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Old 2011-08-17, 08:08   Link #33861
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Spoiler for Kaiser Mom Bonus Update:
.... that was adorable to the point of absurdity. Olivie must be a fantastic mother.

Overall a very good chapter, as usual. There was one passage that struck me as 'off', but for whatever reason I can't find it right now. I'll shoot you a PM if I do.
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Old 2011-08-17, 08:49   Link #33862
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It probably depends on where in the scale of "Serious" to "Crack" you decide to make the short . If you do the "Crack" side, you've got more options. The "Serious" side limits what you could plausibly do...
True enough, indeed. I don't want to make it too cracky since in all honesty, when it comes to actual published work I'm not that good at crack. But I would like to keep it as a humor piece instead of something serious, so maybe I'll just bend the rules of how someone would react in that situation.
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Old 2011-08-17, 09:19   Link #33863
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True enough, indeed. I don't want to make it too cracky since in all honesty, when it comes to actual published work I'm not that good at crack. But I would like to keep it as a humor piece instead of something serious, so maybe I'll just bend the rules of how someone would react in that situation.
The best crack comes in two kinds: the first moves the slide to exactly as much crack as required to make the premise of the crack plausible.

The second cranks it up so high the scale breaks.
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Old 2011-08-17, 10:14   Link #33864
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The best crack comes in two kinds: the first moves the slide to exactly as much crack as required to make the premise of the crack plausible.

The second cranks it up so high the scale breaks.
Ask Moczo about our AIM or text conversations, he'll tell you just how cracky I can get when I'm bouncing off of someone else for ideas and character interaction. But when it actually comes to writing it by myself, I'm always worried that I'll cross the point where it's not so much funny as it is forced, which makes me wary of writing it at all. Especially since a lot of the time, it's hard to tell when you cross that line.
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Old 2011-08-18, 14:46   Link #33865
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Sure is quiet.

Been slightly distracted.

and, just an update notice, for those who care...

I gave Yasanagi the next Material Days script, so, Material Days should update sometime in the next few days, depending on a few things.

Red

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Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi

Scrya Start

Scrya 2

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Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Scrya End:
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Old 2011-08-18, 17:39   Link #33866
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Yuuno's not learning very quickly is he? Still, that reminded me of my own brother and sister though from people at a reasonable age it's much cuter and seems to emphasize the family aspects a lot.
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Old 2011-08-18, 17:50   Link #33867
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Nice little update there, Nanya. I'm glad to see Erio and Caro off to a good start there.
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Old 2011-08-18, 17:50   Link #33868
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Sure is quiet.

Been slightly distracted.

and, just an update notice, for those who care...

I gave Yasanagi the next Material Days script, so, Material Days should update sometime in the next few days, depending on a few things.

Red

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Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi

Scrya Start

Scrya 2

Scrya 3

Scrya 4

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Scrya End:
well... I'm just human...

*got hit with a Fireball*

HOT!!!!*looks around* Who did that?

*sound of silence*

oh well, the scene where Erio meeting Caro kinda reminded me about one of Ranma and Akane quarrels: inserts foot in mouth and female reacts badly. At least no Mallet-sama popping left or right.
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Old 2011-08-18, 18:45   Link #33869
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@Raiser or any person that want to pick up the idea of the VivioXYuuno (who won't vomit at this proposal/idea)

It was said that Yuuno had no parents (or we can assume that either his parents died during his childbirth or was abandoned) and raised by the Scrya tribe. Now, if he was a heir to royal lineage of MidChilda, or has the bloodline from the original founders of the civilisation. Vivio, we know is of he Royal Belkan blood, so if the two were to have kid(s) together, wouldn't that make a awesome mage, containing a hybrid MidChilda/Belkan compared to TSAB mages of using one or having small elements of both?
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Old 2011-08-18, 19:14   Link #33870
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Well I had considered the possibility that Yuuno might be of the Saint Kaiser lineage (based on his resemblance to Vivio). That might just add squick to it, I suppose.

In Daemon Kaiser, the original idea was for Volvo to possess Yuuno. However later on I considered the idea that Yuuno was indeed dead, but Volvo just looks like him because he's Yuuno's ancestor. That would have certainly worked as a better twist since everyone was expecting Yuuno to be alive but of course that would mean that Yuuno... well, wouldn't be alive
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So that's why I'm a bit edgy about the whole Yuuno/Vivio thing. besides the age difference

I was thinking that Yuuno was a decedent of some Royal Family since he does looks somewhat like a prince.

And if he gets put in a dress I think he would look like a princess.

