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Old 2011-02-19, 23:31   Link #1
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Thumbs up The Highly Anticipated Tag Comic is here!

Hello out there. I'm just trying to get some feedback for my comic, TAG. It's just been copyrighted and hopefully publish within the year. Your comments would be greatly appreciated! Thanks for taking the time out to read it.











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Old 2011-02-19, 23:34   Link #2
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I'm having a difficult time adding my images on here so I just created a link. I hope this isn't against the rules or anything...
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Old 2011-02-20, 02:17   Link #3
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I'm having a difficult time adding my images on here so I just created a link. I hope this isn't against the rules or anything...
Yes it is:

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Use a hosting site like Imageshack if you want to show some samples of your work.
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Old 2011-02-20, 08:45   Link #4
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Ok thanks! I'll do that!
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Old 2011-02-20, 15:25   Link #5
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Hello out there. I'm just trying to get some feedback for my comic, TAG...
There's not much to say, other than compliment the artwork. What's the plot? Who are the characters?
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Old 2011-02-20, 18:26   Link #6
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There's not much to say, other than compliment the artwork. What's the plot? Who are the characters?


I think his comic is up now. Or at least, a part of it.
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Old 2011-02-20, 18:39   Link #7
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Read through your eleven pages and the character images and it's very clean. Nice job! The plot seems interesting and I would certainly check it out if it got published. I'm guessing this is merely a prologue but if not I'd say you could be moving too fast. Otherwise I can only offer positive comment--this contains very unique artwork, an intriguing concept, and has a very strong identity. As long as the rest is consistent with these pages and your characters dialogue is strong and your development well executed then it will be very publishable.

I wish you all the best and drop a line on this thread if this goes further.
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Old 2011-02-20, 22:32   Link #8
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Here are the rest of the pages:


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Old 2011-02-21, 08:36   Link #9
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There's not much to say, other than compliment the artwork. What's the plot? Who are the characters?

I managed to put up rest of the comic. Take a look and tell us what you think!
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Old 2011-02-21, 08:38   Link #10
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Read through your eleven pages and the character images and it's very clean. Nice job! The plot seems interesting and I would certainly check it out if it got published. I'm guessing this is merely a prologue but if not I'd say you could be moving too fast. Otherwise I can only offer positive comment--this contains very unique artwork, an intriguing concept, and has a very strong identity. As long as the rest is consistent with these pages and your characters dialogue is strong and your development well executed then it will be very publishable.

I wish you all the best and drop a line on this thread if this goes further.

Thank you so much for your comments. The rest of Chapter 1 is out! Take a look when you can and give us your feedback!
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Old 2011-02-21, 23:09   Link #11
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Thanks for all the feedback. We have more chapters coming soon.
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Old 2011-02-23, 06:14   Link #12
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Had a look at the other half. Still very good and consistent. I don't know how far you've got with this or what you've planned but its potential is high. You have an intriguing style and approach and I'd certainly be interested if I saw this on a shelf in a store. My only negative stays the same in that I think you're moving a bit too fast; for example, his brother dies a little to quickly/early for me to empathise enough for impact, plus, the fighting could be extended a little with his escape explained more. I'd also say that it would be better to lead through a bit more dialogue in replacement of the monologue narration as it tends to draw the reader in more readily and provides us with a feel for the character's attitude. I hope this criticism is constructive without being disheartening in anyway--I really think this is a strong piece of work and I am enjoying the premise.
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Old 2011-02-26, 17:15   Link #13
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Old 2011-03-03, 16:18   Link #14
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What I really like about your creation is the level of quality. It's simply amazing. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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