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Old 2011-10-06, 05:05   Link #2281
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Old 2011-10-06, 05:07   Link #2282
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"Send a maniac to catch a maniac..."
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So yeah.
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Old 2011-10-06, 05:17   Link #2283
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Old 2011-10-06, 05:19   Link #2284
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@Zero and Blitz- Heres the two drafts for the school festival, warning for mood whiplash between the two drafts. Please read and review!

Draft 1

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Draft 2

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Old 2011-10-06, 05:44   Link #2285
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@Zero and Blitz- Heres the two drafts for the school festival, warning for mood whiplash between the two drafts. Please read and review!

Draft 1

Spoiler:



Draft 2

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The draft is good, I expect you to fleshes out the conflict because it's seems like a small matter here. Tatenashi CAN'T have development from such situation.
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Old 2011-10-06, 05:52   Link #2286
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The draft is good, I expect you to fleshes out the conflict because it's seems like a small matter here. Tatenashi CAN'T have development from such situation.
I usually just post the bare bones of a draft when I put them here. When I make the real ones then they'll have all the parts.

Is the first one okay too? That also leads to a mood whiplash since that's when he'll see Squall and recover his memory. BTW, Dan can never get a break can he? The one day he gets to go to IS academy and he spends it with a crossdressed guy.
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Old 2011-10-06, 05:55   Link #2287
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Hmm, what do you guys think about
a fic where Ichika finds himself in
a situation a la Onikakushi?
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Old 2011-10-06, 05:59   Link #2288
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I usually just post the bare bones of a draft when I put them here. When I make the real ones then they'll have all the parts.

Is the first one okay too? That also leads to a mood whiplash since that's when he'll see Squall and recover his memory. BTW, Dan can never get a break can he? The one day he gets to go to IS academy and he spends it with a crossdressed guy.
Pair Dan with Ushio, now that would be awesome.

Spoiler for Random encounter in sacred twins:
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:16   Link #2289
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Pair Dan with Ushio, now that would be awesome.
Was planning to do something like that I have to make the scene where "Iris" drops a Bridget on him first though

Might also pair up Akira (From heart of the machine) with Natasha Fairs

Here's an example from a flashback arc.

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What do you think? Too much?

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Old 2011-10-06, 06:18   Link #2290
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Onikakushi is the arc that they
based the first 4 episodes of
Higurashi on.

Weird, I thought Higurashi was
pretty popular.
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:19   Link #2291
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Was planning to do something like that I have to make the scene where "Iris" drops a Bridget on him first though

Might also pair up Akira (From heart of the machine) with Natasha Fairs

Here's an example from a flashback arc.

Spoiler:


What do you think? Too much?

@Box- What's Onikakushi?
One of the 'Arcs' in Higurashi no Naku no koro Ni franchise. High Octane Nightmare Fuel, Unleaded.
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:23   Link #2292
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I get it! I watched Higurashi but I never bothered to memorize all the arc names. Ichika would pawn Higurashi since his IS is an I win button.

Do you think the draft I posted is okay to do or is it too unbelievable for a child to act that way?
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:28   Link #2293
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Irish: What?

Karon: If you kill them you would be just like them, and the neverending cycle of revenge would never, ever stop!

Irish: (pauses) You cannot stop me...

Karon: ...

Irish: (keeps on looking forward) You cannot stop me... I have much to do.

Karon: What do you hope to achieve...?

Irish: Eradicating I.S. from the history, and myself.

Karon: Yourself?!

Irish: (Looks up to the sky, grinning) A world without IS is enough for me to go happily...

*GLOMP*

Irish starts freaking out and trying to wriggle free.

Karon: How sad...

Irish: W-what are you doing?!

Karon: Don't you find it sad to be thinking like that?

Irish: Let go!! (kicks himself free)

Karon: Ah!! (tumbles)

*elsewhere, Tio resists the urge to snipe*

Irish: (a bit unnerved by the gesture) Cut your hero act already, damn it! Why do you care if its sad or not?! Nobody cares!! That's how the world is!!

Karon: That's... where you are wrong... (picks herself up while clutching her stomach) because... I really do care. The world you've seen... is only a small part of the whole universe. (stands up) Stop this, stop hurting yourself.

