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DarkJak2050 · 2011-08-19, 22:21

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Originally Posted by gunblade23

Time to wait for the reactions

What exactly do you mean? Sorry, just asking.

Anyway, remember that this is in the very early stages, I mean I just came up with this about 4-5 days ago. The characters are still in the works. I just started working on Eric's info and he's just the first of 4, 5 maybe 6 characters (including support/re-occuring ones). So expect Eric's info to change in reguards of his "Personality" (I even put a little notice on it). So the prologue, let alone the first chapter, won't be come out anytime soon.

gunblade23 · 2011-08-19, 22:34

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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

What exactly do you mean? Sorry, just asking.

Anyway, remember that this is in the very early stages, I mean I just came up with this about 4-5 days ago. The characters are still in the works. I just started working on Eric's info and he's just the first of 4, 5 maybe 6 characters (including support/re-occuring ones). So expect Eric's info to change in reguards of his "Personality" (I even put a little notice on it). So the prologue, let alone the first chapter, won't be come out anytime soon.

To make it simple, what will be the reader`s opinion in your IS fanfic( if you have one)?

wavehawk · 2011-08-20, 05:06

Will try to update my fic. Damn I'm running behind schedule as it is...

Hasumi · 2011-08-20, 05:22

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

Will try to update my fic. Damn I'm running behind schedule as it is...

Chapter 2 of mine will be there shortly.

gunblade23 · 2011-08-20, 07:37

I haven`t read yours wavehawk..

can you put up the link or something please?

Hasumi · 2011-08-20, 07:53

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Originally Posted by gunblade23

I haven`t read yours wavehawk..

can you put up the link or something please?

I don't know man, he didn't really put it all in one place so I guess that would be difficult.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-08-20, 07:57

Random question for my fic material, "When did Houki and Ichika met? Before or after WK incident?" I knew that Tabane announced about the existence of IS after they met, because Houki and Ichika separated when they're 9-10 years old.

Because if Ichika and Houki met after incident...ohh the plot bunnies (I have two version of the draft right now, and confused which one I should decide).

Speaking of which "Old Man" Wavehawk is sidesplittingly funny, cannot stop laughing reading that one...you can found it in page 46, I think.

Hasumi · 2011-08-20, 08:26

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Random question for my fic material, "When did Houki and Ichika met? Before or after WK incident?" I knew that Tabane announced about the existence of IS after they met, because Houki and Ichika separated when they're 9-10 years old.

Because if Ichika and Houki met after incident...ohh the plot bunnies (I have two version of the draft right now, and confused which one I should decide).

Speaking of which "Old Man" Wavehawk is sidesplittingly funny, cannot stop laughing reading that one...you can found it in page 46, I think.

They met before it.

gunblade23 · 2011-08-20, 12:01

I spotted another IS fanfic in ff.net
I read it. That one is fresh( I did not wrote that). Hopefully it won`t turn bad

blitz1/2 · 2011-08-20, 13:05

To be honest, I really want to write a IchikaXByaku shiki personification fic. xD

@gunblade: Do you mean covert strike? Because that summary LEAKS of gary stu material.

gunblade23 · 2011-08-20, 13:29

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

To be honest, I really want to write a IchikaXByaku shiki personification fic. xD

@gunblade: Do you mean covert strike? Because that summary LEAKS of gary stu material.

Yes. It`s now a gary stu material. I have to avoid that

I have a question : where can i find a gary stu litmus test?

I need it before publishing my stories

Hasumi · 2011-08-20, 21:30

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

To be honest, I really want to write a IchikaXByaku shiki personification fic. xD

@gunblade: Do you mean covert strike? Because that summary LEAKS of gary stu material.

Yes, Byakushiki's personification reminds me of Kanade.

blitz1/2 · 2011-08-20, 22:03

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Originally Posted by Detective-san

Yes, Byakushiki's personification reminds me of Kanade.

Glad to see I wasn't the only one that saw that resemblance, but Kana Hanazawa is already booked. xD

Hasumi · 2011-08-20, 22:06

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Glad to see I wasn't the only one that saw that resemblance, but Kana Hanazawa is already booked. xD

Well it wouldn't be the first time a seiyuu voiced 2 roles in 1 show.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-08-21, 00:58

Okay guys, here's the Plot for my Fanfic. I just want to point out that this is set outside of IS Academy and through the eyes of a group of guys in IS Society.

