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Old 2011-07-31, 03:28   Link #33421
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Everything that has ever existed has been repeated many times, so it's likely every conversation has happened before at some point.
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I have the fear that i will become like this if i get the confidence to write something about "you know who".
Ok. Now I realized where this feeling was coming from. A few hundred pages ago on this same thread. @_@

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Old 2011-07-31, 12:59   Link #33422
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Everything that has ever existed has been repeated many times, so it's likely every conversation has happened before at some point.
That quote is just awesome.

Personally, I'd rather a story which in the characters suffer great hardships, but overcome them and reach "Happy Ending".
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Old 2011-07-31, 13:43   Link #33423
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Old 2011-07-31, 15:46   Link #33424
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That quote is just awesome.

Personally, I'd rather a story which in the characters suffer great hardships, but overcome them and reach "Happy Ending".
... ... It sounds dirty when you put it in quotes.
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Old 2011-07-31, 15:55   Link #33425
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That quote is just awesome.

Personally, I'd rather a story which in the characters suffer great hardships, but overcome them and reach "Happy Ending".
Thanks to Moczo, I'm going to say this...

Chrono got plenty of those from Amy.
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Old 2011-07-31, 20:47   Link #33426
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Half the time, it's the unstated implications that the reader realizes in Fridge Moments that are the true tragedy .
Which your writing is so very, very good at, dear God. I'm never again discussing your HxV files in great detail with anyone, it just leaves me staring into nothing with an expression of wide-eyed horror and disbelief.
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Old 2011-07-31, 20:59   Link #33427
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so, inspired by these drabbles -

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- I was motivated to write...well I can't quite put the genre, but it's something. It's a poor "payment" compared to what she had written but hey, how can someone compete with THE deathcurse?

At the End of Her Road
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Old 2011-07-31, 21:33   Link #33428
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How should I say this. The motivation, the belief, the reason was all Nanoha's, but that person you wrote... is not.
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Old 2011-08-01, 00:35   Link #33429
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Posted "Sleeping At Last" to Fanfiction.net. I seem to get a lot of mileage out of torturing poor Hayate in my stories, eh?

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Which your writing is so very, very good at, dear God.
It should be a compliment right? It means that people are at least thinking of one's stories after reading them?

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so, inspired by these drabbles -

- I was motivated to write...well I can't quite put the genre, but it's something. It's a poor "payment" compared to what she had written but hey, how can someone compete with THE deathcurse?

At the End of Her Road
Yours was much more depressing than mine!

I do have to agree with Craxuan a bit though: Nanoha in the story felt to me either like an AU Nanoha, or one who has been fighting for years in some dreadful war. And I would completely have accepted the latter explanation, if there had been some background hints dropped about it--but since we're told that this mission is actually an oddity for Nanoha, it did make Nanoha feel OOC to me.

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However, I did really like how you built up Nanoha's regrets and yet her determination to keep doing what she's doing anyway. It made the approaching end incredibly bittersweet, as we can see how Nanoha's fighting not for the people she loves, but for the ideals that she loves and believes in. Which is actually very in character in my opinion .
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Old 2011-08-01, 00:50   Link #33430
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No wonder even DC thought it was depressing...
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Old 2011-08-01, 01:05   Link #33431
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No wonder even DC thought it was depressing...
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Old 2011-08-01, 01:07   Link #33432
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Or LOL, maybe tragedy is so infused in my blood that I totally read scenes like that in the worst possible way?
This would explain so much...
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Old 2011-08-01, 01:27   Link #33433
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Which your writing is so very, very good at, dear God. I'm never again discussing your HxV files in great detail with anyone, it just leaves me staring into nothing with an expression of wide-eyed horror and disbelief.
You've read through our timeline then, I take it? xD

Also, yes mother/%§/%!!! I survived my flight! *fistpump*
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Old 2011-08-01, 01:59   Link #33434
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Old 2011-08-01, 02:19   Link #33435
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This would explain so much...
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Old 2011-08-01, 09:17   Link #33436
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Many people suffer from seeing romantic subtext everywhere. Deathcurse instead sees tragedy subtext everywhere (I bet she could spot potentials for tragedy even in the happiest of stories )

Perhaps we should flood this site with happy stories to dilute the amount of tragedy in her blood?
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Old 2011-08-01, 11:24   Link #33437
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Perhaps we should flood this site with happy stories to dilute the amount of tragedy in her blood?
Be careful, tough. Bad writen hapiness can feel like a cheap excuse to solve problems at times, even if there's a happy ending i think is necessary to depict the resolution the character undergoes to overcome the feelings and consequences of the bad things that happened to him/her. If a character pass through hell and his/her reaction about said conflict is "hello guys! ...ooff that was rough, give me a family hug! *-*" with puppy eyes and a smile, and it's not a comedic chara, that gives me an annoying feeling of cheapness.

...like sayin "let's smile togheter and pretend nothing of that happened".
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Old 2011-08-01, 13:51   Link #33438
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Old 2011-08-01, 16:41   Link #33439
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sisterly bonding between Due, Cinque and Lutecia....

Lutecia and Due will get a bit closer in the next chapter, i presume....
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Old 2011-08-01, 19:13   Link #33440
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You've read through our timeline then, I take it? xD

Also, yes mother/%§/%!!! I survived my flight! *fistpump*
More like one fine day I had a detailed discussion with a friend about the bare bones of the 'verse, and walked away from it feeling just a little horrified. Never again!
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