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Old 2011-09-29, 07:17   Link #1801
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Finally got my first chapter up, though there might be layout errors because of unknown reasons

Also ignore the "ISInfinite Stratos" thing on the top, not sure how I to fix that..

Anyways, my first IS fanfic(and my first ever attempt at fanfiction):

Infinite Stratos: Athena Bouclier
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:18   Link #1802
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Thumbs up

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.........

I'm afraid of her like hell , but now, I'm LESS afraid (though she's still scarier than the rest of haremmettes )

AND despite all the shit and giggles she pulled, she's still a professional at her job.

Old Man Hawk is the best, cheers!

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Congratulations for the first fic, it's started out with a bang and even the OC main character are very modest (at least that's what appear in this chapter) compared to some OC pilot we can found.
But there's something I would ask, does Minerva has certain flaws? For example, even though it has anti-I.S. weapon, it has less powerful barrier and no absolute defense? If it has anything I.S. has, that would be awful.

Anyway, we share similar idea then, conventional weapon with I.S. technology will appear in the future chapters.
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:23   Link #1803
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Now that's pure win!

(But where's the Tatenashi/Kyuukai accident?? )
Gonna put that in the third part if I ever make one. Will be kind of similar to the light novels where she does the lap pillow thing .

Ichika's a coward and Irish can't catch a break. do you think I should put this as an Omake or part of the canon storyline?
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:28   Link #1804
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Seriously. Nobody got the references I dropped for <Ren>'s origin at all? Is it TOO subtle?
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:31   Link #1805
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Seriously. Nobody got the references I dropped for <Ren>'s origin at all? Is it TOO subtle?
G.I. Joe? Ahh...sorry, I never watch that show /read the comics...so I don't know.
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:31   Link #1806
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Seriously. Nobody got the references I dropped for <Ren>'s origin at all? Is it TOO subtle?
I never was a fan of the G.I Joe series so I wouldn't have gotten it no matter how much I read.
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:46   Link #1807
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...I was hoping someone would realize it and find out that it's actually a G.i.Joe X Infinite Stratos crossover fic, but it's too subtle for even that...
(sits in corner, deep dark air of depression)
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Old 2011-09-29, 07:49   Link #1808
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...I was hoping someone would realize it and find out that it's actually a G.i.Joe X Infinite Stratos crossover fic, but it's too subtle for even that...
(sits in corner, deep dark air of depression)
Aww, it's alright Just think of Charlotte and everything will be okay.
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Old 2011-09-29, 08:03   Link #1809
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(Thinks of <Ren> sneaking into homes at night and stabbign them silently in their sleep...)
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Old 2011-09-29, 08:05   Link #1810
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Congratulations for the first fic, it's started out with a bang and even the OC main character are very modest (at least that's what appear in this chapter) compared to some OC pilot we can found.
But there's something I would ask, does Minerva has certain flaws? For example, even though it has anti-I.S. weapon, it has less powerful barrier and no absolute defense? If it has anything I.S. has, that would be awful.

Anyway, we share similar idea then, conventional weapon with I.S. technology will appear in the future chapters.
Thanks!

To answer your question:
The Minerva does have an Absolute Defense barrier installed.

It is integrated with IS technology, after all. Then again, yes, the Minerva does have flaws. One of which is already hinted with Minerva's battle-armor foundation.

Being a full, physical suit of armor, it would not be able to self-repair any damages to the armor unlike the IS. There may be more flaws, but I'll leave it to the fic to bring you through :3
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Old 2011-09-29, 08:09   Link #1811
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...I was hoping someone would realize it and find out that it's actually a G.i.Joe X Infinite Stratos crossover fic, but it's too subtle for even that...
(sits in corner, deep dark air of depression)
Your age is showing mate.

But do you really have no plans of putting
that up in FF.net?

A real waste if you ask me.
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Old 2011-09-29, 08:13   Link #1812
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(Thinks of <Ren> sneaking into homes at night and stabbign them silently in their sleep...)
*Prepares Shotgun and kitchen knife and places them on the bed while drinking coffee to stay awake*
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Old 2011-09-29, 08:33   Link #1813
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*Prepares Shotgun and kitchen knife and places them on the bed while drinking coffee to stay awake*
As you sip your coffe, you notice the kitchen knife is missing, and there's a cold, sharp feeling at your neck...
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As I feel the sharp prickling at my neck I throw the coffee over my shoulder and the piping hot liquid makes contact with the person behind me
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As I feel the sharp prickling at my neck I throw the coffee over my shoulder and the piping hot liquid makes contact with the person behind me
Ichika: "OWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!"
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Old 2011-09-29, 08:44   Link #1816
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Ichika: "OWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!"
Exactly who I was aiming for
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Old 2011-09-29, 10:32   Link #1817
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For some reason, rather than writing chapter 9, I draw a mock Illustration...

Should search for a scanner tomorrow...
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Old 2011-09-29, 11:06   Link #1818
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SO FABULOUS!


BLITZ, LET'S USE HIM AS COUNTERPART TO YOSHI!

(But then again Karon might be too cheerful for my standard...how I can do it?)
I planned that later in the year, after an arc where Imouto helps Karon be more natural and Ichika helps her get over her grief, Gou appears as her true persona while Imouto 'enrols' as a separate student in Class 1-2. That way, she'd probably be as dark/manipulative/cunning as you need her to be.

Though I haven't quite decided what she's like in the rebuild of my fanon. Right now, I'm leaning towards something like a mix of Red Rangerness with some Irresponsible Captain Tylor and Tachibana Miya (Amagami). Or you guys can run with whatever and I might like it in the end! lol

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I want to use Maxi-sensei, but the background might not fit my mind...would you mind if I change it a little to suit our tastes?
No problem. If its good enough, I'll use it as his next build, because I need to update my fanon to the novel details and to the changes that I will make to Karon.
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Old 2011-09-29, 12:44   Link #1819
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SECOND CHANCE: CHAPTER 2 IS UP!

LINK: SECOND CHANCE CHAPTER 2
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Old 2011-09-29, 14:02   Link #1820
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Chapter 9 is about 15 % finished

Spoiler for ho yay:


The fact that someone *cough*Mayuzumi*cough* actually record the conversation by placing a recording device beforehand...
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