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Old 2012-01-06, 04:08   Link #16621
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Spoiler for .....:


the continuation of fanfic still working on it
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Old 2012-01-06, 04:29   Link #16622
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@ Meistah - How does being close to someone equate to their daughter looking like them
Not really... But when I mentally combined Yuu and Karon, I got Tatenashi so...
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Old 2012-01-06, 04:34   Link #16623
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Sup guys, just quickly dropping in.

Hey, Meister, I remember reading that you were planning on using Kyuukai.

I'm fine with it, but if I may ask, what's his role?
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Old 2012-01-06, 04:40   Link #16624
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@ KaizerKnight
sorry for late response, this is somewhat better than first chapter. If anything, the lack of gratuitous Japanese helped that.

@ Rain
Mysterious protector of sort, think Graham Aker of Gundam 00 season 2 but as protagonist.
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:05   Link #16625
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@ Senpai - Come on~ Real men wear pink- *Shot*

Side note - Yes, I used Tvtropes standards. Why?

@ Meistah - Does Karon or anyone in her family have red eyes? Yukiko has red eyes and that's a very rare eye color, especially by today's standards.
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:30   Link #16626
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No problemo, just that strange to find he's sue by TvTropes Standard.

Try this, the msot accurate Mary Sue Litmus ever
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:33   Link #16627
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@ Senpai - He's not a sue, I just made some mistakes He avouds the most blatant sue traits

Side note - Made another mistake: Irish's scar on the neck is thin and smooth, but that apparently makes no sense. He didn't get proper treatment and even fought while the wound was open
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:46   Link #16628
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@ Senpai - Took the test It says he's a "healthy character with a bright future". Guess that's good.

Side note - What exactly is a concussion, how does one get it, and what are it's effects?
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:46   Link #16629
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*both are training kendo swings*

Houki's child: Mom

Houki: Yes?

Houki's child: Can I ask you for something extra special for my birthday?

Houki: Well that depends, mommy can't afford anything too expensive.

Houki's child: Well it might be expensive but you said you'd get it for me sooner or later. I just want it to be sooner,

Houki: Oh? What is it?

Houki's child: I want my own sword.

Houki: *swings a bit too hard and loses grip on the bokken resulting in a broken wall* Wait, what?

Houki's child: I want my own sword. You said that the family blade would be passed down to me soon.

Houki: Umm... can't you wait until you come of age? *goes to pick up her bokken*

Houki's child: I can't!

Houki: Why not? *grabs the bokken and pulls it out*

Houki's child: So I can brag about it of course

Houki: A sword is a very serious responsibility, it's not something to treat so trivially.

Houki's child: But all the boys in class are bragging about how big their swords are!

Houki's bokken snaps under her grip.

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wonder if anyone got the joke
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:48   Link #16630
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Concussion is a hit on the head, hard enough do disrupt the working on the brains. Light concussion usually don't result in anything fatal, though the victim often unconscious for 5 minute or so.

@Demi

That's somehow reminds me of Star Driver's HoYay-related meme. "My sword are slightly longer than yours", yeah.
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:50   Link #16631
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@ Senpai - How does one get it?

@ Demi - I get the joke Now I just need for Chifuyu
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:55   Link #16632
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A Hard hit in the frontal area of the skull, lack of noticeable veins and very strong bones means no bumps or visible effect.
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:55   Link #16633
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Chifuyu offsprings will probably result in the most deadpan conversation ever!
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:57   Link #16634
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@ Demi - Chifuyu seems to be a bit vulnerable in regards to sex related stuff

@ Senpai - How does one cure it?
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Old 2012-01-06, 05:58   Link #16635
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how old is Chifuyu's daughter?
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Old 2012-01-06, 06:01   Link #16636
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12-14 Depends on how you want it.
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Old 2012-01-06, 06:02   Link #16637
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No specific injury = no need to cure anything. Well, some ointment on the temple and aromatherapy may help.
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Old 2012-01-06, 06:02   Link #16638
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... mischievous Chifuyu...???
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Old 2012-01-06, 06:07   Link #16639
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@ Demi - She did bang her bro

@ Senpai - Most likely Irish'll get one during the plane fiasco. Speaking of which, should Irish try to help the PT operative by grabbing onto her before she falls?
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Old 2012-01-06, 06:11   Link #16640
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Maybe, he thinks he can get a hostage or interrogation material, think pet the dog moment.
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