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Old 2011-02-22, 18:08   Link #29381
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THE GRAND FINALE WOOHOO (orsomeshit)

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It's a final episode too fucking epic to fit in one forum post!

Enjoy.

false light
a false light casts a darker Shadow...

Spoiler for Chapter 9 (part one):



(continued in next post)
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Old 2011-02-22, 18:09   Link #29382
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Spoiler for Chapter 9 (part two):


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Old 2011-02-22, 18:32   Link #29383
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Teana gets a Device/weapon upgrade!

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Old 2011-02-22, 22:34   Link #29384
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Spoiler for author's notes:
*mind broken due to sheer awesome and funny ending*
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Old 2011-02-22, 22:36   Link #29385
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false light, chapter 9, part 1
There are quite a number of spoken lines that lack quotation marks around them for some reason.
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Old 2011-02-22, 23:07   Link #29386
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My own response is rather similar to RadiantBeam's. Coherent review to follow at some future date when brain is properly functioning. Let's see...Dragon Age, maybe, for Stele's incarnated-magic form?

(Heh, you crossed me up in that fight, too, as I was expecting what Tea was trying to set up was a Starlight Breaker...as in, since Stele was now nothing but living magic, to try and absorb him outright. I liked Lulu's final spell, too...it was sort of like half of a summon. )

I don't know if this is the same thing Jimmy C was noticing, but I noted that a lot of the telepathic-communication dialogue weren't set off in italics or any other way to distinguish them from standard narration.

Interesting ending...I'm intrigued by where you want to take the truth, particularly with questions of how advanced Earth's "secret magic projects" may or may not have become and how the Bureau plans to contact Earth's governments without causing global panic or necessitating invasion...lots of fun ahead there.

(You know, it's been really fun reading this story and seeing such a...well-adjusted Shadow!Lutecia, so different from where she's at in the "present" of the 'Verse. )
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Old 2011-02-22, 23:40   Link #29387
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A FIC APPROACHES

COMMAND?

It's a final episode too fucking epic to fit in one forum post!

Enjoy.

false light
a false light casts a darker Shadow...
Dezo beat me to most of what I had to say ^^.

I also expected Teana to unleash a Starlight Breaker, but Lutecia's attack was really cool .

Celica thinking that she never expected to die of old age anyway was a nice moment for me...it really shows how despite the relative "secret-spy-conspiracy-coolness" treatment that the Shadows get (well, sometimes get ) in these spin-off fics, despite the fact that most of the NSIS agents are volunteers, despite the fact that they'll never get credit for what they do...their life expectancy isn't very good. While only RB has been gutsy enough to kill off a CC so far (in AU fanon, at least! ), you did a really good job of making me feel for an OC to the point that I was startled at the reminder of early mortality for people like her.

Great job, Syn .
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Old 2011-02-22, 23:46   Link #29388
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*mind broken due to sheer awesome and funny ending*
You should actually give your impressions beyond that at some point.

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There are quite a number of spoken lines that lack quotation marks around them for some reason.
The forums don't transfer my formatting over. They're supposed to be italicized in the word processor I wrote this in. Adding quotes would make them appear to be spoken dialogue when in fact the dialogue is via thoughtspeech.

I wanted to go back and italicize everything, but I'm too lazy and I had to get to class. The formatting will be correct when I post it to FanFiction.Net.

Spoiler for Response to Dezo under spoilers due to spoileryness:
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Spoiler for Teana's Travels Book 1 Ch. 19 - Two Betrayals:
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Old 2011-02-23, 03:00   Link #29390
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Sorry for the late-ish update , I've been studying for exams . But anyway, here's a new chapter!

Blood Calls To Blood

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Spoiler for Blood Calls To Blood, chapter 3:

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Old 2011-02-23, 05:22   Link #29391
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Chapter 9 of false light is up on FanFiction.Net. The formatting transfers over there properly, so you shouldn't have any issues confusing thoughtspeech with dialogue missing quotes.

Linky!
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Old 2011-02-23, 05:42   Link #29392
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Sorry for the late-ish update , I've been studying for exams . But anyway, here's a new chapter!

Blood Calls To Blood

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Spoiler for Blood Calls To Blood, chapter 3:

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Old 2011-02-23, 08:33   Link #29393
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Sorry for the late-ish update , I've been studying for exams . But anyway, here's a new chapter!

Blood Calls To Blood

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Spoiler for Blood Calls To Blood, chapter 3:
Another awesome chapter; can't wait to see how it ends.

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No flames for the unintentional NanoFate scene please! It just...happened , but it fit so I left it in. Besides, it's not like I made any conclusive statement about the exact nature of their relationship anyway, right?
HOW DARE YOU?!?!?!?!

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Chapter 4 may take me a bit of time; it depends on if I get talked out of certain nefarious plans I might have for editing the last chapter, hehehe ....(j/k, but I'm not very happy with it, so I'll need to do intensive editing and I won't have much time for it this week. I'll do my best!
Editing is a bitch, isn't it?
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Old 2011-02-23, 09:10   Link #29394
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I didn't, no. I haven't added anything to it that that the manga hasn't. I did have Nanoha preserve inertia during a Flash Step, but that was my own interpretation of a possibility. Although when Erio uses a Sonic Move to bounce up the escalator and catch Caro, there seems to be some inertia left over that sends them both to the ground. However, not sure that would be classified as a teleport, although they seem to classify all such spells in the more nebulous "movement magic" category.

Currently evaluating a few different ideas for the scene. I'm still working under the assumption the Hucks do use magic, so Deville's spell would be magical, and that Vivio could use her own magic to interfere and prevent it from happening, due to holding onto him. I'd be working under the assumption that Deville isn't as quite as advanced as Yuuno to forcibly teleport someone against their will if they are strong enough to resist.
Noted. I was considering that whether the spell preserves inertia or not has tactical implications to be taken into account.

Then again, I suppose you knew that.
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Old 2011-02-23, 09:34   Link #29395
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false light
a false light casts a darker Shadow...
\o/

I'm especially proud of the Hayate/Chrono scene. That's exactly what I imagined. Neither of them would be like that to each other if they didn't care.

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Blood Calls To Blood
Chapter 3
This one just gets more and more interesting. I do think Vivio's a little more talkative than she should be about things that are kinda private, though. Maybe have Precia attempt to coax it out of her?

And am I the only one completely skeeved out by the IMightBeNice!Precia or NiceForAGoal!Precia?
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Old 2011-02-23, 16:43   Link #29396
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No update yesterday on account of me being too damned exhausted from work.

(No, really, it's like Saturday never freaking ended!)

Shine 1 -45

Shine 46

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Shine Part 47:
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Old 2011-02-23, 17:15   Link #29397
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No update yesterday on account of me being too damned exhausted from work.

(No, really, it's like Saturday never freaking ended!)

Shine 1 -45

Shine 46

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Shine Part 47:
A harsh task mistress is Luna Inverse. At least it will keep Arissa alive I guess.
I probably should have said this after the last chapter but "Vessel of the Blue Dragon" Arissa well, best character introduction for like... 100 parts. The only one that matched that was Chaos!Nanoha back in A's.
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Old 2011-02-23, 17:50   Link #29398
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This reminds me of a Season 1 Sound stage where Kyouya gets possesed by a Jewel Seed and start attacking swimer girls, Arisa included xDU.
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Old 2011-02-23, 17:50   Link #29399
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