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Old 2011-12-19, 07:04   Link #13581
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@ Yachi - Just read your draft It's better than your previous, but it still seems a bit script like. Anything you need help with in particular?
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:06   Link #13582
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@ Yachi - Just read your draft It's better than your previous, but it still seems a bit script like. Anything you need help with in particular?
YES! THAT'S IT! That's the problem I keep looking in my fic!

I guess I'm not gonna make that Chapter any longer
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:08   Link #13583
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what's all this talk about retirement from IS?

On a completely different tangent, would it be retarded to have an IS like power-suit as the cockpit for a mobile suit sized robot?
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:16   Link #13584
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It's the novel that's on a hiatus, weather or not the same is true for the anime remains to be seen.
Doesn't anyone read the date? 14/11/2011? 2ちゃん? And that MF was bought by Kadokawa so Kadokawa has the real power and is still selling figurines through Bandai? And that there would be news on ANN if it were true?
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:16   Link #13585
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Is a perverted male lead is alright? Some people doesn't seems to like Tomoki(Sora no Otoshimono)

I have a brief idea on how he(Male lead) is like....

Being perverted is cited as his reason for entering the "tiger" cave. Might give him a little Red Saber's (Fate Extra) Ego when it comes to Ero..... It is an art form for him after all

"Peeking at girls, without getting caught, beaten up, skinned alive, burned at the stake and beaten up is the Ultimate, the Zenith, the HOLY GRAIL which all men should strive for!"

Although act like an Idiot but is actually very intelligent, intelligent enough to knew that showing off how smart you are only invite trouble and the best way to avoid trouble is to play dumb.

Edit: Attempting to differentiate the character through their speeches.....

Yuu's speech is Hot-blooded! Sometimes in Cap (shouting), always end with an exclamation mark. Tend to be very excited.
Yuu: "Let's Go! Yahoo!"

Ayara's speech uses her own words when it come to Nouns (such as fan, tv, cats, dogs) and she don't bother to explain....(No translation because that is how weird she is to other characters but it should be obvious when she is pointing or interacting with something).
"What a cute Kavana!" Ayara rubbed the back of the kitten's ear.

Talia's speech: lots of dots...... like most of my post..... because....she....is...fantasizing.....
"Good evening..... How....may I help you....?"
"Thank you....."
"Hello...."

Female lead's Speech: Normal. Full stop to show calmness and firmness in her speech.....
"Great Job."
"It might just work."

Ruriluna(the girl who can predict the future) always talked as if she is in third person and turn motor-mouth when she is excited: "Haveyouseenthat! Rurilunahadneverseensomethinglikethisbefore!"

Shirayuki (Ruriluna's friend) Always refer others by their name and never "you".
"Ah! It's (Character's name)-san/stranger-san (if she do not know the person's name. -san added to show that she is polite.)
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:23   Link #13586
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@ Treme - Mix it with the Shota for some Lolz

@ Yachi - Just add some details. How does the environment look? How do they feel? Etc etc.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:26   Link #13587
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Deciding to eventually ditch canon has helped, too.
Planning to do the same.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:26   Link #13588
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Doesn't anyone read the date? 14/11/2011? 2ちゃん? And that MF was bought by Kadokawa so Kadokawa has the real power and is still selling figurines through Bandai? And that there would be news on ANN if it were true?
where did the news first appear anyway?

If it's sankaku...
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:39   Link #13589
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where did the news first appear anyway?

If it's sankaku...
Happy reading:

http://archive.foolz.us/a/thread/58611841

Then again, if Volume 8's not out in March or earlier, I'm just going to use this as fake spoilers:

Spoiler for Here we go again.:
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:41   Link #13590
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I'm not going to retire, just have to WAIT until it's completed that's all (because I already made my share).

That aside, Ping-sama should really write that... probably for April's fool?
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:42   Link #13591
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I'm not going to retire, just have to WAIT until it's completed that's all (because I already made my share).

That aside, Ping-sama should really write that... probably for April's fool?
I'll work with you on that. Who else's in?
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:46   Link #13592
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What can we do to help? It seems like you're all set.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:48   Link #13593
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Well, now I'm a bit happier.

I'm okay with this massive project, if you're alright with me.

Is it going to be more or less the length of an IS novel?

That's a lot of work.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:48   Link #13594
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I dropped Yukihira as I saw her hands goes limp...This should not happen, this is a nightmare...

"This is really unnecessary..."

She's a legend, she shouldn't be defeated easily like that.... especially by that little... that little bitch....

"...-nee..."

"Ichika?!"

"CHIFUYU-NEE!!!!!"
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I had to pass Ichika's food porn and harem antic, but leave the battle scene on me
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:49   Link #13595
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"The rich and powerful take what they want; we steal it back for you. We provide...volume 8."

Yeah, we're going to make our own canon.

An average IS volume has 250 pages in Japanese, which is about 160 pages in English.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:51   Link #13596
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And about 75.000-100.000 words if I'm not wrong.... unless I overestimate it?
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:53   Link #13597
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Illustrations? Nah, that's a bit too much.

Heart of the Machine has way more words if we go by that estimate.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:55   Link #13598
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I guess I can help with everything since I'm not good at a specific thing.
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:55   Link #13599
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Damn, I forget this is a Light Novel... less word, more pictures
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Old 2011-12-19, 07:58   Link #13600
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I'm not good at any specific thing either but it's interesting enough for me to have a go.

It's alright, Bakemonogatari doesn't have any illustrations, save for the cover.
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