekicker, ready to bring the pain to Phantom Task and anyone else trying to mess up the World's status quo.
Then, my boy is safe!
He's just a useless engineer who isn't even in the ISA.

Also, I would like to make a suggestion:
Since we have an OC index, why not make a fanfiction index?

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Old 2011-02-14, 04:07   Link #222
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Finally done...I might included more weapon pack(We need MISSILES and LASER)in the future

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Added some lacking information(Not important,but it's needed to make him a 100% trap...)because I forgot

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Old 2011-02-14, 06:41   Link #223
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Oh, delicious, another irregular for Lamby to *cough*stalk!*cough.*

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Then, my boy is safe!
He's just a useless engineer who isn't even in the ISA.
Don't make too many smooth moves, e.g. acquire his own harem, or else Lamby's gonna have to ask the obvious question: how can one engineer be amassing his own private stable of IS pilots, so easily? There MUST be something DEVIOUS going on here!
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Old 2011-02-14, 06:48   Link #224
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Oh, delicious, another irregular for Lamby to *cough*stalk!*cough.*



Don't make too many smooth moves, e.g. acquire his own harem, or else Lamby's gonna have to ask the obvious question: how can one engineer be amassing his own private stable of IS pilots, so easily? There MUST be something DEVIOUS going on here!
Fret not, I'm intending on more serious plot.
I wouldn't know how to deal with a harem anyway.
And who is Lamby?
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Old 2011-02-14, 06:49   Link #225
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Actually 'Askar' is soldier. 'Pahlawan' is warrior.
Hmm...

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Askari, with an additional "i" is the correct spelling. Though it sounds quite malay to me....

How about Stalwart? Steadfast? I know the RSN has pretty cool names for their ships (though about the internal components.....you know ).
I wanted something malay really, hence why I kept trying to shuffle around malay words to hammer that word that exists at the back of my mind but won't come out.

Pahlawan is very close to what I had in mind, but Askari too. At this point, I guess Askari Battle Armor may be a better idea.

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More like an assigned bodyguard by the local embassy.....besides it is established that he wears a stripped down and compacted recon exoskeleton (which the Antelope Pack is derived from) under his formal suit.

And he is like a combat butler, can cook, engineer, fight and most importantly, handle a cold-tempered girl like her.
...[Name] no Gotoku, huh?

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I think I added the side effect of the solution will cause temporary disorientation, so I think we should be all good.

Since the autoinjector comes from the recon exoskeleton, I think it is a good idea that we test the idea out on Rachel's handler first.


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Being a genki girl I thought she might take it in stride that being flat is a moe point, and that "I can run around all I want without two blobs of fat and muscle on my chest bouncing about".
That genki personality is actually Merlion Imouto's personality, and she's obsessed with becoming a true little sister. Thus she copies the most typical reactions from the web, usually getting something wrong in the process.

The Real Karon is closer to Tsukasa from Amagami. She has a calm and confident demeanor which is bothersome as people often see it as cold and calculative. Karon has come to suppress it and let Imouto handle her interpersonal communications.

Once you factor that into the conversation and enter mindspace, this is what you see:

Karon Imouto: ...B is not flat. It's not flat!
The Real Karon: Ara, that is not in character.
Imouto: Heh?! But Onee-chan...
Real: It should have been (changes voice to Imouto's pitch) 'A flat chest is a rarity and a symbol of great demand!' (changes back to usual deadpan) You have much to learn before you are a true Imouto.


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Sounds like Isumi from Hayate No Gotoku. Always lost.
Maria must happen to wander into the strangest places, like the men's bathroom.

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I like it.
*scribbles faster*

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Erika: "Don't worry, they're still growing! I also heard that massaging them with milk helps!"
*Karon tackles Erika and gropes her*

*boing boing*

Erika: W-wait...!
Karon: I see! It really works!!

(btw, I was hoping that Erika and Karon become close friends eventually. Someone needs to break her illusion that her true self is unsightly.)

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Alright. I did say I'm working on two characters, so here Nr. 2
I thought maybe a villian might be not a bad idea, so I made a bad guy.

