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Old 2011-03-20, 04:16   Link #9321
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So, rewatched a good portion of the series in the last week, when I saw the description of the linker core in the movie, and Nanoha's meditation to try to get hers back up to scratch after she gets BoD'd. . . Well, all I can think of is that a mage that practiced various forms of Chinese qigong every day might be a dangerous opponent indeed.

So I've got an OC idea, strictly in the fledgling state, for a mage whose main focus is less on external projection of magic, but internal reinforcement of themselves and martial arts. Since that sort of training likely would also serve to strengthen the linker core's output, it'd serve as a double-reinforcement. In a fight, they'd be functionally a fisticuffs/tank Knight like Zafira or Subaru, with a little less shooting/technical magic, and more crazy-fast and tough as hell-ness.
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Err... isn't internal reinforcement through magic and martial arts and such the entire idea behind the Belkan Knights? Even more so with Vivio and Einhart and Rio. Especially Einhart.
What he said. This was why I once thought about a Belkadi enhanced human who learns how to fuse cyborg energy and natural mana together to create a power unlike anything in recent memory.
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Old 2011-03-20, 07:37   Link #9322
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What he said. This was why I once thought about a Belkadi enhanced human who learns how to fuse cyborg energy and natural mana together to create a power unlike anything in recent memory.
Agrh. All this Belka talk makes me want to start my fic's Belka Arc >_<
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Old 2011-03-21, 10:41   Link #9323
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Hmmmm, a parody of Life of Brian with Vivio...
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Old 2011-03-21, 17:57   Link #9324
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Agrh. All this Belka talk makes me want to start my fic's Belka Arc >_<
Better get started. For some reason, I got a feeling that Dog Days might stir a small revival.
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Old 2011-03-22, 01:13   Link #9325
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Ooohkay.

Try as I resist, this inspiration is making it impossible for me to write other things I actually need to write, so I guess I'll have to be getting this ball rolling.

OC #1, as of the unwritten, untitled Chapter 1:

Name: Kyuji Forrester
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
World of Origin: Earth
Factional Association(s): An unspecified SAR team in the mid- or southwest USA
Magic Style: None
Specialization: Chinese martial arts
Elemental Affinity: Unknown
Rank: Untested

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Spoiler for Combat Capabilities:


So that's the prototype of the protagonist. I'm afraid my only talent is for writing self-insert characters. . . and so Kyuji's starting point is more or less where I see myself a year and a half from now. His name is intentionally tacky, and there will be more such things in that vein. This isn't likely to be GOOD fan fiction, so I figured on that account I wasn't likely to lose anything with misplaced Japanese (and of course the traditional car puns). Your work should know what it is, eh?

Anyway, I'm drafting the first bit of the story. The bio is short compared to the standard skillset lists, but Kyuji has yet to encounter magic yet; figure it's the prologue and that part of the menu is greyed out. The story starts on earth and may be initially short on action, but you can't refuse your muse, and mine seems to be stirring in her sleep.

Addendum: I seem to have forgotten about that questionaire thing. I'll get back to ya on that.
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Old 2011-03-22, 03:21   Link #9326
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Ooohkay.

Try as I resist, this inspiration is making it impossible for me to write other things I actually need to write, so I guess I'll have to be getting this ball rolling.

OC #1, as of the unwritten, untitled Chapter 1:

Name: Kyuji Forrester
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
World of Origin: Earth
Factional Association(s): An unspecified SAR team in the mid- or southwest USA
Magic Style: None
Specialization: Chinese martial arts
Elemental Affinity: Unknown
Rank: Untested

Spoiler for Character Profile:


Spoiler for Combat Capabilities:


So that's the prototype of the protagonist. I'm afraid my only talent is for writing self-insert characters. . . and so Kyuji's starting point is more or less where I see myself a year and a half from now. His name is intentionally tacky, and there will be more such things in that vein. This isn't likely to be GOOD fan fiction, so I figured on that account I wasn't likely to lose anything with misplaced Japanese (and of course the traditional car puns). Your work should know what it is, eh?

Anyway, I'm drafting the first bit of the story. The bio is short compared to the standard skillset lists, but Kyuji has yet to encounter magic yet; figure it's the prologue and that part of the menu is greyed out. The story starts on earth and may be initially short on action, but you can't refuse your muse, and mine seems to be stirring in her sleep.

