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Old 2011-10-11, 22:32   Link #34641
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Been slow around here...

My muse woke up early...

So, here's the next part.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 2:
Me: Yup... Looks like a partnership is starting to come out now.

Odin: Hm... That group almost sound like ours, Val.

Val: Independent from any factions yet loyal to a certain cause.

Mariemeia: Ditto!

Elane: Motion carried!

Sarah: I wonder whom Regius trying to outmaneuver...

Reia and Iris: The Brain Jars...

Amy: At least he's a bit concerned about the organization he's in...
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Old 2011-10-12, 11:32   Link #34642
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Been slow around here...

My muse woke up early...

So, here's the next part.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 2:
Different beginings, this is a major change really. If Regius is behind the idea from the start it will get rid of several administrative problems that our heroes will face later and make life generally easier for all concerned.

What will go wrong?
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Old 2011-10-12, 11:33   Link #34643
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And now for something different

Something light to read. Don't expect much, since the last half was written halfway to dreamland. Probably gonna need major rewrites later. If I can gather the will

As a reference, this occurred between A's and StrikerS

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Old 2011-10-12, 11:42   Link #34644
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Been slow around here...

My muse woke up early...

So, here's the next part.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 2:
I really liked this chapter. It gave us a good setup for future chapters and the establishment of Hayate's unit. I like how you're writing Regius. He's got a good feel to him.

Huzzah! Hayate passed her exam.

*pops some champagne, nailing a random passerby with the cork*

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Something light to read. Don't expect much, since the last half was written halfway to dreamland. Probably gonna need major rewrites later. If I can gather the will

As a reference, this occurred between A's and StrikerS

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That was pretty cool. A nice shot of military action and good fighting. I've been on an Ace Combat trip lately and this was most welcome.

Also, Blue Sand. Shout Out to Mass Effect?
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Old 2011-10-12, 12:14   Link #34645
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Been slow around here...

My muse woke up early...

So, here's the next part.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 2:
Regius seems somehow cool in this chapter. So, this is the establishing a new unit.
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Old 2011-10-12, 14:04   Link #34646
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I am so torn. On one hand I'm trying to learn a new programming language so I could work, on the other I just wanted to say screw it and get on with my final chapter. Getting used to writing at working hours~ So~ Bad~ Gah~
Yes, it is bad. I'm just a guilty. Writing during boring college lectures.

Much as want the last chapter, you should probably nail that language... What language is it by the way? If you say Assembly, you have my condolences.
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Old 2011-10-12, 15:30   Link #34647
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I have NO idea what my muse is on lately.

Nanya-muse: I was given an omake and it's too short! *Runs to DC-muse* Waaaahhh! People don't write enough.
DC-muse: *Glaring* Not everyone can write like you can!
Nanya-muse: *Sniffle* Why not?
DC-muse: SOME of us get writer's block!
Nanya-muse: Is it tasty?
DC-muse: ARRRGH!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Cycle 2

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 3:
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Old 2011-10-12, 17:36   Link #34648
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I can just imagine Vita`s grin. Scary !
"Like a giant airport fire." I`m speechless.
You shouldn`t make bets on such things...
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Old 2011-10-12, 19:24   Link #34649
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Been slow around here...

My muse woke up early...

So, here's the next part.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 2:
I like Regius not being against Hayate this time around.

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Something light to read. Don't expect much, since the last half was written halfway to dreamland. Probably gonna need major rewrites later. If I can gather the will

As a reference, this occurred between A's and StrikerS

Spoiler for [INSERT TITLE HERE]:
Nice piece.

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I have NO idea what my muse is on lately.

Nanya-muse: I was given an omake and it's too short! *Runs to DC-muse* Waaaahhh! People don't write enough.
DC-muse: *Glaring* Not everyone can write like you can!
Nanya-muse: *Sniffle* Why not?
DC-muse: SOME of us get writer's block!
Nanya-muse: Is it tasty?
DC-muse: ARRRGH!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Cycle 2

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 3:
Oh, Vita knowing they'll be under her command is the best news in a lot of time

Hayate is going to get it... this will be the last time anyone takes a suggestion from Thoth. I hope she's carrying a pair of pants.

I got reminded on Hayate's fire-extinguishing methods on certain Nanoha GamerS chapter.
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Old 2011-10-12, 19:52   Link #34650
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I have NO idea what my muse is on lately.

Nanya-muse: I was given an omake and it's too short! *Runs to DC-muse* Waaaahhh! People don't write enough.
DC-muse: *Glaring* Not everyone can write like you can!
Nanya-muse: *Sniffle* Why not?
DC-muse: SOME of us get writer's block!
Nanya-muse: Is it tasty?
DC-muse: ARRRGH!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Cycle 2

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 3:
Me: Did Hayate TRYING to INVOKE Murphy's Law!?

Odin: She did.

Val: This aint gonna end well for our mistress of the night sky.

Amy: She's screwed in this one.

Mariemeia: ROYALLY SCREWED!

Val: Do I need to equip my Aqua Blaster?

Reia: Don't bother, uncle. TSAB will take care of it.

Iris: And by the way, Nanya-muse. Writer's block is not very healthy to Muse like yourself.

Sarah: It might slow your writer's pace or worse, ran out of Idea and motivation and good bye story.
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Old 2011-10-12, 20:03   Link #34651
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ASP.NET. The hard part was getting into mood though. >_>
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Old 2011-10-13, 00:29   Link #34652
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I have NO idea what my muse is on lately.