"Reaper"

It's not his 100% Profile, only what most people know about him. We want the bad guys to be a little mysterious for a while, won't we?
Oh, and the somewhat resemblence to Ichika was intentional
To bad Jun Fukuyama is already taken... well Akira Ishida or Takahiro Sakurai would also fit him. Not quit sure yet.
Sakurai would do fine.

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And a hacking/controller IS is quit a nice idea. Maybe you could make Harbinger a woman named Saren. then we even could use the famous "You are not Saren." quote when the heros accidentialy contact him. xD


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That's... an awful lot of technology for something not IS. Maybe a rail pistol and a vibro-sword instead?

(also, not game about a NSF who uses a sword )

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Oh ho ho ho ho, I'm a-back.

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Can't say you didn't see this coming, folks. With everyone getting along so happily, somebody had to throw in a monkey wrench. Now, there's a sucool wallflower in the neighborhood who might just turn stone cold Terminator killer at the drop of a hat. Like little Miss Golden Darkness...except less gothlolified. Scary, huh~?
Is this for the canon universe? Because Gilgamesh-tan here breaks any sensible sense of sensibilities left in the tenuous tenancy that The Canon Universe has of original characters.

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I argued with myself over equipping a IS combat dagger, just to have at least one CQC weapon, but decided otherwise, as such a poor weapon paired with poor melee capability would seem useless IMO.
Not if she hides it for most part, then jumps into the air for a triple slash at the last moment.

(ie, I see what you did thar)

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And, again, I decided otherwise to involve her in anything related to canon series characters, since I absolutely fail at creating believable relationships and staying in character.
We'll see about that.

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Finally done...I might included more weapon pack(We need MISSILES and LASER)in the future
Maybe work a bit more on the English, and... now we have enough males to form a sentai.

Otherwise, Camille Bidan looks okay.
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Old 2011-02-14, 08:02   Link #226
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And who is Lamby?
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=220 Her. Mysterious "Counter Guardian" and resident stalker, who pwn5 the scrubs usually in dazzling 100+ hit combos.

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Is this for the canon universe? Because Gilgamesh-tan here breaks any sensible sense of sensibilities left in the tenuous tenancy that The Canon Universe has of original characters.
Well, this is the canon verse version of her. Haven't specified who she works for on the grounds of mystery plot, but suffice to say, she's a "Lawful Neutral" wild card, who will attempt to pwn the hell out of anyone that becomes a singularity that disrupts the World's "Order". Naturally, this includes Orimura Ichika himself once her investigation (read: STALKING) has concluded, while Phantom Task is happily at the top of her hitlist for terminally smokin' stylishly sexy stabbity-stab action.

How she does it is plain to see, considering her IS is on the level of Silver Gospel, except specialized purely as an Anti-IS unit, for Zero Shifting Gates of *** stabbity-stab action.

"Remarks: know your place, WORMFOOD. OBLITERATE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE the DEATH. DEATH is the great EQUALIZER."
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Old 2011-02-14, 09:28   Link #227
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Well, this is the canon verse version of her. Haven't specified who she works for on the grounds of mystery plot, but suffice to say, she's a "Lawful Neutral" wild card, who will attempt to pwn the hell out of anyone that becomes a singularity that disrupts the World's "Order". Naturally, this includes Orimura Ichika himself once her investigation (read: STALKING) has concluded, while Phantom Task is happily at the top of her hitlist for terminally smokin' stylishly sexy stabbity-stab action.

How she does it is plain to see, considering her IS is on the level of Silver Gospel, except specialized purely as an Anti-IS unit, for Zero Shifting Gates of *** stabbity-stab action.

"Remarks: know your place, WORMFOOD. OBLITERATE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE the DEATH. DEATH is the great EQUALIZER."
The swords rained unrelentless, chipping and impaling the brave Stratos' armor.

"Remarks: know your place, WORMFOOD. OBLITERATE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE the DEATH."

The last blade lance through Merlion's chest and dug into the hull of the IS. Karon screamed red blood.

"Kha!!" Saji hollered and dove at the tactical console again, but was held back by Three Diagram and Sherry.

"DEATH is the great EQUALIZER!!" She cackled as the hulk of an IS fell on her knees.

"Arara."

Lambda switched to a delighted sneer. "Oh, so you still can move, Shooting Star Girl."

Gou spat out some bloodied dirt. "Oh yes, I can. What a waste of breath this has been..."

