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Old 2011-03-20, 11:25   Link #141
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i started writing this poem after i kept singing the following song over and over in my head. here's a link...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yRRqxJHQmA
so it should sound something like that, have the same style or whatever.
it should be noted that i purposely got drunk to try and write a poem. after a few meaningless rhymes i got what i wanted. and i just can't finish this poem/song. i know where the narrative is supposed to go and how it should end, but i just don't feel like it. makes me wonder how i composed poems 30 lines longer than this one...

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here are my random shitty poems, btw. they are bad, but sometimes amusing.
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Old 2011-05-18, 18:10   Link #142
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rise from the dead, oh good old thread.
been 2 months since my last poem. somewhat a continuation of my tired theme...

From within born
The theories we’ve forged and cut in stone
Allegiance sworn
To dreams into reality we’ve sown

Same paths we’ve tread
As others have, feared fall on steepest slopes
It’s long been said
We’ve long been mocked – still, values held have hope

Question, defy
stereotypes which ever are so vague
We’d rather die
Than hand the victory to social plague

Break free of reigns
Taboos, old rules. And not as slaves be sold
Ignorance feign
Rethink, change, stir and ever be so bold

Let vision soar
Imagination be your faithful guide
Leave open door
To stranger realms, dimensions new and wide
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My posts seem retarted? I invoke the freedomof choice upon thee to choose one of the below.
a) Iím batshit insane or mentally challenged. Nyan!
b) Wasu~p?! *brofist*
c) Your mind is too narrow to embrace my genius, de geso.
d) I was accidentally dropped into a barrel of whiskey, so now I am constantly drunk.
e) Go home and die! Dattebayo!
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Old 2011-05-22, 11:11   Link #143
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I was in a really dark place when I wrote this 8 years ago.

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Old 2011-05-23, 01:12   Link #144
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We ponder to many things unanswered or explained ,but for who is the goddess of alabaster hair & skin , Demon or Divinity , was the porcelain sword a gift or curse of wrath , thou shall quest & find your intentions of ye , and to why i was given this item, has my imbalance gotten to the mold , why do these things happen to me in my sleep
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Old 2011-05-27, 19:44   Link #145
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We ponder to many things unanswered or explained ,but for who is the goddess of alabaster hair & skin , Demon or Divinity , was the porcelain sword a gift or curse of wrath , thou shall quest & find your intentions of ye , and to why i was given this item, has my imbalance gotten to the mold , why do these things happen to me in my sleep
i'm no expert, but i think poetry is supposed to be a column of phrases or parts of phrases which rhyme and have the same meter. while everything i said above is very much up to debate, your poem still feels like prose. it has the feel of a poem, but it doesn't have the form of a poem...
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a) Iím batshit insane or mentally challenged. Nyan!
b) Wasu~p?! *brofist*
c) Your mind is too narrow to embrace my genius, de geso.
d) I was accidentally dropped into a barrel of whiskey, so now I am constantly drunk.
e) Go home and die! Dattebayo!
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Old 2011-05-27, 21:30   Link #146
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A poem by that great British comedian, Benny Hill:

The Boy stood on the burning deck
The Fire went past his legs
Now he can't eat smoked eel
And he don't like hard-boiled eggs
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Old 2011-09-06, 08:31   Link #147
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Death

Hey! I've been trying to
Call you.
Did you know that
He died?
I was at his funeral.
Yesterday.
I couldn't help crying.
He was
Such a nice person.
How he raised his children
All alone
After his wife died.
Yeah. Mmh.
He faced some rough times.
I couldn't sleep
All night.
Thinking
How odd it
All was.
Yeah. Mmh.
What did you have for lunch?
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