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[TkMacintosh]

Originally Posted by Ashaman

You had me until this.

You need a reason why Komoe can recognise Touma but Fukiyose can't, though the idea of Fukiyose lusting after Touma unknowinglyamuses me.

BTW, Kamiko Touka? Sounds way too feminine.

I'm working on that reasoning....Don't know what, but I'll think of something.

Maybe...Komoe helped patch up Touma more when he was younger, so she's seen more of his chest and back....That's a somewhat decent one.

Could be an old scar Touma had that Komoe helped to try and patch up in which she notices on the male actor and soon makes the connection to Touma.

Fukiyose more then likely has never seen that old scar on Touma, so she probably wouldn't know that its Touma.

Eh...like I said when I previously mentioned the name the first time around, the director comes up with it quickly on the spot, and its so cheesy, that even Touma wants to face palm at it.

[Breidaluk]

In Vol 3 Komoe already said that kamijou-kun was a "naughty" boy since a long time and that a lot of things happened so i think she would see its him just by looking at his body, and lets not forget that it was her who took care of his wounds after his fight with kanzaki.

But "Kamiko Touka", thats sounds like a feminine name. And the most important is that he will need a disguise(problably change his hairstyle will be enough).

[Mr.Kyon]

Spoiler for Acceleraor faces a great darkness:

It was a normal day in Yomikawa Aiho’s household. The children had begun their little routine, which mainly consisted of Last Order clinging to Accelerator, him complaining while not even trying to get her off him, then Misaka Worst would butt in to make a delicious Misaka sandwich (which would certainly irritate a certain Stalker-kun).

While ranting stemming from the albino’s foul mouth raged in the living room, Yomikawa was flipping through her mail. Plain white paper envelopes. Nothing much, just bills mostly, with the exception of occasional letters from Yomikawa’s delusional aunt, who thinks Ronald Reagan is still President, and who also happens to think she’s Nancy Reagan. Makes for really awkward family reunions.

Reaching the last letter, Yomikawa’s cocked an eyebrow. This one wasn’t for her. She threw the rest into the trash bin and went to the rightful receiver.

“How dare you…!”

“Want Misaka to say it again, Number One?”

“…Don’t try it.”

Defiantly standing her ground, the sinister beauty Misaka Worst had her hands on her hips, proud and confident. Her pink-white aodai was probably a size too small as it clung a bit too much to her well-rounded body, making certain aspects stick out (to Last Order’s despair).

Speaking in a tone that implied she wasn’t taking any of this seriously, she said an unforgivable thing—something even Accelerator couldn’t forgive. It was second only to hurting Last Order.

“…The Phantom Menace is better than Empire Strikes Back!”

“…!”

Accelerator visibly wanted to throw up. Not Jar-Jar again, not again… Never again… He had perhaps ruined his childhood more than Kihara Amata.

By himself, that lonesome cunt.

“‘Wahhh! What’s is it this strange confrontation of good versus evil?-!’ exclaims Misaka exclaims Misaka as she tries to cool the situation down!”

Yomikawa had only seen the original trilogy, and her favorite was Revenge of the Jedi—or was it Return?—because of those cute furry things on the forest moon. It was also because Harrison Ford looked the sexiest in that one. Princess Leia in the slave girl suit also looked lovely…

Leaving her wild teenage years behind her, Yomikawa stepped in before Accelerator could murder Misaka Worst for such an insult.

“Oi, Accelerator!” Yomikawa said, waving the envelope in the albino’s face.

“What?” he snarled a little while Worst grimaced under Yomikawa’s protection. “I was going to throw this brat out by the balcony.”

“That’ll have to wait I’m afraid. You’ve got mail,” she announced, handing him the letter.

“From who?” he asked while glaring at the envelope.

“Unmarked.” Yomikawa shrugged.

Shrugging himself, Accelerator scratched it open, revealing a delicately hand-written note.

He read.

