Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Karon's an Idol singer in Shadow. Classic case of unequal pairing romance

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Karon's an Idol singer in Shadow. Classic case of unequal pairing romance

Lol, Rule 34 Shipping version: if they exist, there's a pairing for them. Not even being asexual or celibate prevent it.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - By the way, Dan was one of the only guys there. The narration for it says that there was only him and Ichika around since he was the only one to invite a guy to the festival. In doing so, he sparked the Utsuho/Dan ship

Side note - The IKaron in Shadow is more of a traditional romance. Irish is told to meet his contact during a st@rs concert. The contact tells him some info and then disappears. Irish is about to leave but he's one of the few random who gets chosen to go backstage and meet the idols. Once backstage, he, along with a few other males, meet the st@rs cast. Irish doesn't really care till a drone attacks the backstage area looking for something (Karon's IS, which she left somewhere else). Irish saves Karon (Ba-dump) and distracts the drone so the civilians can get away. Karon then get's her IS and shoots down the drone before Irish gets killed. Start of friendship from there.

[MeisterBabylon]

Approved the above scenario.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Meister - Plan to include a scene where Irish tells her he's dying in lrder to stop her from getting attached to him. Need to know her reaction. That's why I asked if she was used to death.

It would be like Touma's reaction to Index's "Will you ride with me to Hell?" She's not going to let Irish off without an easy explanation.

[Eratas123]

@ Meister - The skull suits killing him with the constant usage he does of it. The human body can't handle the spikes in pressure too much so he'll die before he reaches 18 if he doesn't stop using it or gets treatment. Unfortunately, Irish is a stubborn little bugger and refuses to stop using it so Karon's gonna be stuck on a loop.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - By the way, Dan was one of the only guys there. The narration for it says that there was only him and Ichika around since he was the only one to invite a guy to the festival. In doing so, he sparked the Utsuho/Dan ship

I stand corrected, but that's one striking fridge logic there....

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - The IKaron in Shadow is more of a traditional romance. Irish is told to meet his contact during a st@rs concert. The contact tells him some info and then disappears. Irish is about to leave but he's one of the few random who gets chosen to go backstage and meet the idols. Once backstage, he, along with a few other males, meet the st@rs cast. Irish doesn't really care till a drone attacks the backstage area looking for something (Karon's IS, which she left somewhere else). Irish saves Karon (Ba-dump) and distracts the drone so the civilians can get away. Karon then get's her IS and shoots down the drone before Irish gets killed. Start of friendship from there.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Approved the above scenario.
It would be like Touma's reaction to Index's "Will you ride with me to Hell?" She's not going to let Irish off without an easy explanation.

"You are Worth hell"?

[MeisterBabylon]

Then failing which she's off to Max and Ange to see if something can't be done about that.

The rest is how you intend it to unfold. Even something like that can be fixed in my campy world.

[Eratas123]

@ Meister and Zero - Intro to the concert.

Spoiler:

POV: Irish
Location: Stadium.

What exactly is the point of this?

I was sitting one the stadium along with thousands of others. There was supposed be some kind of "Idol" concert taking place here but I really couldn't care less, I needed to find that guy who was supposed to give me the information.

"Are you the one?"

I look up and see a guy who looked about 19 or 20 with a full head of silver hair wearing a suit and vest combo. His features looked Eurasian, but I'm not really sure.

"Hm?"

"Are you that guy, English?"

I sigh and resist the urge to yell at him, it was pointless anyway, I doubt he'd have heard me with all the yelling that crowd is doing.

"That's right, so what is it?"

He sat down beside me before answering, "There's a possible attack that's going to happen."

"What do you mean?"

"This place isn't safe, it might get attacked!"

"Here? There's thousands of people in this place! Casualties are going to be unavoidable."

This area was filled to the brim with people, no possible way to save everyone unless they evacuated immediately.

"They have only one target so they won't attack the crowd"

"One target, who's that?"

He pointed to the stage and at one of the girls specifically: A girl with Dark hair vut short wearing some kind of white outfit, most likely a costume.

"Gou Karon, representative candidate for Singapore".

Just great....The target just happens to be on the stage.

"How exactly do we stop the attack."

"We're not sure, we're improvising as we go along."

I palm my face anx resist the urge to yell. Is this really the best they can do?

"You there, the white haired kid!"

I look to the stage to see the host or manager or something pointing at me.

"You're one of the lucky few to go backstage and meet the st@rs, be grateful!"

I noticed some other people making their way backstage, it looks like they were also chosen too.

"Well, looks like you found a way in."

"Yeah.....thanks."

Please tell me what you think. Sorry if it's undetailed, I'm using my phone to type

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Meister and Zero - Intro to the concert.

Spoiler:

POV: Irish
Location: Stadium.

What exactly is the point of this?

I was sitting one the stadium along with thousands of others. There was supposed be some kind of "Idol" concert taking place here but I really couldn't care less, I needed to find that guy who was supposed to give me the information.

"Are you the one?"

I look up and see a guy who looked about 19 or 20 with a full head of silver hair wearing a suit and vest combo. His features looked Eurasian, but I'm not really sure.

"Hm?"

"Are you that guy, English?"

I sigh and resist the urge to yell at him, it was pointless anyway, I doubt he'd have heard me with all the yelling that crowd is doing.

"That's right, so what is it?"

He sat down beside me before answering, "There's a possible attack that's going to happen."

"What do you mean?"

"This place isn't safe, it might get attacked!"

"Here? There's thousands of people in this place! Casualties are going to be unavoidable."

This area was filled to the brim with people, no possible way to save everyone unless they evacuated immediately.

"They have only one target so they won't attack the crowd"

"One target, who's that?"