"'Rules'... 'Order'... 'Punishment'..." Karon laughed. "They are excuses used by those too weak to lead on their own."

"What did you say?!"

"Yes, I want power... Yes, I want to bring order and justice to this twisted world..."

Merlion creaked to her feet.

"But..."

The IS frame grasped the blade cruxifying pilot to armor.

"I never doubted my friends to come through in the end!!" Gou roared as she yanked the weapon free in a shower of blood.

"I believe in myself who believes in them!!!" Karon cast Ea away. "As long as I do that, I, no, we cannot be defeated!"

Karon pulled out her control yolk, barely remaining conscious as the IS kept her body out of shock. "Let's go, Imouto!"

The AI materialized her silver self beside her pilot, grasping a similar device. "Yes, Onee-chan!"

"Third Shift, set up!" They screamed with their entire beings, thrusting their cores into the air. “APPRIPOISE!!

The twin drives resonated and exploded into brilliant pink, shockwaves washing out in all directions, striking Lambda with such force that even Ea had to struggle to remain in one spot.

“They have achieved Third Shift?!”

The Merlion jettisoned its shattered armor and absorbed the blades, remolding and reforming the debris anew. Starting with the overhead claws, the triplet Yggdra Engines washed rainbows over the wounded body, heralding its second birth. The Matador bazookas exploded and reformed as Strike Cannons; the Leopards claws became adorned with brilliant gold. And Karon's shredded inner suit dissolved into golden butterflies.

Dazzling the stage!” A lavish skirt rolled down the girl’s hips in a tumble of shining stars.

The Galactic Pretty Boy!!” An equally-Baroque blouse blinked around her small frame.

MERLION! RE-BOOOOOOORNS!!

“A girl can be a Galactic Pretty Boy?!” Rachel exclaimed.

"Since you insist on this false path," the AI and pilot of Merlion Reborns shouted in unison. "I'll just have to shatter that illusion of yours with my claws!!"



~~~~~~

Karon woke with a start. Another weird magical girl dream?!

"That's the last time we're having Rin's mudpies before lights out!!"

"Heeeh!!" Imouto groaned.

~~~~~~

(OOC: Heh... Too much crack for one night)
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Old 2011-02-14, 10:43   Link #228
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MeisterBabylon, how would Laura react when Edward gives her the 'Roy thousand yard stare' ? The stare that Roy gives to Lust when he delivered the final blow I mean. Would she be a little intimidated/scared ?
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How she does it is plain to see,"
Via the power of unsupported and unrealistic wank like roughly 50% of the other god mechs in this thread.
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Old 2011-02-14, 11:24   Link #230
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I wanted something malay really, hence why I kept trying to shuffle around malay words to hammer that word that exists at the back of my mind but won't come out.

Pahlawan is very close to what I had in mind, but Askari too. At this point, I guess Askari Battle Armor may be a better idea.
I think Pahlawan is a good idea. But shouldn't we leave the Malay names to the Malaysian IS-es?

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That genki personality is actually Merlion Imouto's personality, and she's obsessed with becoming a true little sister. Thus she copies the most typical reactions from the web, usually getting something wrong in the process.

The Real Karon is closer to Tsukasa from Amagami. She has a calm and confident demeanor which is bothersome as people often see it as cold and calculative. Karon has come to suppress it and let Imouto handle her interpersonal communications.
I was thinking that Karon is closer to Dokuro or Neptune. Imouto seems to be a little messy for an AI.

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*Karon tackles Erika and gropes her*

*boing boing*

Erika: W-wait...!
Karon: I see! It really works!!

(btw, I was hoping that Erika and Karon become close friends eventually. Someone needs to break her illusion that her true self is unsightly.)
Rachel : Wait! You can't just grab someone from there....THAT IS SO WRONG! STOP IT ALREADY!

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That's... an awful lot of technology for something not IS. Maybe a rail pistol and a vibro-sword instead?

(also, not game about a NSF who uses a sword )
Well given the fact that males don't have the power of IS-es to aid them in combat, they have to use technology to get an upper hand. The SP-T3 (Specialised Pistol - Tactical 3) has a linear accelerator built in, and the prototype version which fires plasma bolts (SP-P3) is equipped to the Cosmic Shroud Kai. Besides he plays a part in the building of that module.

