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Old 2011-11-12, 04:57   Link #7461
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@ Zero - I should make Autumn older. She was there when Irish was 7 so she can't be 22 in the fic.

Irish isn't a soldier. Unlike Kyuukai, he has no training and everything he has is because of learning it by himself. This even reflects on his skills which are more pragmatic and stealth based compared to Kyuukai's power house and frontline tactics.

Add that to the fact that he's constantly screwed over and gets his ass kicked and you get someone you'd rather avoid than idolize.

Side note - Read the Mary sue list of traits. Here's what I got.

Has perma stubble - Uh, he doesn't even have hair on his torso, let alone his head.

Muscular - Nope. Even scrawnier than some girls.

Lean and streamlined - Played straight and deconstructed. If this was a romance story he'd be a sue, in a story like this it just ends up being a disadvantage.

Lot's of sex with lots of women - Completely averted. Has no concept of romance and the only one who doesn't have sex by the end.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:01   Link #7462
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Ah, then it's must be Gunblade

Also, nobody is interested with the challenge anyway.

@Eratas That's 'Western Marty Stu' in the list.... also, Child Soldier's definition is very general: a child fighting in a conflict for a faction or ideal, no more, no less. Irish IS a child soldier.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:03   Link #7463
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Ah, then it's must be Gunblade

Also, nobody is interested with the challenge anyway.
Sorry, but wavehawk's challenge a while back showed me that I have a ways to go before getting into challenges.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:09   Link #7464
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@ Box - Do YOU know Autumns age?

@ Zero - That makes sense. it depends if you mean "legal" child soldier or not. Kyuukai is a "legal" one since he doesn't receive abuse and fights for a good cause. Irish is "illegal" because he's with a group that forbids getting close to your comrades and blows up buildings instead of the usual good deeds.

Also, there's the fact that Kyuukai can function in society whereas Irish is obviously unhinged and never given proper treatment.

Side note - Western mary sue? Does that mean Irish is a stu?
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:12   Link #7465
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Her age was never stated.

And you know better than to ask a woman's three sizes.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:13   Link #7466
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Side note - Western mary sue? Does that mean Irish is a stu?
I swear the amount of spamming in this forum made our memories screwed, SO FAR Irish isn't a Stu, Yoshi IS deliberately made as a Stu (though unconventional).

Beware of Stu moment, beware. Excellent OC CAN be fall to this if you're not careful. and once again, definition of Sue is SUBJECTIVE.

(Madoka is immune since she's a Canon character, even though she's getting Sue moments on certain chapters)

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And you know better than to ask a woman's three sizes.
So this is why I always been slapped by girls....
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:19   Link #7467
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@ Zero and Box - You don't? I've asked before and they didn't seem to mind.

Side note - Yoshi doesn't seem like a Sue. Unless he suddenly derails the story and makes the plot kiss his ass.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:22   Link #7468
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@ Zero and Box - You don't? I've asked before and they didn't seem to mind.
What? I mean everyone has their own story format (like you gunning for all girls, Rain an his crackfic) and definitely not suitable for challenge...

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Side note - Yoshi doesn't seem like a Sue. Unless he suddenly derails the story and makes the plot kiss his ass.
I'll stop writing and study how to write fanfic once again if he does, I swear, please tell me if it happens.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:24   Link #7469
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@ Zero - I meant asking girls the question. I wasn't slapped like you said.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:27   Link #7470
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@ Zero - I meant asking girls the question. I wasn't slapped like you said.
Some culture are more strict than other you know, back when we're in high school, most of them don't seem to mind, some other does mind...

Only averted in College that we studied human anatomy to the core...sex jokes never feel so dull like now, and both guys and girls have no problem with it
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:28   Link #7471
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@ Treme - I meant the fact that he's working for a homicidal super computer. Most bad guys aren't stupid enough to work for something like that. They still watch out for their own lives.
Spoiler for Harbinger:


Edit: Humans are always the worst villains in my story. Even Rouge AI can't match the sheer evil and brutally of Human.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:30   Link #7472
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Spoiler for Harbinger:


Edit: Humans are always the worst villains in my story. Even Rouge AI can't match the sheer evil and brutally of Human.
So much potential for chronic backstabbing disorder...
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:33   Link #7473
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@ Zero - Ichika gets away with it because of his circumstances and the fact girls seem to have no concept of modesty.

Side note - That's because my class is literally a cluster sex joke bomb. You couldn't last 5 minutes without hearing a genitalia or dirty joke. I was one of the only one who doesn't indulge so I got a reputation of being asexual.

@ Treme - Nice! It has a lot of potential!
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:34   Link #7474
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Marathoning yuri anime, it...my head...




EDIT: Eratas, I myself am a walking generator of dirty jokes, puns, and tsukkomis.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:34   Link #7475
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Ubau live and breathe the Trope!

Ubau: "I always wanted to be a hero and save the world, now I can....with this machine of yours of course."
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:36   Link #7476
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Please, no Yuri in Infinite Stratos, PLEASE GOD!

Wait, there's one in canon....
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:42   Link #7477
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@ Zero - I do the opposite. I add ho-yay and crossdressing

@ Box - I was called the "innocent one" in the group. If I knew you, all your jokes would go over my head.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:42   Link #7478
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@ Zero - I do the opposite. I add ho-yay and crossdressing

@ Box - I was called the "innocent one" in the group. If I knew you, all your jokes would go over my head.
Except WE corrupted your mind....

Nevermind, I'm tired....see you guys later....
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:43   Link #7479
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Please, no Yuri in Infinite Stratos, PLEASE GOD!

Wait, there's one in canon....
There's nothing I can do anymore, it's bound to happen eventually.
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Old 2011-11-12, 05:47   Link #7480
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See you guys too. I have a field trip tom so I have to sleep early.
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