Nanya-muse: I was given an omake and it's too short! *Runs to DC-muse* Waaaahhh! People don't write enough.
DC-muse: *Glaring* Not everyone can write like you can!
Nanya-muse: *Sniffle* Why not?
DC-muse: SOME of us get writer's block!
Nanya-muse: Is it tasty?
DC-muse: ARRRGH!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Cycle 2

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle 3:
Hayate, I'd like you to meet my friend. His name is Murphy.

Still, that was pretty funny. Pretty soon all of the buffets on Mid will have warnings issued about them. I'm looking forward to seeing what kinds of payback Vita will get on Nanoha, Fate, and Yuuno. Heck, I'm looking forward to everything that's coming.

...If Yuuno does wind up with Hayate's panties, what will Eins do to him?

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ASP.NET. The hard part was getting into mood though. >_>
Can't say I'm familiar with that language. I never got beyond some more advanced Java and rudimentary Assembly. Good luck though.
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Old 2011-10-13, 09:41   Link #34653
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I've been on an Ace Combat trip lately and this was most welcome.
Lucky you. Considering the state of my console, I won't have a chance to play Assault Horizon for a while.

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Also, Blue Sand. Shout Out to Mass Effect?
Less shout-out and more of 'I'm not in the mood of making names and is currently having a Mass Effect kick'
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Old 2011-10-14, 23:27   Link #34654
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Lucky you. Considering the state of my console, I won't have a chance to play Assault Horizon for a while.
Haven't gotten around to playing Assault Horizon. I've been going with Zero and 5, my two personal favorites.

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Less shout-out and more of 'I'm not in the mood of making names and is currently having a Mass Effect kick'
Makes sense.

Be kinda interesting to see an Ace Combat or Mass Effect crossover story with Nanoha. That A's Combat Zero AMV makes me weak in the knees.
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Old 2011-10-15, 00:15   Link #34655
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Be kinda interesting to see an Ace Combat or Mass Effect crossover story with Nanoha. That A's Combat Zero AMV makes me weak in the knees.
Did you see the Touhou Project/Ace Combat videos on youtube?

I see the Scarlet Sisters and the odd pair of Youmu and Tenshi fighting back to back, and I can't help but want to see more.
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Old 2011-10-15, 05:36   Link #34656
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Sorry for the lack of updates guys, exam season and won't blow over till 3 weeks from now...
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Finally completed one of my random one-shots. It's the smackdown you all wanted to see, but were too afraid to ask! It takes place during A's...

The Greatest Fight Never Animated


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I have another short almost completed which will be my next release. But it's a 2-part Halloween fic, where one character faces a night of terror that they didn't see coming...
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Old 2011-10-16, 11:51   Link #34658
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I figured such a fight would be fairly lame if animated
Nah, I imagine it would alternate between Awesomely Cool and Hilariously Silly.


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so I tried to give it a bit of a bent that the anime obviously wouldn't. :P Hopefully, it was good for at least a chuckle or two...
It was, but short of the ero-bind, I don't think there was anything the series wouldn't use.

...Except for Yuuno giving up. Especially because he's prioritizing a belly rub over stopping the people who hurt his friends and are threatening the world. It's funny for a funny short, but it would be bad if canon.

If handled canonically, I'd have Shamal win through superior experience, and perhaps have Yuuno join the ranks of the core-stolen. Assuming that Shamal does suddenly find a reason to flee before finishing the job.


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Hey guys! It's been 1 year (yesterday) since I started Blood That Flows!

Hooray!

Nanya-muse: WHEE! *Glomps DC-muse* I'm SOOO HAPPY!
DC-muse: ... Well, this time, I think you did good.
Nanya-muse: YAY! *HUGS*
DC-muse: AAAAAIIIIRRR!!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Cycle 2

Cycle 3

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle End:


Spoiler for Comments:
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Old 2011-10-16, 23:53   Link #34660
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Hey guys! It's been 1 year (yesterday) since I started Blood That Flows!

Hooray!

Nanya-muse: WHEE! *Glomps DC-muse* I'm SOOO HAPPY!
DC-muse: ... Well, this time, I think you did good.
Nanya-muse: YAY! *HUGS*
DC-muse: AAAAAIIIIRRR!!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

Cycle Start

Cycle 2

Cycle 3

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Cycle End:


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Amy: I bet you two learned a VERY valuable lesson today.

Yuuno and Hayate: *looks at the ground* Yes ma'am.

Mariemeia: And that's never, EVER tempt Fate.

*Everyone looks at Fate Testarossa Inverse.*

Mariemeia: NOT FATE T. INVERSE, YOU SHORT-SIGHTED FOOLS!

Elane: And NEVER TRY invoking Murphy's Law together with it.

Odin: For once, I agree with the twins' opinions.

Me: Well, they're NOT nuts about maiming/killing/slaughter(Mariemeia) or about firearms and using them in the most extreme way(Elane) all the time Odin.

Val: Everyone got a way to cope up with your parents loss, Odin. *mumbles about not finding out the truth before HIS death.*

Reia: From the looks of things. *looks at Subaru and Ginga* A new Fan and Rival is born from this one.

Iris: I agree with you, Rei.

Sarah: Excuse me while I hunt some perverts who still wishing that Nanya do a lot more HOTTER scenes after this one.

*Draws Haeryongdo and leaves the room.*

Me: Oh well... Anyways, Happy Anniversary on Blood That Flows fanfic!

Odin: Bring out the booze and hard drinks!

Reia: I'll drink to that! *Drinks a glass of Kusuha Mizuha's Health drink.*

Iris: Same here! *Also drinks a glass of the said health drink.*

Val: I wonder did those two inherits HIS stomach.

Me: I DONT want to figure HOW in the world they can stand THAT health drink...
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