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Old 2011-11-21, 06:08   Link #8741
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I tried to fix Rong with a reasonable history of why he is the way he is. For some reason it hurt me to write it.

Spoiler for Rong:


EDIT: For those who opened the spoiler: Sorry for it being so long.

For those who read the contents. Thank you. I know it's too long and detailed to be a summary but I wanted to keep reminders of notable events.

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Old 2011-11-21, 06:24   Link #8742
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I really want to write, but something's stopping me. I don't know what it is.

I hear in my mind says "Writing is not your top priority"

Probably the result of my sleep deprivation. I haven't slept this friday -.- luckily I got yesterday,..//
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Old 2011-11-21, 06:26   Link #8743
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I really want to write, but something's stopping me. I don't know what it is.

I hear in my mind says "Writing is not your top priority"

Probably the result of my sleep deprivation. I haven't slept this friday -.- luckily I got yesterday,..//
GO TO SLEEP. Writing is not your top priority, Writing is not your top priority, Writing is not your top priority, Writing is not your top priority....

You can't write well if you're lacking sleep, I actually took a rest from it (even if I want to write, I can't).

@Rong it solves matter of reason why he was in I.S.A., now to the matter of depiction

1. Does The academy knew he's a terrorist?
2. If so, why he was placed in Ichika's bunk instead of, well, by himself?
3. If then, why Ichika trust him quickly? (He mustn't know Rong's identity)
4. How exactly he can interact so casually with Chifuyu? XD

EDIT: Back to home, see you guys.
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Old 2011-11-21, 06:27   Link #8744
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I'm going to sleep now, see ya guys.
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Old 2011-11-21, 06:36   Link #8745
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The hand-gun: Average joe.
The machine-gun: Talks in rapid-fire, with words going all over the place.
The gatling-gun: A more extreme version of the machine-gun.
The shot-gun: Tends to direct words at a group of people, instead of just one.
The sniper: Conservative in rate, but words hit hard and sink in deep.
The rocket: Rarely talks, but when they do, they hit like a bomb-shell.
The flame-thrower: Words tend to affect themselves almost as much as others.
The tazer: Usually just says annoying and painful stuff.
The psuedo-gun (ex. paintball): Not much impact or things to say.
One day I might create an OC list filling these out.
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Old 2011-11-21, 07:16   Link #8746
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@ Jak: I'll get reading when I can. I don't want to skim through it since I might miss some major details. I'll make sure to leave a review too.
Leave one for me too, if you may

Since it's purely my own line of events from Chapter 8-9 onwards, not sure if it flows decently with the story.

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Hmh.

Someone PM'ed me asking if I can stop writing my fic. Wonder why...
What the fridge?

@Also Zero, did you really left a review in my fic for Chapter 9, coz I'm not seeing it anywhere up till now.
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Old 2011-11-21, 07:29   Link #8747
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I'm going to bed now, have an exam on Physics tomorrow.

Work, Energy, and Power.
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Old 2011-11-21, 07:31   Link #8748
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Night Yachi, I'll just be here, dreaming about the epilogue until I get something good to type out. :P
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Old 2011-11-21, 07:42   Link #8749
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@Rong it solves matter of reason why he was in I.S.A., now to the matter of depiction

1. Does The academy knew he's a terrorist?
2. If so, why he was placed in Ichika's bunk instead of, well, by himself?
3. If then, why Ichika trust him quickly? (He mustn't know Rong's identity)
4. How exactly he can interact so casually with Chifuyu? XD
1. Yes, the academy knows he's a terrorist, but no one knows the exact crimes he's done. All they know is the rumor that he was able to defeat an IS with the AE. Nobody even knows what the AE looks like.

2. I don't have an excuse for that one. Fillia requested Rong be treated normally, ISA did the normal thing and bunk a guy with a guy.

3. I don't think Ichika is the type to be in the know about news until it's too late or staring him in the face

4. That's my crappy writing at work right there. He's actually trying to measure her if she's as strong as the information he has suggested. During Rong's time in HustleBack, there were top targets in the world. Two of them are Tabane and Chifuyu so HustleBack did as much research as they could on them, the works. Chifuyu doesn't see Rong as much of a threat however she wanted to see what someone who piloted a non-IS unit and defeated an IS unit was like. She was also gauging him. The random funny stuff that happened between them was just for kicks from me.
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Old 2011-11-21, 08:58   Link #8750
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Karon isn't an oppai enthusiast like a certain triplet or a certain aoi toori, but she doesn't see anything wrong with groping another girl's breasts when its part of a point she's trying to make.
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Old 2011-11-21, 09:02   Link #8751
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Karon isn't an oppai enthusiast like a certain triplet or a certain aoi toori, but she doesn't see anything wrong with groping another girl's breasts when its part of a point she's trying to make.
Then mentally ill would be an understatement, no?