I didn't think that he would be a decedent of Olive. Which I should had considered since Yuuno and Vivio share the same hair color, eye(s), and most of all the same VA.

Edit: Also Vivio being able to Use the Infinity Library Effectively.

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Old 2011-08-18, 20:27   Link #33872
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Remember what I said about Material Days?

Spoiler for Material Days Part 89:


Had the script done yesterday and Yasanagi did some touch-ups on it.
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So that's why I'm a bit edgy about the whole Yuuno/Vivio thing. besides the age difference

I was thinking that Yuuno was a decedent of some Royal Family since he does looks somewhat like a prince.

And if he gets put in a dress I think he would look like a princess.

I didn't think that he would be a decedent of Olive. Which I should had considered since Yuuno and Vivio share the same hair color, eye(s), and most of all the same VA.
....

I read this comment and the thought from it was: "Yuuno/Olivie. FUND IT."

Damn my mind.
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Old 2011-08-18, 20:46   Link #33874
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If anyone's interested, I can probably pair Yuuno up with Olivie in Kaiser Mom. Of course, it'll be a while before things start getting interesting.
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So that's why I'm a bit edgy about the whole Yuuno/Vivio thing. besides the age difference

I was thinking that Yuuno was a decedent of some Royal Family since he does looks somewhat like a prince.

And if he gets put in a dress I think he would look like a princess.

I didn't think that he would be a decedent of Olive. Which I should had considered since Yuuno and Vivio share the same hair color, eye(s), and most of all the same VA.
If there was some sort of blood connection then it would be extremely diluted by now, removing the usual incest squick.

Unless perhaps the Scrya clan really found Yuuno sealed in some ruins and he actually is from Olivie's time.

I don't have any issue with incest regardless.

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Spoiler for Material Days Part 89:


Had the script done yesterday and Yasanagi did some touch-ups on it.
You kiddin'? If Caro got pimped out they'd be rolling in the dough! A lot of men like um young so a petite girl they can pretend is illegal but is actually legal? Pay dirt.

Well, I liked the conversation between Yami and Lutecia in this part.
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You kiddin'? If Caro got pimped out they'd be rolling in the dough! A lot of men like um young so a petite girl they can pretend is illegal but is actually legal? Pay dirt.

Well, I liked the conversation between Yami and Lutecia in this part.
That was Lutecia's fantasy there...

Yeah, Lutecia needs to get laid, big time.
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Old 2011-08-18, 21:35   Link #33877
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If there was some sort of blood connection then it would be extremely diluted by now, removing the usual incest squick.

Unless perhaps the Scrya clan really found Yuuno sealed in some ruins and he actually is from Olivie's time.

I don't have any issue with incest regardless.



You kiddin'? If Caro got pimped out they'd be rolling in the dough! A lot of men like um young so a petite girl they can pretend is illegal but is actually legal? Pay dirt.

Well, I liked the conversation between Yami and Lutecia in this part.
Why would we have a problem with wincest? (looks around)...

Lutecia just learned something, you DON'T mess with the Material(s) especially D, aka your majesty.

Can someone explain something to me, was MidChilda magic ONCE belonged as belkan (modernised or w.e) , or were they completely different?

Olivie/Yuuno is fine, although we're going to get lots of Kaori Mizuhashi making a pairing of herself, and oh boy if we had to add Vivio into the picture. xD
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Why would we have a problem with wincest? (looks around)...
Well, it is a universal taboo and that's part of what makes it hot

Anyways, Vivio had a DNA test done on her and it got no results. I imagine if Yuuno was related to her it would have been discovered then.
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If there was some sort of blood connection then it would be extremely diluted by now, removing the usual incest squick.

Unless perhaps the Scrya clan really found Yuuno sealed in some ruins and he actually is from Olivie's time.

I don't have any issue with incest regardless.



You kiddin'? If Caro got pimped out they'd be rolling in the dough! A lot of men like um young so a petite girl they can pretend is illegal but is actually legal? Pay dirt.

Well, I liked the conversation between Yami and Lutecia in this part.
Tentacle rape? Or tickle to death?
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Old 2011-08-18, 22:10   Link #33880
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Tentacle rape? Or tickle to death?
consentual tentacle love? If you are going for the grape, might as well go inyouchuu style. xD (I am sure shoku had bugs too, so yea, that'll satisfy)

@Raiser: Have we ever heard on any founding members of the midchilda, that was where my possible thesis was coming from, of Yuuno being of royal midchilda rather than royal belka.
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