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Old 2011-10-17, 00:10   Link #34661
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Wait, Yuuno ends up accidentally seeing Hayate's bare ass and vulva, and survives?

I mean, I know this isn't Love Hina or anything, but shouldn't there at least have been a shriek of mortification from Hayate, or some sort of negative reaction from Nanoha?
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Old 2011-10-17, 00:14   Link #34662
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Considering canon!teen!Nanoha was willing to drag human!Yuuno into the hot spring with her and the other girls, not necessarily. Hormones.

And Hayate brought it on herself.
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Old 2011-10-17, 00:31   Link #34663
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That being said, the utter lack of reaction from Hayate (Or rather, the writer failed to put them in) was rather er, anti-climatic? Would really love to know...

...

Shoot, being a Hayate fan/writer has it downfalls when you're imagining stuff... you shouldn't...

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Old 2011-10-17, 00:38   Link #34664
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Considering canon!teen!Nanoha was willing to drag human!Yuuno into the hot spring with her and the other girls, not necessarily.
Hormones? Or a continuation of a young Arisa and Suzuka's sentiment that Yuuno as a ferret is a ferret and not a man? Even Miyuki asked Yuuno to transform for her again sometime, though that WAS young Yuuno rather than teenage Yuuno.

I mean, I figure opinions regarding the matter (and Yuuno) would change as the girls (and he) grew up, but...

Well, there was that Sound Stage when Fate was trying to imply to Nanoha that Yuuno had romantic feelings for her, but Nanoha just wasn't getting it. Maybe Nanoha is canonically supposed to be thick? Thick enough to ask the young man crushing on her to join their bathing trip as a ferret?


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Hormones.
Are you suggesting that Nanoha sexually enjoyed watch Yuuno sexually oogle another woman? Like voyuerism?


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That being said, the utter lack of reaction from Hayate (Or rather, the writer failed to put them in) was rather er, anti-climatic? Would really love to know...
Yeah.


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Shoot, being a Hayate fan/writer has it downfalls when you're imagining stuff... you shouldn't...

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Are you imaginging Hayate as a exhibitionist to match Nanoha's voyeurism?
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Old 2011-10-17, 01:17   Link #34665
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I honestly can't imagine anyone that thick though. Or perhaps it was the others who did not get Nanoha's true intention. =P
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Old 2011-10-17, 02:01   Link #34666
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I honestly can't imagine anyone that thick though. Or perhaps it was the others who did not get Nanoha's true intention. =P
Well, for the Sound Stage I actually think that Nanoha just latched onto the wrong idea and Fate was being too vague for Nanoha to realize they were talking about different things.

Especially since Nanoha was talking about one of her passions: Combat Tactics. This is a girl who finds fighting games apparently more interesting than dolls, so she thinks of tactics rather than crushes.


The hot springs thing, I actually think either that Nanoha honestly (if naively) felt mixed bathing with Yuuno would be platonic, or that Nanoha, Fate and Hayate are hungrier than canon lets us see and Nanoha was tease-flirting with him... in a semi-public setting, no less. At the very least, it was a party with their friends and family.
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Old 2011-10-17, 02:37   Link #34667
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Hey guys! It's been 1 year (yesterday) since I started Blood That Flows!

Hooray!

Nanya-muse: WHEE! *Glomps DC-muse* I'm SOOO HAPPY!
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Nanya-muse: YAY! *HUGS*
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Congratulation with bir... uh, writing day.

So, Yuuno got the nice view and new fan-girl (such a lucky ferret), maybe he should became Muslim in order to avoid future conflicts with girls?
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Old 2011-10-17, 05:04   Link #34668
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*Reads "the bet" stuff*

fanfiction can get reaaaally weird at times xDU
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Old 2011-10-17, 11:53   Link #34669
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For the record, I'm not dead. Dark Souls and Assault Horizon ate up any free time I had. Many glorious and pathetic deaths were had by all.

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Hey guys! It's been 1 year (yesterday) since I started Blood That Flows!

Hooray!

Nanya-muse: WHEE! *Glomps DC-muse* I'm SOOO HAPPY!
DC-muse: ... Well, this time, I think you did good.
Nanya-muse: YAY! *HUGS*
DC-muse: AAAAAIIIIRRR!!

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Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

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Congratulations on the 1 year anniversary of Blood that Flows!
*refrains from nailing another passerby with a cork* Got fined for that last time...

Still, that was a really good chapter and it'll be interesting to see how Subaru develops with Yuuno as her idol instead of Nanoha. Also Ginga's antagonism towards Nanoha.

