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Old 2011-04-29, 15:14   Link #9341
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Okay, I've got it done, and with the changes Keroko pointed out to me. Enjoy the complete chapter 1 of

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha MercenarieS:
THE COLLARED

Spoiler for Chapter 1 Part 1:
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Old 2011-04-29, 15:15   Link #9342
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Spoiler for Chapter 1 Part 2:


Oh look, full chapter and I need to separate it into two parts... the rest of my chapters will probably be like this too. :k
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Old 2011-04-30, 05:19   Link #9343
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*finishes reading*
Phew....it's been a while since I read this much

Nice story though. An experienced mercenary and his new device make a blazing debut
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Old 2011-04-30, 12:27   Link #9344
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Yeah I can't make "short" stories or chapters, it seems. =X
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Old 2011-05-04, 13:19   Link #9345
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I was going through the old OC thread looking for material to write a certain type of fic that would "cause-men-to-cross-their-legs-together" if you know what I mean... Half way through I got Nostalgic and decided to do this little piece of craziness for old times sake. I typed this using my iTouch, so it might not be in the best of conditions

Enjoy the struggles of the male characters of Nanoha series!

Spoiler for Breaking the Chains:

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Old 2011-05-04, 18:08   Link #9346
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I was going through the old OC thread looking for material to write a certain type of fic that would "cause-men-to-cross-their-legs-together" if you know what I mean... Half way through I got Nostalgic and decided to do this little piece of craziness for old times sake. I typed this using my iTouch, so it might not be in the best of conditions

Enjoy.

Spoiler for Breaking the Chains:
Oh young master Springfield you cheat, you didn't tell him your other trump card: a tragic backstory that can give even adults nightmares

Well at least Erio found a solution. If you can't join them, leave them
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Old 2011-05-04, 18:39   Link #9347
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Because Negi already shared that secret with Thoma, who's already got at least 2 girls in his harem after just the first few chapters of his story.
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Old 2011-05-04, 19:03   Link #9348
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I was going through the old OC thread looking for material to write a certain type of fic that would "cause-men-to-cross-their-legs-together" if you know what I mean... Half way through I got Nostalgic and decided to do this little piece of craziness for old times sake. I typed this using my iTouch, so it might not be in the best of conditions

Enjoy.

Spoiler for Breaking the Chains:
"What was that?" Yuuno looked up from his research.

"You tell me, Librarian." Khayenne replied over the videolink. "I'm on the other side of the Inner Sphere."

"It sounded like breaking glass."

"Considering that the Infinite Library is made up of several Dyson spheres linked into Klein bottles that fold on to themselves..." Routan stopped himself after realizing that he made no sense. "...simply put, a Fourth Wall breaking?"

His best pal shot an unimpressed glance. "Because of what, some lost characters that have been stuffed in a corner and completely forgotten, now trying to break out?"

The paladin looked intrigued. "You may have something there..."

Yuuno laughed. "How about no?"

"Aren't you suppose to be here on the Athra-D, any way?" Kha continued. "The twins are starting their first assignment on this ship any moment now. Already, we got almost everyone present."

"Almost?"

"You know how the ladies are just married to their jobs in the Inner Sphere."

"And we're free as birds." Yuuno twiddled his engagement ring. "I like it that way. We get all the cool jobs in the Outer Rim, explore the multiverse, kick ass and chew bubblegum."

"And we're all out of gum," Kha finished. "Either way, don't be late. I'm Chief of Security on this ship, which means Seikou turned me into Chief Butler of the Hallaoun party."

Yuuno had a mental image of the Starlight Destroyer waving the Luciferon Heart and then poof, Kha was one hell of a butler.

"So you better be on time, or I'll sic the twins on you."

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Just a reply, from inside the Fourth Wall.
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Old 2011-05-04, 22:40   Link #9349
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Because Negi already shared that secret with Thoma, who's already got at least 2 girls in his harem after just the first few chapters of his story.
Mah~ having a harem (though it's only 2) doesn't mean that he would become popular- note I use the word 'popular', you can be hated but still be popular as with the case of Kyubey; that one was a spur of the moment but somehow I felt it suited Zafira's situation

...Do you all think Yuuno is cross dressing material? I've observed that is really the best way to suddenly shoot for fame with his type of character
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Old 2011-05-05, 04:32   Link #9350
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...Do you all think Yuuno is cross dressing material?
... Is the sky blue?
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Old 2011-05-05, 05:05   Link #9351
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... Is the sky blue?
Is the Sankt Kaiser Belkan?

Did Tohma. . . right.
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Old 2011-05-05, 05:17   Link #9352
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... Is the sky blue?
...Right well, hope it doesn't resort to that... Then again, if that's what gets Nanoha's attention... I know, get Yuuno to wear Fate's clothes! I'm sure that would end all wars on Earth.

Acous doesn't have that harem feel to him, but It was amusing for me to watch/writing Keima lecturing him about being a protagonist And Chrono isn't really the Hero type... But to me he's been the manipulative type (to me only) so in addition to screwing Yuuno and Zafira, he would definitely go for the guy that has an impressive track record and would give him The highest chance of success
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Old 2011-05-05, 06:40   Link #9353
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...Right well, hope it doesn't resort to that... Then again, if that's what gets Nanoha's attention... I know, get Yuuno to wear Fate's clothes! I'm sure that would end all wars on Earth.
I think someone already wrote such parody before . Didn't remember the title, but it involves Yuuno becoming a girl and everybody suddenly having the hots for him (except for Vivio, who likes male Yuuno better, and Vita, who envied Hir breasts)
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Old 2011-05-05, 06:46   Link #9354
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I think someone already wrote such parody before . Didn't remember the title, but it involves Yuuno becoming a girl and everybody suddenly having the hots for him (except for Vivio, who likes male Yuuno better, and Vita, who envied Hir breasts)
Gender bending not equal cross dressing At least with the formal he's still a guy.
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Old 2011-05-05, 07:10   Link #9355
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Gender bending not equal cross dressing At least with the formal he's still a guy.
Why bother doing it halfway?
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Why bother doing it halfway?
Because it defeats the purpose of trying to become a successful male character in a female dominated cast Acous needs to deviate! Chrono needs to be a hero! Yuuno needs to crossdress! Erio needs to be English! And Zafira needs to make a deal with Kyubey !

If Yuuno gender bend that's like saying you can't fight the system
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Why bother doing it halfway?
Because that is the whole point!

And no one going to contest how many ethical guidelines did I break with my post?
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Because that is the whole point!

And no one going to contest how many ethical guidelines did I break with my post?
Because I still have no idea what you just posted
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Because I still have no idea what you just posted
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Why bother doing it halfway?
Because traps are awesome and often find themselves in the amusing position of being more popular than the actual girls.
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