Spoiler for future spoilers:


I tried drawing Helena, but it wasn't as good with pencil marks and smudges all over the place.

Spoiler for Helena:


I created a mess of the pic because I could not decide on her hairstyle and hair-decs. Her wolf ears hairband is a little hard to draw....maybe I'll give up for now and draw Kari first.
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Old 2011-02-14, 12:06   Link #231
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Via the power of unsupported and unrealistic wank like roughly 50% of the other god mechs in this thread.
I've been continually downgrading my IS to keep it fair and quite frankly, fun. It's not all to entertaining in a battle when your IS can drop an opponent with ease whenever the pilot decides it's go-time.
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Blargh, characters popping up here and there. Woot, omg!


Time to REVISE The OC Chart... with lots more details!
So I was tired of having to link to different posts every single time.
When someone thinks his OC is complete, could he either compact everything in one post or put it up on google docs?


Here's the new and updated OC Character List. Of course, as it is Alex Hikari that's writing it, the Omega Division's stamp is on it. :P



Infinite Stratos Canon Universe Character List!

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Via the power of unsupported and unrealistic wank like roughly 50% of the other god mechs in this thread.
There are only two Godlike IS units in this thread. Belial in his second form (he is still far from invulnerable, reaching a power level a slightly superior to Byakushiki 2nd form), and JE's Gilgamesh-tan (being on the same level as Silver Gospel, looks like a game breaker)

Silver Maiden and Lumine are still stronger than your generic IS, but I'd suggest you guys to see them like "late level" units. The pilots themselves might appear early (if Houki getting Aka Tsubaki is early in your fic), but should mostly not be using their IS because either they're "Somewhere else" or "Busy doing other stuff".

The same would go for Alex, although as I did say before, stick him into the trainer IS for his early appearances. Belial should show up later perhaps.


JE's Gilgamesh-tan is kinda balanced in the way that she isn't always your "nice guy". She's the wild card, attacking allies and foes alike, so we might get her to fight us at one time.

*Imagines epic fight between Gilgamesh-tan and the three Omega Division members.*

Of course, hilarity would ensue as Haruka would STILL be acting like the Onee-san to Alex, yelling orders at him (well, she's higher ranked technically, being a Captain vs Alex being a Lieutenant).

Meister, I don't think Imouto could handle Ea alone... if ever you plan on fighting her in your story, you should have quite a lot of people to handle her... being made by JE, she DOES border on SRW limits. XD



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Holy... Awesome drawings.
Did you draw that? Or was it a friend?
The portrait of my characters was made by me. Some shooping skills, I didnt' draw anything out there. Took the face of some chars I knew that looked the closest to how I imagined my own OCs, did some editing, changed the colors a bit. the contrast, the brightness, etc...

I then played the Infinite Stratos Vids in HQ, screenshotted parts where the girls or Ichika did a nice pose, and proceeded into shooping everything together.






Also, to the other authors: About the relationship developments for my chars outside of the circle between them, here's the sum up of my ideas (some are old):


- Alex becomes a good friend with Edward. Often does a complaint chorus with Saji about the girls. Befriends Monori as well (he keeps his somewhat cold and stoic personality though)

- Sarah becomes friends very fast with Charlottes (French Woman). She perhaps gets along very well with Erika as both are the "kind hearted" type. Gets along the Karon/Rachel/Helena group and joins it when she's not with Haruka and Alex perhaps?

- Haruka, being Haruka, mostly cares about Sarah and Alex... She's sociable with everyone else, but doesn't seem to like bother talking to them too often.
If we get a Yamato Nadesico, she might befriend her (Lyn was of that type).

As for James, feel free to use the two chars. They do have a dark background that you can exploit in your alternate universe if you want.



P.S: If guys think that the power levels for your IS is wrong, just tell me, I'll adjust it.
Also, came up with the fan-fic index!

Infinite Stratos Fan-Fiction List!
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Old 2011-02-14, 16:25   Link #233
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http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=220 Her. Mysterious "Counter Guardian" and resident stalker, who pwn5 the scrubs usually in dazzling 100+ hit combos.

...

How she does it is plain to see, considering her IS is on the level of Silver Gospel, except specialized purely as an Anti-IS unit, for Zero Shifting Gates of *** stabbity-stab action.