The outcome of the bet was rather hilarious, as was the idea that everyone would blame Yuuno and Hayate for the fire.

I will never let Nanoha water my lawn. Ever. I rather enjoy living in a desert and not the middle of an ocean.

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That being said, the utter lack of reaction from Hayate (Or rather, the writer failed to put them in) was rather er, anti-climatic? Would really love to know...

...

Shoot, being a Hayate fan/writer has it downfalls when you're imagining stuff... you shouldn't...

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I'm pretty sure that Hayate's thought process shut down a few seconds after the situation registered.

HayateSoft OSX Terminal:
- User had lost the bet.
- User must now provide panties to Yuuno Scrya.
> Yuuno Scrya: Male. Known for 5+ Years.
> Relationship Status with User: Close friend? Need Confirmation.
- Yuuno Scrya now present.
- Provide currently worn panties to target Yuuno Scrya? Y/N
- Error.
- Error.
- HayateSoft OSX has performed an illegal operation and will be shut down.

Cue total lack of reaction to handing her panties to Yuuno, the panties she's worn all day and through a lot of physical activity are being removed and handed to a shirtless Yuuno who may do with said undergarment as he pleases.

What do you mean, downfalls? I'd consider it a perk.
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Old 2011-10-17, 13:11   Link #34670
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Cue total lack of reaction to handing her panties to Yuuno
No, no. We're weirded out by Hayate and Nanoha's lack of reaction to Yuuno having seen her naked privates and Thoth Driver's crass remark about her body.

She showed the panties when she hooked them, but the motion of pulling them off would have concealed her privates through angles and the fall of the shirt. She was only exposed after she fell, with her butt in the air. At least, that was how it seemed to ME.

I can see her exhaustion and mortification leading to a mental shut-out and autopilot response, which also contributed to her clumsy fall...

But the naked reveal and the rude remark ought to have sparked some reaction.


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the panties she's worn all day and through a lot of physical activity
Before and after her armor was manifested, yes. But possibly not during. Clothing seems to disappear while the barrier jacket is in place.

Certainly, a lot of people seemed naked after the explosion that ended the practice match in ViVid, and there was Fate's clothing damage before that finale.
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Old 2011-10-17, 13:23   Link #34671
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Sorry about that, I can edit how that went later.

I should've waited to post it, but I had been working on it for 3 days and I was anxious to get it out.

Plus, I was getting tired and should have been in bed 90 minutes earlier.

And, for the record, I do like it when you guys find stuff like that.

It helps me get better as a writer.

So, thanks. ^_^

Edit: Okay, I went back and edited it a bit. How does it look?
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Old 2011-10-17, 14:52   Link #34672
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Snapping a hand out quickly, she cast a quick spell
Redundancy. I'd get rid of the first one


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"Hayate-chan!" Nanoha yelped and scrambled to get to the door, closing it as she apologized to Yuuno and tended to the embarrassed girl.
Hayate's too far away from the door and Nanoha for "and", since Nanoha can't do both at once.

It would have to be something like "before running over to tend to the embarassed girl".
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Old 2011-10-17, 15:15   Link #34673
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Redundancy. I'd get rid of the first one



Hayate's too far away from the door and Nanoha for "and", since Nanoha can't do both at once.

It would have to be something like "before running over to tend to the embarassed girl".
Thanks. That helps a lot.
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Old 2011-10-17, 15:42   Link #34674
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Hey guys! It's been 1 year (yesterday) since I started Blood That Flows!

Hooray!

Nanya-muse: WHEE! *Glomps DC-muse* I'm SOOO HAPPY!
DC-muse: ... Well, this time, I think you did good.
Nanya-muse: YAY! *HUGS*
DC-muse: AAAAAIIIIRRR!!

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Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Mr Snuggles Omake

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Cycle 3

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Depends what side of the bet you were on, some people liked it better than others did.
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It's the best view ever.
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Depends what side of the bet you were on, some people liked it better than others did.
Yup, Yuuno is now a certified molester xDU
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Yup, Yuuno is now a certified molester xDU
He's a certified "Accidental Molester"
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Plausable deniability, he didn't touch anybody... on screen.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:08   Link #34679
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Plausable deniability, he didn't touch anybody... on screen.
Unfortunate implications for Hayate, then xDU
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Old 2011-10-18, 00:06   Link #34680
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I am unable to find chapter 1 of this monster, but it is uploaded on ff.net.

After quite a bit of work, here comes chapter 2 of Swords and Shields. I think that I lost my mind in there somewhere. @_@

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