Well I just kick-started Phantasy Star Portable 2 Infinity today, and been trying to get around the game in Jap (and end up looking like an idiot on the staff bus).

And I say we need a character like this.



Or at least her sword.
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Old 2011-11-21, 09:22   Link #8752
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Then mentally ill would be an understatement, no?
Karon: *flails* Da-ka-ra! SKINSHIPPU da yo! SKINSHIPPU! There's a difference!

Riz:

Eccentric people have their own way of thinking.



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Well I just kick-started Phantasy Star Portable 2 Infinity today, and been trying to get around the game in Jap (and end up looking like an idiot on the staff bus).

And I say we need a character like this.



Or at least her sword.
I suggest giving that Sword Equalizer to the G2 Altolong MPIS which is based on the Gundam Nataku. I call it the Tianjian (Heaven's Blade).

I could use her character as well. We need a serious uptight Chinese 'Central Government' type character to control Ling. A first year student with astounding grades and meticulousness, she is given the assignment after Karon drafts Lingyi into Shooting St@r as a "Death Metal Idol". Like most of the 'greater St@rs', those outside the founding 13, she is in another class. Her voice actor is Chiwa Saitou, using her Homura range.

You may think that this ice queen is ultrafeminist, but to everyone's horror she's happily betrothed to someone back on the Mainland. Even more so, her emails are so full of emoticons and cute phrasings that even Rin who planned to sabotage her was left wondering if they broke into the wrong mailbox! As if that's not confusing enough, they learn that she's into Venetian gondolas.




As for Rin's new role in St@rs, yes, you are now imagining:

Rin: SATSUGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI!!

And then there's Maddy Candy, GENOM and LOVE, if you get my drift.


EDIT: Argh I just had crack that this Central Government girl's ISper ability is to completely process all the information found within a single relativisitic frame of reference, allowing her to "stop time" relative to herself, identify targets, and plan a flawless attack. This resembles Gin's ISper ability which allows her to calculate the best possible shot using all the variables in the space between her and her target.
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Old 2011-11-21, 09:36   Link #8753
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Karon: *flails* Da-ka-ra! SKINSHIPPU da yo! SKINSHIPPU! There's a difference!

Riz:

Eccentric people have their own way of thinking.
Riselle : DON'T touch me. *turns and walks off*
Karon : *swipes her hand down Riselle's back and undos her bra strap*
Riselle : EEEEEKKKKKKKKK! *draws Blind Horizon and attempts to slaughter every guy in the room*

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I could use her character as well. We need a serious uptight Chinese 'Central Government' type character to control Ling. A first year student with astounding grades and meticulousness, she is given the assignment after Karon drafts Lingyi into Shooting St@r as a "Death Metal Idol". Like most of the 'greater St@rs', those outside the founding 13, she is in another class. Her voice actor is Chiwa Saitou, using her Homura range.
I think you are looking for this template.
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Old 2011-11-21, 09:44   Link #8754
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Riselle : DON'T touch me. *turns and walks off*
Karon : *swipes her hand down Riselle's back and undos her bra strap*
Riselle : EEEEEKKKKKKKKK! *draws Blind Horizon and attempts to slaughter every guy in the room*
This, however, is not skinship. There's no bonding involved.

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I think you are looking for this template.
Close enough, but I can still use that image.

I shall call her Fan, and her character song is oddly, Staple Stable.
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Old 2011-11-21, 16:03   Link #8755
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@ Zero - How many students are in IS academy? From first to third years.
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Old 2011-11-21, 16:04   Link #8756
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Grand total of 300, roughly 30 student per class, and there's five class per grade/year. You may notice that class 1-1 and 1-2 is odd (32 and 31 respectively). The classroom itself has capacity of 35, judging from screen-shot (5 people per row and seven per column)
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Old 2011-11-21, 16:18   Link #8757
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Just 300? That's pretty damn small for a school, I expected it to be about a 100 at least.

EDIT: I meant 1000!
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Old 2011-11-21, 16:27   Link #8758
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It's called elite for a reason.

EDIT: Whoops, miscalculation, it's about 450
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Old 2011-11-21, 16:29   Link #8759
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@ Zero - Then why the hell is the place bigger than most schools? It looks like it could fit at least over a 1000.
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Old 2011-11-21, 16:35   Link #8760
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The Arena/ Training grounds took about 50-60% of the whole island, as you notice, there are three arena (the Third is about 300m long and 120m wide, the second is larger and the first is the largest, the one used to train by the first year is the third arena, the smallest). There's also I.S. R&D facility, dorm, staff residence etc.
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