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Old 2011-10-04, 11:36   Link #34541
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What madness. I actually completed Chapter 11, and it's crazy, crazy, CRAZY, CRAZY long.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5 (Part 1), Chapter 5 (Part 2), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8,
Chapter 9, Chapter 10


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Old 2011-10-04, 11:49   Link #34542
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Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5 (Part 1), Chapter 5 (Part 2), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8,
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Old 2011-10-04, 12:00   Link #34543
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Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5 (Part 1), Chapter 5 (Part 2), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8,
Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11 (Part 1), Chapter 11 (Part 2)


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Old 2011-10-04, 12:24   Link #34544
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Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5 (Part 1), Chapter 5 (Part 2), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8,
Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11 (Part 1), Chapter 11 (Part 2), Chapter 11 (Part 3)

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Old 2011-10-04, 14:20   Link #34545
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Really wish you had put up a note that each of your posts are parts...

I thought at first that you had quadruple posted the same chapter.
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Old 2011-10-04, 14:35   Link #34546
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Yeah, as a rule of thumb: Differentiate your segmented story parts by listing them as actual parts in the spoiler topic.
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Old 2011-10-04, 15:13   Link #34547
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Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5 (Part 1), Chapter 5 (Part 2), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8,
Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11 (Part 1), Chapter 11 (Part 2), Chapter 11 (Part 3)

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Okay, I just burned through everything. Chapters 1 to 11. By Khorne that is crazy stuff and I'm loving it. Fate is giving me the creeps in this and I love the family moments among the Yagami. Nanoha's also sending chills down my spine. I was pleasantly surprised with the Yuuno/Hayate romance and chapter 10 reduced me to a puddle of sugary goo.

Really looking forward to more!
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Old 2011-10-04, 15:58   Link #34548
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Wait what happened to Fate again?
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Old 2011-10-04, 21:01   Link #34549
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Took me a little over one and a half hour to post it here so I forgot , fixed!

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Okay, I just burned through everything. Chapters 1 to 11. By Khorne that is crazy stuff and I'm loving it. Fate is giving me the creeps in this and I love the family moments among the Yagami. Nanoha's also sending chills down my spine. I was pleasantly surprised with the Yuuno/Hayate romance and chapter 10 reduced me to a puddle of sugary goo.

Really looking forward to more!
The first ten chapters took me about one month to complete. Chapter 11, well... twice the amount of time taken, innumerable amount of edits/deletes/additions of words and before last Sunday I had no idea how to present it properly, so thanks. It meant a lot.

Btw, in case you didn't know, the next chapter is the finale. This was originally meant to be a one shot prequel (Although if it exceeds 100k words, I really need to change my mind). Still is, just not quite sure with the one shot part.

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Old 2011-10-04, 21:11   Link #34550
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Old 2011-10-05, 09:18   Link #34551
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The first ten chapters took me about one month to complete. Chapter 11, well... twice the amount of time taken, innumerable amount of edits/deletes/additions of words and before last Sunday I had no idea how to present it properly, so thanks. It meant a lot.

Btw, in case you didn't know, the next chapter is the finale. This was originally meant to be a one shot prequel (Although if it exceeds 100k words, I really need to change my mind). Still is, just not quite sure with the one shot part.
Considering the size of Chapter 11, I can definitely believe it. It certainly came out well.

A one shot prequel? That's one hell of a prequel. Still, seeing how everything wraps up will be really interesting.
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Old 2011-10-05, 16:04   Link #34552
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Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History

Onwards Start

Onwards 2

Onwards 3

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Onwards End:


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Old 2011-10-05, 16:39   Link #34553
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Well, as Strikers event coming closure, so the meeting with Al... *cough-cough* Levi and Numbers and Lutecia. And we can see what Jail and regius take in this universe.

Can we expect the monumental Subaru/Nove+Wendy+Deed showdown for Teana`s love?
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Old 2011-10-05, 16:41   Link #34554
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Poor cat, Mr Snuggles has both uncommonly bad and uncommonly good luck. I can imagine the ending scene, so much awesomeness with an epic soundtrack.
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Old 2011-10-05, 17:16   Link #34555
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Old 2011-10-05, 18:06   Link #34556
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Really nice finish to Onward. Looking forward to the next installment as always.

Also, that poor cat.

And you are going to murder me with Caro by the time this story reaches its end. I'll have to learn how to write as a ghost.

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That was rather creepy, I must say. Good stuff.
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And a double-post from me means another chapter of something! I bring chapter 7 of Leave of Absence. I hope it doesn't sound too off, mostly because I wrote it while writing chapter 2 of Aftermath. Anyway, I'm done blabbing.

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Spoiler for Leave of Absence: Chapter 7:
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Old 2011-10-05, 18:19   Link #34558
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Creepiness of the piece aside, the bit with the letter being written as if he was speaking just comes off as slightly awkward to me.
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Old 2011-10-05, 19:45   Link #34559
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Lovecraft isn't to my taste.

Paranoid gibbering terror about "the Old Testament God as viewed through a demonic lens" seems pointlessly self-destructive, not fun or entertaining or even mildly interesting.
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Old 2011-10-05, 20:14   Link #34560
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Strange, for all the scene about Mr. Snuggles and Shamal's commentary the line which got a small laugh from me was the five-people chorus of where to go after promotion test.

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And a double-post from me means another chapter of something! I bring chapter 7 of Leave of Absence. I hope it doesn't sound too off, mostly because I wrote it while writing chapter 2 of Aftermath. Anyway, I done blabbing.

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Spoiler for Leave of Absence: Chapter 7:
A correction in the spoiler.

Now that I think about it, I've never seen an image of Signum laughing. And, both Zafira and Hayate feel like parental figures to each other? curious.
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