And read.

His jaw twitched as he re-read it about three times.

“…T-That impossible,” muttered Accelerator, sinking into the couch chair.

“What is?” Yoshikawa asked, sipping her coffee at the dinner table.

“This letter,” he lifelessly let the letter get whiffed by the air, ”is from…my father.”

The dark lavender-haired researcher ruined her laptop with the amount she spewed out after that statement.

“YOUR DAD!-?” was the generalized response amongst the girls.

The cripple hung his head low while nodding.

An epic quest will begin. Oh, the crack will be epic.

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

*snip*
An epic quest will begin. Oh, the crack will be epic.

... I hereby bow to your superiorty in crack-fics. I shudder to think that I even considered challenging you, seeing as I was planning to write a (omake) scene in my fic about

Spoiler for Sort of 'MAJOR' Spoiler for Minds, Memories and Misfortune, DO NOT read if possible:

A possible yaoi relationship between Gunha and Touma

next week, and setting it up this week.

I even had a challenge line ready

'Do you have enough Inspiration, oh King of Crack?'

Needless to say... you obviously do.

[Mr.Kyon]

Ha! Indeed I can accept that challenge! Those two have similar styles and can be quite dense. This will be interesting.

...Still, I have to write that ToumaxStyil thingy as Teh_Ping's gift for finishing Volume 2. That will have to wait until I'm feeling...well, really gay, which only happens if many things are in the right order.

Like Chaos2Frozen trying to entice me with a- *Gets shot in the wang*

GRRRRRRRAWWWWWW! DEEEEEEP WAAAANNNNGGG!

[outerelf]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Ha! Indeed I can accept that challenge! Those two have similar styles and can be quite dense. This will be interesting.

...Still, I have to write that ToumaxStyil thingy as Teh_Ping's gift for finishing Volume 2. That will have to wait until I'm feeling...well, really gay, which only happens if many things are in the right order.

Like Chaos2Frozen trying to entice me with a- *Gets shot in the wang*

GRRRRRRRAWWWWWW! DEEEEEEP WAAAANNNNGGG!

*cough* I still have in store the fic about you, Chaos2Frozen and Crack-tan getting it on. Want me to send it to you? You might get your Gay on then.

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Flere821

... I hereby bow to your superiorty in crack-fics. I shudder to think that I even considered challenging you, seeing as I was planning to write a (omake) scene in my fic about

Spoiler for Sort of 'MAJOR' Spoiler for Minds, Memories and Misfortune, DO NOT read if possible:

A possible yaoi relationship between Gunha and Touma

next week, and setting it up this week.

I even had a challenge line ready

'Do you have enough Inspiration, oh King of Crack?'

Needless to say... you obviously do.

BL of those two? Strangely, I approve.

Which reminds me, while remembering Touma's relation to dragon-ish themes, I feel like I can make him stand next to Gunha and say the two are the Tiger and Dragon of the Toaru series. Their personalities seem to fit these. .... Just... without the "Tiger and Dragon fighting each other" part.

[Mr.Kyon]

Familiar Troubles, Chapter 1.

Next chapter is

Spoiler for SPOILERS!!:

The Affably Evil Kihara Junior vs. Accelerator the Tsundere... in a battle of words. Literally.

[Wilfriback]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

BardwayxIndex iz troof

What!?


Ohh you... it can't be helped... right, M-Kun o_ó?

Hope it won't become canon, if you know what I mean... something like Bardway getting too much friendly with Index and... ok, I stop here, that kind of ideas are yours .

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Familiar Troubles, Chapter 1.

Next chapter is

Spoiler for SPOILERS!!:

The Affably Evil Kihara Junior vs. Accelerator the Tsundere... in a battle of words. Literally.

Speaking of which, fanfiction.net still list Shokuhou Misaki as 'The Queen'... meh, I can live with that I guess.