Spoiler for Project Silverback:

And here's an update on my first OC's info and possibly the "Baseline" of him.

Spoiler for Original Character 1:

As you can see, there's been a change in Eric's personality info and his "Older Brother" figure.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-08-21, 01:17

Google helps. But for most parts, I specialize in Sue material. I just try to present it in a way that is appealing.

For example, technically an IS pilot who can use a G2 IS to kick G4 asses is kind of a Stu, because of the amounts of plot armor needed. But that's the good kind of Stu that people like; make the fight interesting, use enough brains, and make his background not that cookiecutter and interesting, even a Stu can suffice.

That said... A lot of people need proper Stu training. It took me a long time to master how to portray Space Marines, the biggest Stu Marties of the galaxy that everyone loves.

...

TENSHI IN MAI INFINITE STRATOS?! WHERE!!!

DarkJak2050 · 2011-08-21, 01:27

If you're refering to my fanfic and OC, then what do you mean by "Sue material"? Just asking.

Hasumi · 2011-08-21, 01:44

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TENSHI IN MAI INFINITE STRATOS?! WHERE!!!

*ahem* I think we can expect Byakushiki to pop out a Handsonic at some point.

wavehawk · 2011-08-21, 03:00

DAMN THIS WRITERS BLOCK~~!!!

Comedy is SO hard to write. I now understand why the author gets sick so often. IT IS PHYSICALLY DRAINING to write comedy that works...

Hasumi · 2011-08-21, 03:17

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

DAMN THIS WRITERS BLOCK~~!!!

Comedy is SO hard to write. I now understand why the author gets sick so often. IT IS PHYSICALLY DRAINING to write comedy that works...

His comedy's okay, he, well, I guess I just don't have to mention the action sequences...

...as for my plan to act like the characters to get a feel of them, well, the looks I was getting, well, yeah...

2011-08-20, 05:06	Link #1003
wavehawk All Decade's Fault Join Date: Jul 2006	Will try to update my fic. Damn I'm running behind schedule as it is... __________________ "This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."

2011-08-20, 07:37	Link #1005
gunblade23 Oh look it`s Lord Pwell:P Author Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Philippines	I haven`t read yours wavehawk.. can you put up the link or something please? __________________ I like what I have seen, OH WAIT that`s not it Nothing is fair in ninja world Old enough to kill, old enough to have s#x drink,etc. (What ?) In Ninja World, Deception is a ultimate key. So create a 'idiot' mask, too fool everyone and drop once you`re done with exam Me a cheater? In Ninja World, cheating is always allowed. So the answer is no Sorry, can you say it again? If not,brandishes a katana I`ll settle it out from you I hate overpowered OCs in Naruto fanfiction for reasons: 1. some Authors would use that just to save Naruto from idiots(Nice try but in canon there`s no mobs and overcharges. I mean NOTHING Hiruzen is not God of Shinobi for nothing) 2. If it`s no weakness or something, I call it a Gary stu 3. I take that as a self insert(see number 2 ), so I`ll take not sides for this and ignore it

2011-08-20, 07:57	Link #1007
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Random question for my fic material, "When did Houki and Ichika met? Before or after WK incident?" I knew that Tabane announced about the existence of IS after they met, because Houki and Ichika separated when they're 9-10 years old. Because if Ichika and Houki met after incident...ohh the plot bunnies (I have two version of the draft right now, and confused which one I should decide). Speaking of which "Old Man" Wavehawk is sidesplittingly funny, cannot stop laughing reading that one...you can found it in page 46, I think. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2011-08-20, 12:01	Link #1009
gunblade23 Oh look it`s Lord Pwell:P Author Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Philippines	I spotted another IS fanfic in ff.net I read it. That one is fresh( I did not wrote that). Hopefully it won`t turn bad __________________ I like what I have seen, OH WAIT that`s not it Nothing is fair in ninja world Old enough to kill, old enough to have s#x drink,etc. (What ?) In Ninja World, Deception is a ultimate key. So create a 'idiot' mask, too fool everyone and drop once you`re done with exam Me a cheater? In Ninja World, cheating is always allowed. So the answer is no Sorry, can you say it again? If not,brandishes a katana I`ll settle it out from you I hate overpowered OCs in Naruto fanfiction for reasons: 1. some Authors would use that just to save Naruto from idiots(Nice try but in canon there`s no mobs and overcharges. I mean NOTHING Hiruzen is not God of Shinobi for nothing) 2. If it`s no weakness or something, I call it a Gary stu 3. I take that as a self insert(see number 2 ), so I`ll take not sides for this and ignore it