Addendum: I seem to have forgotten about that questionaire thing. I'll get back to ya on that.
Nice, he's a geologist and knows kung-fu

Also don't worry, some OCs start "normal" and become stronger as the story advances (like my male OC )

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Better get started. For some reason, I got a feeling that Dog Days might stir a small revival.
I'll be picking up where I left off for now. Need to fill the gap before moving on to it
And there's still some funny/fluffy "events" to be done
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Old 2011-03-22, 13:23   Link #9327
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We need some Walla. It's been a while. Gore. Yuri. Nothing special and quite short.

If it wasn't for the possible tie-in in the future, that is.

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Old 2011-03-30, 07:04   Link #9328
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Finally, I'm posting another piece of Reverie of Golden Lotus
Also trying to write in a different style...maybe I'm not cut out for this >_>

Still, here goes:

Reverie of Golden Lotus


Spoiler for Part 2: Encounter and Name:

And, the preview of the next part...

Spoiler for Part 3 Preview:

Next will be a mix of Maren's point of view and 3rd person.

Also, I'll try to pick up the pace from now on
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Old 2011-04-02, 13:19   Link #9329
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I really should get back to working on Divergent Strikers, but I'm enjoying Witches Over the Persian Sea too much. Oh well.

In other news, a snippet of a planned scene from Divergent Strikers:

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Old 2011-04-04, 18:51   Link #9330
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So, it's been a while sinc ethe last time I submitted a drawing here, after the countless mesages sugesting in good (and not so good) ways to improve art, I'd like to show 'Something', an art an version of one of the most popular and used OCs here, which is Takamachi Keroko, and so, after some time on the drawing desk, her's the result.



My version of Takamachi Keroko, or, an outfit she would use on Nanoha Revolution, making her more unique (im appearance) instead than a Nanoha/Vivio with diferent colors.
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Old 2011-04-05, 01:39   Link #9331
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Thanks Rick, it's always flatering to see people draw art of my character.

*taps chin* Hmm... come to think about it, I can use this design. It looks good.
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Old 2011-04-05, 02:23   Link #9332
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Something reminds me of Weissritter here...

Rick, drop those belly muscle marks. Keroko's not that skinny/muscular.

*is vaporized*

Keroko: ARE YOU IMPLYING THAT I'M FAT?!?!?!

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Old 2011-04-05, 07:29   Link #9333
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Old 2011-04-05, 12:50   Link #9334
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Thanks Rick, it's always flatering to see people draw art of my character.

*taps chin* Hmm... come to think about it, I can use this design. It looks good.
Thanks, glad u liked her.

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Something reminds me of Weissritter here...

Rick, drop those belly muscle marks. Keroko's not that skinny/muscular.

*is vaporized*

Keroko: ARE YOU IMPLYING THAT I'M FAT?!?!?!

I'm pretty sure she spends some hours at the gym every day

So.... hummm, how about a Syn drawing now?
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Old 2011-04-05, 14:36   Link #9335
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does look more scrawny than muscular :/ good drawing tho, keep at it ^^
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Old 2011-04-05, 14:52   Link #9336
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Thanks, glad u liked her.
I do, I love the outfit design. Shoes are a tad big but.. eh, with the basics down I can work that out. You should work on the Forehead of Doom though. That still needs improvement.
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Old 2011-04-06, 21:49   Link #9337
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I'll just leave this here.

Spoiler for MLFN - The Honorbound - Prologue:
More coming, eventually.
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Old 2011-04-16, 07:28   Link #9338
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Waa~i \o/ Another piece done /o/

So, here goes:

Reverie of Golden Lotus


Spoiler for Part 3: Confession and Farewell:

Finally, Scarlet gets her long awaited debut
She'll participate in a few more chapters, some coming very soon

This chapter also explains a few things that were left unanswered in WindS-B (Because I rushed to do it )
Even so, I'll do a brief explanation of it:

Spoiler for "Madness":

As for the next incoming piece, we'll be going back to the "present", a certain two will be having a date soon :3

Until then o/
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Old 2011-04-26, 10:23   Link #9339
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Now the fun begins!

Spoiler for The Honorbound:
Now that the infodump is out of the way... Just gonna keep on chugging.
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Old 2011-04-27, 13:04   Link #9340
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Now the fun begins!

Spoiler for The Honorbound:
Now that the infodump is out of the way... Just gonna keep on chugging.
Heh, I wondere where this is going

And now, back to BreakerS
This is a sort of recap/"what's going on" + foreshadowing chapter


BreakerS Continue


Spoiler for Chapter 24.5 - A day in Mid-Childa - Part 1:

That's it for now :3
Enjoy my (mentally) Kugyu-voiced Altea
I'll post the second part soon...like, maybe next week?

*warps away*

[EDIT:] Added a bit more.
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