Irish: (slowly laughs, then openly cackles)

Kyuukai: Got you. (gets into position and squeezes trigger)

Karon senses immense pressure coming from far.

Karon: Look out!! (partial summons)

Bang, then a tremendous crash of shattering steel.

Irish is shocked as broken IS armor scattered from Karon. She lands writhing and clutching her arm, blood trickling out of the unshielded shattered IS arm.

Irish: (confused)

Kyuukai: Eh?!

Riselle: (boosts into range) Karon!!!

Karon: I... can protect you... if someone tries to hurt you... I can... protect even those you can't protect... but... I can't stop you from hurting yourself... Please... Aaahh...

*other ISes start landing around them and forming a defensive perimeter*

Irish tries to run, but Erika intercepts him. Tio jumps to his back, rifle raised. Riselle lands beside Karon while Celeste floats overhead. Irish reaches for his knife.

Riselle: Don't move! You're making it worse.

Karon: You've done enough...

Riselle: Karon! Your wasting your breath on him!!

Karon: We'll get Joshua. We'll bring him to the Academy. That's neutral territory. No one can touch him there. You too. Come with us. Please.

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I guess it isn't as romantic as you guys...
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:31   Link #2294
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^ Less romantic but MUCH MORE in character....

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I get it! I watched Higurashi but I never bothered to memorize all the arc names. Ichika would pawn Higurashi since his IS is an I win button.

Do you think the draft I posted is okay to do or is it too unbelievable for a child to act that way?
As I said, Amnesiac!Mode is one way for Irish to show his well-locked human side, either it's Karon or Tatenashi that become the 'key' for him to shown it for real (Not in amnesiac mode). and embrace the new meaning of life other than revenge.
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:35   Link #2295
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I realized it might be hard to visualize the Minerva battle-armor and the Drone IS units in my fic so I decided to spent some time drawing a sketch of them.

The Minerva Battle-Armor


Drone IS unit
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:38   Link #2296
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@Meister - Nice one! Kyuukai wouldn't have tried to shoot Irish at that point though He's against killing people if he doesn't have to and he'd probably try to tranq him rather than snipe him. Especially if he knows it's a misunderstanding.

Why would Karon suddenly glomp him though? Seems kinda odd that's all.

Irish also wouldn't have gone on a monologue about his motives What's the point of telling an IS pilot that he hates the infinite stratos? Probably most males in the world hate it too at that point so he wouldn't say anything and just tell her to shut up.

He'd probably just threaten her not to say anything about his past (he still thinks she's gonna blackmail him) then try to leave. He would tell her to cut the hero act though

They really can't do anything about Joshua though After the failed mission he's in critical condition and in a coma to boot. FRACTURE isn't the bad guy here and in fact they're losing a lot of money keeping Joshua alive at this point Irish himself doesn't hate them as I said before, he just resents the fact that he has to keep working to keep Joshua alive and get his freedom, but anybody else would've let Joshua die and killed Irish so he really doesn't complain about it. He does wish they gave him a more conservative partner
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:43   Link #2297
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Ahh, the Gundam references were
just too striking.
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:45   Link #2298
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Ahh, the Gundam references were
just too striking.
If you're referring to my artworks:

XD

At least it isn't as big as one. Being a battle-armor, it's shorter than an average IS unit. Likewise for the drone

Hope you like them
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:46   Link #2299
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@Meister - Nice one! Kyuukai wouldn't have tried to shoot Irish at that point though He's against killing people if he doesn't have to and he'd probably try to tranq him rather than snipe him. Especially if he knows it's a misunderstanding.
I guess swapping him for another IS pilot would work. I know a lot of 1-2 who'd like to be in that position...

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Why would Karon suddenly glomp him though? Seems kinda odd that's all.
Its sad, and he needs a hug.

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Irish also wouldn't have gone on a monologue about his motives What's the point of telling an IS pilot that he hates the infinite stratos? Probably most males in the world hate it too at that point so he wouldn't say anything and just tell her to shut up.
I thot it came at the end of the fight, and after the Newtype scene, so he'd be a bit more amicable.
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Old 2011-10-06, 06:48   Link #2300
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If you're referring to my artworks:

XD

At least it isn't as big as one. Being a battle-armor, it's shorter than an average IS unit. Likewise for the drone

Hope you like them
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