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Old 2011-11-20, 02:44   Link #8541
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Episode 4 is...OUT!!!!?????
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Old 2011-11-20, 03:08   Link #8542
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Yeah, Saintess, Spear and I watched it at AFA11. Shit was awesome.

That said, stop trying to kill Cecilia. You're only making me want to feature her more.
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Old 2011-11-20, 03:11   Link #8543
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I admit, it took so long to come out I forgot what was going on, Cecilia always seems to be the butt of those eh?
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Old 2011-11-20, 03:18   Link #8544
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Well, my first chapter had someone trying to kidnap Charu, so killing Cecillia wouln't be much of a stretch, would it...??
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Old 2011-11-20, 03:22   Link #8545
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I'm actually not afraid to give her a bigger role in Vandam. After all, the initial plan did call for Houki and Cecilia to appear. I later reduced it in case I caused a canon paradox.

But perhaps I should have someone worthy of being called a Representative Candidate do a little more...

Houki still gets pranked by Tabane. But in a good way.

Laura remains a cameo however. The 'villainous plot' scene I have for her is too cheesy to pass up. I'll just face-drop Charlotte, Ichika and Lingyin for completeness.
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Old 2011-11-20, 03:23   Link #8546
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Oh... Goddamn it...

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Old 2011-11-20, 03:55   Link #8547
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Chinatown pretty stale today so I got back earlier than I thought I would...

Also Jak, writer's jam I suppose?
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Old 2011-11-20, 04:06   Link #8548
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Chinatown pretty stale today so I got back earlier than I thought I would...

Also Jak, writer's jam I suppose?
No it's not that. I got Ch. 4 pretty much sorted out, it's just that I didn't have the time I thought I had today to write it.

I planned on using the whole day to write Ch. 4 out, but because of "personal matters" offline (the kind that's not all that important), hours were lost. If I didn't loose those hours, Ch. 4 would've been done hours ago.

Oh and as for an Opening that you guys talked about a few pages ago; I think I have something for Project Silverback. It's something that some of you guys are familiar with...
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Old 2011-11-20, 04:26   Link #8549
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I see...

Well, I have my times too. Back to typing~!
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Old 2011-11-20, 04:49   Link #8550
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I go to sleep for a couple of hours and that's when everyone starts posting!? My sense of timing sucks
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Old 2011-11-20, 04:55   Link #8551
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It's okay, Eratas, that's how I feel every time I log-on here.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:00   Link #8552
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@ Box - Still sucks though Only reason I went to sleep is because no one here was posting

@ Zero - I posted a re-hash of Irish's epilogue on 426. Please tell me if it's okay or not so I know whether I can start on the first part of chapter 5.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:01   Link #8553
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At least you guys don't have to fight to get modem privilege.

Just read the improved draft, Irish POV is so minimalistic isn't it, at least every single words of him are plot important.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:03   Link #8554
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@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic?

Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"?
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:05   Link #8555
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@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic?
Hmm, I thought you said it itself?

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Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"?
There's only one modem in the house, one steam powered PC without ethernet card and one high end laptop, do the math.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:06   Link #8556
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@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic?

Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"?
Well if you must know, Vicky is a guerrilla ace trained since he was a zygote, he's been fighting giant watermelon mechas on fire, blind-folded, underwater, in space for 1312342 centuries now, fighting for the sole purpose of attaining modern conveniences, I hope that clears all your doubts.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:10   Link #8557
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@ Detective - Yes. Yes it does.

@ Zero - Now I remember Sorry, I'm still groggy from waking up:P Anyway, is there anything I can do to improve it? I feel something's off for some reason.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:13   Link #8558
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@ Zero - Now I remember Sorry, I'm still groggy from waking up:P Anyway, is there anything I can do to improve it? I feel something's off for some reason.
I dunno, maybe TOO simplistic would leave a bitter taste with reader. Maybe you can make Kyuukai and Ichika at similar detail... except as canon indicates Ichika's minds and monologue tend to wander into random topic (such as talking about how he love Japanese food when he saw Houki for some reason....).

Irish is a recon/ assassin type guy, and while he wouldn't bother to remember people's physical appearance, he MIGHT pay a lot of attention to the environment itself.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:20   Link #8559
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@ Zero - Thank you! Ichika does tend to monologue and act as Mr. exposition in chapter 2/3 so I have no problem with that.

Pay attention to the environment more? As in: Take note of things like lighting, possible escape plans, trying to see if there's guards on the outside etc etc? Like that?
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:24   Link #8560
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@ Zero - Thank you! Ichika does tend to monologue and act as Mr. exposition in chapter 2/3 so I have no problem with that.
I actually wonder IF Ichika isn't talkative enough in Sacred Twins.

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Pay attention to the environment more? As in: Take note of things like lighting, possible escape plans, trying to see if there's guards on the outside etc etc? Like that?
EXACTLY, if he paid attention to people, it's either

1. Analyzing if they're allies or foe.
2. Whether they're dangerous or not.
3. Anything else that's slightly more trivial.
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