"Remarks: know your place, WORMFOOD. OBLITERATE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE the DEATH. DEATH is the great EQUALIZER."
*scratches head* You know... I kept thinking and thinking... well... I seem not to be creative enough... don't know how Reaper could counter something like this except a huge boost in powerlevel and this is the one thing I don't really want.
Ok or his stealth systems are actually good enough to fool her "hardened sensor suite intended to defeat all manner of stealth systems and ECM".

Blame my incompetence in creating good stories and characters... but I totaly ran against a wall here... it makes my character feel somewaht obsolete, as he should be there as something threatening that could just appear out of nowhere.

...

And... Well... we have Lambda for this role now, have we?

Well at least both don't need to excist in the same universe. ^^

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(btw, I was hoping that Erika and Karon become close friends eventually. Someone needs to break her illusion that her true self is unsightly.)
Well as Erika also needs to learn to have more confidence in herself, I don't see anything against some kind of two-sided beneficial relationship here.

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Sakurai would do fine.
I think so too... he voices more gloomy characters quit well. xD

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Here's the new and updated OC Character List. Of course, as it is Alex Hikari that's writing it, the Omega Division's stamp is on it. :P

Infinite Stratos Canon Universe Character List!
Awesome list! But you're missing an "e" here. It's spelled "Sovereign".
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Old 2011-02-14, 18:30   Link #234
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Okay, so it has come to my attention that Alice's personality is quite bland. I edited it a tad, but I still find it unappealing and uninteresting. Someone, please help me out. I'm no good with this kind of thing (or really anything here for that matter ).

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Terminator, this Omega division you keep using, can you elaborate on it for me? It sounds like an interesting concept, and I've been thinking of making my own original organization for Alice to be associated with, and further her history, but I'm blank, and would like something to work around; that something being an idea-skeleton of your Omega Division's.
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Old 2011-02-14, 21:14   Link #235
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*scratches head* You know... I kept thinking and thinking... well... I seem not to be creative enough... don't know how Reaper could counter something like this except a huge boost in powerlevel and this is the one thing I don't really want.
Ok or his stealth systems are actually good enough to fool her "hardened sensor suite intended to defeat all manner of stealth systems and ECM".

Blame my incompetence in creating good stories and characters... but I totaly ran against a wall here... it makes my character feel somewhat obsolete, as he should be there as something threatening that could just appear out of nowhere.

...

And... Well... we have Lambda for this role now, have we?

Well at least both don't need to excist in the same universe. ^^



Well as Erika also needs to learn to have more confidence in herself, I don't see anything against some kind of two-sided beneficial relationship here.



I think so too... he voices more gloomy characters quit well. xD



Awesome list! But you're missing an "e" here. It's spelled "Sovereign".
Name problem fixed.
Reaper would make a fine villain as he is. It's not Reaper that's the problem, James's Ea is actually the overpowered lady here.
But as Ea's seems to be quite the "wild card", she isn't under control, and often acts as both good and bad guy.
We can always remember that not everything boils down to IS combat when you're a villain. Reaper could easily sabotage like half of the school's IS or activate an "IS Activation Inhibitor" just to get his plan done. Or some other evil plan to get his objectives achieved.

By the way Kyral, I would advise you to check Alex's Hikari biography, scroll down to the info on his IS, and look at Sovreign's Cousin. XD
A fight between the two Stealth residents would be fun!

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Okay, so it has come to my attention that Alice's personality is quite bland. I edited it a tad, but I still find it unappealing and uninteresting. Someone, please help me out. I'm no good with this kind of thing (or really anything here for that matter ).

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Terminator, this Omega division you keep using, can you elaborate on it for me? It sounds like an interesting concept, and I've been thinking of making my own original organization for Alice to be associated with, and further her history, but I'm blank, and would like something to work around; that something being an idea-skeleton of your Omega Division's.
Your Alice currently looks like a half-mix between the "onee-san" and the "stoic", hmm, like a smaller version of Haruka. We have quite a lot of stoics here, I was wondering if some of us could modify the posersonality of their chars. I'm thinking of switching Alex from "Stoic Mode" to some more "less generic" personality.