He pointed to the stage and at one of the girls specifically: A girl with Dark hair vut short wearing some kind of white outfit, most likely a costume.

"Gou Karon, representative candidate for Singapore".

Just great....The target just happens to be on the stage.

"How exactly do we stop the attack."

"We're not sure, we're improvising as we go along."

I palm my face anx resist the urge to yell. Is this really the best they can do?

"You there, the white haired kid!"

I look to the stage to see the host or manager or something pointing at me.

"You're one of the lucky few to go backstage and meet the st@rs, be grateful!"

I noticed some other people making their way backstage, it looks like they were also chosen too.

"Well, looks like you found a way in."

"Yeah.....thanks."

Please tell me what you think. Sorry if it's undetailed, I'm using my phone to type

This is a great setup, even if it's in form of a draft.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Irish is so Out of Place because the other boys there are the stadard idol fanboys. He's the only one there not itching for a chance to meet the idols. Karon takes notice of the fact that he's passive and doesn't attempt to ask questions which she finds a bit odd.

Side note - Dan and Ichika being the only males also bug me. Is the author seriously telling us none of the girls have Dad's or brothers?

@ Meister - Ange would probably be able to help them, too bad they'll basically have to strip Irish and hold him down to get him to agree.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Irish is so Out of Place because the other boys there are the stadard idol fanboys. He's the only one there not itching for a chance to meet the idols. Karon takes notice of the fact that he's passive and doesn't attempt to ask questions which she finds a bit odd.

Which is even more ironic and funnier if you think about it.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Dan and Ichika being the only males also bug me. Is the author seriously telling us none of the girls have Dad's or brothers?

Yeah that bugs me too, but probably the girl just don't want to take a risk (or something, I don't know).

But it's even more staggering that Dan only gets ONE girl that's curious him.... which basically impossible considering that the justification about Ichika's sheer amount of fangirl is that he's the only guy in I.S.A.

I's not like Dan will have 100+ fangirls in one swoop, it's just that one girl simply not good enough! At the very least, Mayuzumi (the resident newshound) will interview Dan about Ichika and/ or vice versa. And the students will get to know about Dan.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - The Idols really shouldn't have left their IS in their dressing rooma They could've shot down that drone if they had it with them.

Side note - They did notice Dan. They just thought Ichika looked more handsome and was more their type or something. Then again, it's probably because he can't pilot an IS since the main point of Ichika being there was because he was unique from other males.

Besides, he did get ONE admirer, our very own Utsuho-san!

[blitz1/2]

Hey Zero, how are you doing in your program? I have my last exam on Dec. 14. So I'll go full force on Sacred Twins and Red Rain afterwards. And frankly, it's about time I got back to these. xD

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - The Idols really shouldn't have left their IS in their dressing room They could've shot down that drone if they had it with them.

LOL

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - They did notice Dan. They just thought Ichika looked more handsome and was more their type or something. Then again, it's probably because he can't pilot an IS since the main point of Ichika being there was because he was unique from other males.

Feh, so my plan is foiled, huh.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Besides, he did get ONE admirer, our very own Utsuho-san!

Well, if we get Dan Took a Level of Badass (I'm not certain, maybe a BFG-using sniper or something... but no Armor Stratos certainly), we'll get another one, with so much foeyay. Enough to power entire academy.

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Hey Zero, how are you doing in your program? I have my last exam on Dec. 14. So I'll go full force on Sacred Twins and Red Rain afterwards. And frankly, it's about time I got back to these. xD

Aye, long time no see. My exam just finished last week. Feel free to share if you have a problem

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Dan's the Sunohara in my fic, but he's the one with the most NORMAL relationship among all the males. No broken psyche or stunted emotions, just a bit of an age gap problem.

Side note - Karon's flat, right? When Irish saves her his head lands on her chest so she hopefully she's not very endowed

Also, what role do you think Ran should play in Shadow? Originally, she was the "just friends" with Irish but I replaced her with Laura to mess with Kyuukai.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Dan's the Sunohara in my fic, but he's the one with the most NORMAL relationship among all the males. No broken psyche or stunted emotions, just a bit of an age gap problem.

LAWL ironically, Sunohara don't get any despite the shiptease with Tomoyo & Kyou (in the anime at least).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Karon's flat, right? When Irish saves her his head lands on her chest so she hopefully she's not very endowed

She's about Rin flat, but SMALLER due to her height (about the same height as Irish slouching).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Also, what role do you think Ran should play in Shadow? Originally, she was the "just friends" with Irish but I replaced her with Laura to mess with Kyuukai.

I dunno, I haven't think a role for him except Ichika's best buddy / badass Bystander.

Anyway, fic related.

[Eratas123]

@ Zero - Hahahahaha! That comic sounds like something that propoganda would include. The castration shop looks nasty though

I meant Ran, as in Dan's little sis, not her older bro. She'll be in IS academy come second year or earlier as a test student due to her high grades.

Side note - Rin level flat? Then there's no problem. She'd get mad when Irish says she has the "perfect body for combat" and that she must've trained hard to reduce her chest size by that much.

[MeisterBabylon]

Karon: H-How am I supposed to respond to that?!

[ZeroXSEED]

^ Lawl as expected

Guys, do you mind if I write ikaron draft myself? Seems like I'm very vacant now.

[Eratas123]

Irish: What's wrong? I'm merely complimenting you on the fact that the results of you're training were perfect. Your body is thin, your hair is short, and your chest is almost non-existant. In fact, some would mistake you for a boy if you wore the right clothes. On the other hand, my chest seems to be getting bigger if the tightness on the chest area when I wear a disguise is any indication. Can you give me advice to make my chest as small and flat as yours?

@ senpai - No prob, it's Meister's idea anyway. Just don't make Irish OOC.