[TkMacintosh]

Spoiler for More Science and Magic stuff...maybe just some ToumaxRuiko stuff:

Spoiler for Idea 1:

Spoiler for Part 1:

Ruiko blushed deeply as she stood in front of her mirror, a smile on her face as she held her hands in a heart shape in front of her, her imagination filling the hole her fingers made with a small heart shaped box. Valentines Day was coming up quickly and Ruiko knew that she needed to prepare her heart for that day. She had already planned to give valentines out to some of her closer friends, like Uiharu, Misaka-san, and Kuroko-san, but there was one person that stood out from the others that she knew she had to practice for.

"Here...here you go Touma...I...I hope you enjoy them." Ruiko said to the imaginary Touma in front of her, a deep red blush across her face.

Spoiler for Part 2:

Ruiko blushed deeply as she walked down the street along side Touma. She had randomly met him when she was heading home, not expecting him to be there.

"So uh...What...what were doing doing there Touma?" Ruiko asked as she looked over at Touma who was staring off into space, but quickly snapped back once Ruiko started talking to him.

"I was heading home. Misaka had called and said she wanted meet me at the park." Touma said as he looked to the sky, recalling the conversation with Misaka from earlier.

"Oh...right. Misaka-san's been kind of excited about this day for the last while...even though she's been denying it at just about every turn." Ruiko said as she tighted her grip on her school bag as the two fell quiet walking down the street together. Telling herself over and over that now was the time to do it, she quickly rushed ahead, pulling out the small square box from her bag and turned around facing Touma holding the box out for him, a blush going redder then previously. "He-here you go Touma. I...I really hope you like them."

Spoiler for Idea 2:

Ruiko smiled happily as she ran a through her hair as she waited by the entrance to Joeys. It had been a month since Ruiko had worked up the courage to give Touma those chocolates. She had been really happy when he had accepted them with a smile on his face. Just last week she had gotten an email from him, asking her to meet him outside Joeys at 2 PM on Sunday. She happily accepted and was now waiting for him. It wasn't long before she noticed Touma approaching. She waved at him happily.

"Hey Touma." Ruiko said happily as she waved her hand at him. He smiled as he waved back at her.

"Hey Ruiko...did I make you wait long?" Touma asked as he stood next to her now. Ruiko shook her head with a smile.

"No, I just got here myself actually." Ruiko said as a feeling of joy and happiness running through her at the thought of spending time with Touma.

"That's good...well shall we go get some food then?" Touma asked as he motioned towards the restaurant they were in front of. Ruiko nodded her head in agreement. Ruiko hoped that nothing would go wrong today.

Bahh...ToumaxRuiko is a guilty pleasure of mine...Still trying to work on my writing...

[blitz1/2]

[QUOTE=TkMacintosh;3687966]

Spoiler for More Science and Magic stuff...maybe just some ToumaxRuiko stuff:

Spoiler for Idea 1:

Spoiler for Part 1:

Ruiko blushed deeply as she stood in front of her mirror, a smile on her face as she held her hands in a heart shape in front of her, her imagination filling the hole her fingers made with a small heart shaped box. Valentines Day was coming up quickly and Ruiko knew that she needed to prepare her heart for that day. She had already planned to give valentines out to some of her closer friends, like Uiharu, Misaka-san, and Kuroko-san, but there was one person that stood out from the others that she knew she had to practice for.

"Here...here you go Touma...I...I hope you enjoy them." Ruiko said to the imaginary Touma in front of her, a deep red blush across her face.

Spoiler for Part 2:

Spoiler for Idea 2:

Bahh...ToumaxRuiko is a guilty pleasure of mine...Still trying to work on my writing...

Not bad, pretty good for a series of oneshots. Only complaint is the text length (not your fault I guess) as I need to scroll left and right to read a line.

[Nayrael]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Familiar Troubles, Chapter 1.

Next chapter is

Spoiler for SPOILERS!!:

The Affably Evil Kihara Junior vs. Accelerator the Tsundere... in a battle of words. Literally.