As for Omega Division, details on the company are spread around in my three characters biographies. Here are the excerpts of the info from Alex's and Haruka's documents:

Spoiler for Omega Division Information:


As you can see, it's some form of "in the shadow" organization that meddles around, being "good" and "bad" guys at the same time. Alex's and Haruka's background story in their biography docs might enlighten you up on how it looks like.

The organization ranges from Lawful Neutral to Chaotic Evil characters.

I'm eventually planning for one last guy that might be quite an assistance to Reaper...
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Old 2011-02-14, 21:22   Link #236
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I was pretty much intending an onee-san at this point, but -being me- I have little ability to describe such a character.

Damn, Omega nearly covers everything I'd intend in an organization of my own. :\
Not only is it associated with America, it's underground, meaning that any other secretive groups wouldn't be too secret after all. And like in the old West, one town can sometimes be too small for the two of us.
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I've been continually downgrading my IS to keep it fair and quite frankly, fun. It's not all to entertaining in a battle when your IS can drop an opponent with ease whenever the pilot decides it's go-time.
Your's wasn't that bad to start with the firepower seemed a bit too high, but it was otherwise not that bad and had notable weak points. It also mostly stuck with established stuff (a big ass beam cannon is hardly unthinkable). My issue is with guys just making up random new systems with basically no precedent teleporting, cloaks that also somehow double as I-fields, "one hit kill" melee weapons and so on. (when a melee weapon so powerful it has to drain shield energy can't manage that in canon), and advacned non IS power armor.

Honestly if this was say a One Year War thread like half the cast would be new types piloting custom gundams or something. I don't mind people having there own assigned IS, I'm not looking to be a Nazi, but Gen 3 is NEW. Units of that level are still rare and most models should be customized mass production units of late Gen 2 at most. Instead everyone and there mother is busting out one off Gen 3 or even higher super prototypes and crap. I can perfectly understand wanting to stand out a bit and tailor your fighting style, but there's a fine line between that and just ignoring the setting and becoming overpowered and unrealistic.
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Your's wasn't that bad to start with the firepower seemed a bit too high, but it was otherwise not that bad and had notable weak points. It also mostly stuck with established stuff (a big ass beam cannon is hardly unthinkable). My issue is with guys just making up random new systems with basically no precedent teleporting, cloaks that also somehow double as I-fields, "one hit kill" melee weapons and so on. (when a melee weapon so powerful it has to drain shield energy can't manage that in canon)

Honestly if this was say a One Year War thread like half the cast would be new types piloting custom gundams or something. I don't mind people having there own assigned IS, I'm not looking to be a Nazi, but Gen 3 is NEW units in it are rare and most models should be customized mass production units. Instead everyone and there mother is busting out one off Gen 3 or even higher super prototypes and crap.
The "one hit kill" things are just "for the phear factor". Plot often dictates that one hit kills only work against mooks.
Yukihura can manage one hit kills... it just needs to score a correct slash/hit. Same goes for my own units.

The tech beyond Belial's mysterious abilities is what I'll explore in my fan-fic. It's been explained pretty much that Belial is a one of a kind experiment that yielded very high end weapons.
Take in account that when screwing around with multiple units, Belial will fail, as it was made for short terms engagements.

Other than that... as I listed in my list, I don't see so many "god" units. Mind giving us a complete list of what you think is overpowered?


edit: Btw... Every single IS has an I-Field. XD
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The "one hit kill" things are just "for the phear factor". Plot often dictates that one hit kills only work against mooks.
Yukihura can manage one hit kills... it just needs to score a correct slash/hit. Same goes for my own units.

The tech beyond Belial's mysterious abilities is what I'll explore in my fan-fic. It's been explained pretty much that Belial is a one of a kind experiment that yielded very high end weapons.
Take in account that when screwing around with multiple units, Belial will fail, as it was made for short terms engagements.

Other than that... as I listed in my list, I don't see so many "god" units. Mind giving us a complete list of what you think is overpowered?


edit: Btw... Every single IS has an I-Field. XD
Everything you just said only further his assumptions as correct. Belial is a high-powered super-IS. I don't care too much personally, but I certainly would avoid confronting it in any fanfiction; mine or another's.

He meant that it was strange that the cloak could also serve as an I-Field, not that it was strange that an I-Field was present.
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