2011-08-20, 13:05	Link #1010
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	To be honest, I really want to write a IchikaXByaku shiki personification fic. xD @gunblade: Do you mean covert strike? Because that summary LEAKS of gary stu material. __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2011-08-21, 00:58	Link #1015
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Okay guys, here's the Plot for my Fanfic. I just want to point out that this is set outside of IS Academy and through the eyes of a group of guys in IS Society. Spoiler for Project Silverback: Ever since the introduction of the IS, the social status for men has taken a decline. Some are actually okay with it, others are not. Meet Alpha Squad, a former squad of a now disbanded mercenary group called Thunder Crash. Since Thunder Crash's disbandment, these guys have developed a hatred towards the IS for breaking the balance of power. They also have a dislking towards women for getting the better treatment, all because the IS can only be controlled by women (except for Ichika Orimura). And get this, Alpha Squad consists of teenage boys with the average age of 17-18. They believe that men and women should be treated equally. With that in mind, they have a goal of taking on the IS and restoring the balance of power, a goal that seems to be nothing more than a mear fantasy. Until Alpha Squad recieved an unexpected message from their Weapons/Armor Technician, who they believed had "died" shortly after Thunder Crash disbanded. This is their story... This is Project Silverback. And here's an update on my first OC's info and possibly the "Baseline" of him. Spoiler for Original Character 1: Name: Eric "Hot Shot" Anderson Age: 17 Gender: Male Height: 5 Ft. 10 In. Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Crew Cut Eye Color: Brown Physical Profile: Semi-Buffed Nationality/Ethnicity: American/Norwegian Background/Personality: A Squad Captain of a mercenary group called Thunder Crash until it "disbanded". During his days in Thunder Crash, he earned the nickname "Hot Shot", for his impressive sharpshooting skills, and the respect of his fellow mercenaries. But to Eric, Thunder Crash was more than just a mercenary group, Thunder Crash was his "family". Being there for him when needed the most. But those who are closest to him and considers them as his "Brothers", is his squad, Alpha Squad. Which comprised of: Eddie "Sideswipe" Garcia Brian "Ratchet" Mclurg Clayton "Scourge" Maddox Tito "Ironhide" Kaliso Other than his own squad, Eric felt close to Derrick "Shockwave" Garcia (another Squad Captain and blood-related older brother of Eddie "Sideswipe" Garcia) as his "Older Brother" figure, and Thunder Crash's Weapons/Armor Technician, Daniel Tezla as a friend/personal counsler. Eric is a very cold person, rarely showing any emotions other than anger. This mainly stems from Thunder Crash's "disbandment", the "Women-Favoring-Treatment-System" (refer to Vol. 6 Ch. 2 in the Light Novels) and the dislike towards women, due to the fact that only they can control the IS (with the mysterious exception with Ichika Orimura). But despite his cold personality, Eric shows signs of caring underneath the tough exterior of his by putting his "Brothers" and friends first before himself. As you can see, there's been a change in Eric's personality info and his "Older Brother" figure. Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2011-09-02 at 02:13. Reason: Nationality/Ethnicity added.

2011-08-21, 01:17	Link #1016
MeisterBabylon ＳＡＮ値! (／・ω・)／ピンチ! Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: The Golden Throne Age: 27	Google helps. But for most parts, I specialize in Sue material. I just try to present it in a way that is appealing. For example, technically an IS pilot who can use a G2 IS to kick G4 asses is kind of a Stu, because of the amounts of plot armor needed. But that's the good kind of Stu that people like; make the fight interesting, use enough brains, and make his background not that cookiecutter and interesting, even a Stu can suffice. That said... A lot of people need proper Stu training. It took me a long time to master how to portray Space Marines, the biggest Stu Marties of the galaxy that everyone loves. ... TENSHI IN MAI INFINITE STRATOS?! WHERE!!! __________________

2011-08-21, 01:27	Link #1017
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	If you're refering to my fanfic and OC, then what do you mean by "Sue material"? Just asking.

2011-08-21, 03:00	Link #1019
wavehawk All Decade's Fault Join Date: Jul 2006	DAMN THIS WRITERS BLOCK~~!!! Comedy is SO hard to write. I now understand why the author gets sick so often. IT IS PHYSICALLY DRAINING to write comedy that works... __________________ "This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."