Good to see you back Bro

[Tsukino Kage Spectre]

Stormwolfex has updated: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/...nce_and_Magics

Now that I think about it, his interpretation of Gunha's powers seemed similar to a concept from Star Trek: subspace. Moving a ship to subspace allows for speeds above light, getting to the highest levels may in fact move almost as fast as teleportation. In Star Trek, they 'bend' subspace to create their deflector shields, while are maintained in shape by energy and when it takes hits, some of that energy is dissipated thus weakening the shield. It can be used to stop energy and blunt objects, just like how Gunha uses Attack Crash.

Anybody know anything in canon to support this theory?

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by Tsukino Kage Spectre

Stormwolfex has updated: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/...nce_and_Magics

Now that I think about it, his interpretation of Gunha's powers seemed similar to a concept from Star Trek: subspace. Moving a ship to subspace allows for speeds above light, getting to the highest levels may in fact move almost as fast as teleportation. In Star Trek, they 'bend' subspace to create their deflector shields, while are maintained in shape by energy and when it takes hits, some of that energy is dissipated thus weakening the shield. It can be used to stop energy and blunt objects, just like how Gunha uses Attack Crash.

Anybody know anything in canon to support this theory?

In canon, Gunha bends the AIM around him if the Vending Machine SS is right. Best way to put it is that he is the Science Side's Ollerus, albeit underdeveloped. Ollerus bends the Laws of Nature to create attacks ("illusions") that cannot be explained or understood. The explanations Gunha gives are always lampshaded to be impossible within the Power Curriculum. I think Gunha believes his mumbo jumbo to be true, which is why Ollerus told him the difference between himself and Gunha is that:

Originally Posted by Ollerus

"One of us is aware that he wields an unexplainable power, and the other isn’t: that is the only real difference between us. You are the delicate yet complex Number Seven that not even Academy City's researchers could do anything about. In fact, you’re a special esper that they aren’t even sure should really be classified as a Level 5. If you yourself understood that, you may have been able to defeat me."

[rubix22]

I seem to have made something that resembles a story with an actual plot...

Now I need a name.

...

Can't think of one. Any suggestions?

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by rubix91

I seem to have made something that resembles a story with an actual plot...

Now I need a name.

...

Can't think of one. Any suggestions?

...What's the story about? Spoiler tag is your friend.

[rubix22]

...

...

Actually, fuck it. I'm calling it "Accelerator Goes Grocery Shopping"

Sorry about that.

[Flere821]

Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Spoiler for Question about writing next chapter:

Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Spoiler for Question about writing next chapter:

Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.

Spoiler for Suggestion:

You could use Amata, definitely. Forced to be civilized and having to hold back his anger and swears, acting extremely polite around Touma and Gunha - to the point where it makes it scary compared to the Amata we know.

If you go that way, I have an idea.

During the tests, you could have Nayuta walk in to give her uncle a bento. She's being accompanied by Kihara-kun Junior - who internally is wishing that Nayuta would give him that bento and call him Onii-chan. Although when the two see Amata being respectful, they freeze in place. The two start shaking in terror - the implication being that Amata being nice is a prelude to bad, bad things.

Then, you could have Nayuta become seriously obsessed with Touma's right hand while watching Gunha vs Touma. She goes and talks with him, acting all cutesy around him, not even looking malicious (she's trying to be sneaky and learn more about IB before attempting anything). Junior fears the worse and mutters "Lolicon" and grumbles with crossed arms, picturing the many ways this could go terribly wrong.

Another loli is added to the Kamijou harem, with Junior keeping a close eye on Nayuta so she doesn't go near him again. Perhaps have Amata mention to Junior this test was Aleister's doing, thus strengthening his resolve to keep his loli cousin away from Touma. He definitely knows she'll attempt something - case in point: pitting Gunha against Mikoto that one time.