2012-01-06, 08:49 | Link #16681 |
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@ Senpai - That would mean he learned all of his skills so far in just 4 years. Isn't that a bit too quick? Also, would having him adopt a crouched or primal stance in combat be reasonable?
Side note - I'm surprised the Teacher didn't do anything to calm him down.
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2012-01-06, 08:54 | Link #16682 |
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Four years ain't that short, frankly, if you compare the timeline, Charles gain all those skill of her in 2 years, and Cecilia in 3 years or so. Laura was the only one that is trained as a soldier for a decade, even then she just learn how to use I.S. properly at age 13 (when she meet Chifuyu)
Child genius ain't that rare in I.S. verse Side note - What's more interesting that duel between I.S. cadet rep? At least the Teacher stop them before they pour the hell during the class-time, and inform them that they can use the Arena later.
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2012-01-06, 09:02 | Link #16683 |
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.....I hate this timeline The only problem there is one, and one thing only: Most of those characters had people teaching them or even had the luxury of personal instructors. Irish is self taught and this shows whenever he fights since he uses pragmatic combat and very undisciplined in all of his skills. Hence why he begs Maya to teach him Judo later.
Side note - Ren's a candidate?
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2012-01-06, 09:05 | Link #16684 | |
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Yes, he is. Lala too. As well as Haruna.
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2012-01-06, 09:16 | Link #16686 | ||
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Sen is what you get when you combine Yuu-kun's cool and colors with Karon's crazy fighting skills! But yeah, needed the photoshop first.
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2012-01-06, 09:25 | Link #16688 | |
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No, they're separated when they're 10 with Run and her mom went to Japan, while Ren and his dad stay in Australia, like Rito and Haruna, they're quite old being 16 years at the start of story, despite being a first year. Run pursue a career as Idol, while Ren wanted to continue his father's legacy as the owner of Jade Metal Lyman, most prominent Heavy Industry in Australia. Also, to avoid misspelling with the verb, she's changed to 'Lun', Ren and Lun... R and L
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2012-01-06, 09:30 | Link #16689 |
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@ Senpai - Tabane ignores her mistakes, no matter how severe. This in turn causes her to ignore Irish since he's the only one, bar some others, who call her out on being a person who toy's with people lives. Of course, Irish being unwilling to let go of his past and prejudices is his own flaw and it cost him in the Mondo Grosso defense.
Side note - Are male reps more popular than female ones? It's been mentioned that male idols and stars actually became more popular due to the sexism and "valuable guys" being more wanted.
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2012-01-06, 09:38 | Link #16690 | ||
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Well, Ren was the fourth guy (Ichika, Charles, Rito), and second Transexual after Charles. However, Ren's reason is more complex and not forced: He was really born a female but genetically speaking he's male.. This is getting more and more complicated after core 315, owned by Degtaryev Russia, and core 205, owned by ST Kinesthetic Singapore, was declared 'gay', as in, only accept male pilots. Chaotic situation ensues
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2012-01-06, 09:42 | Link #16692 |
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@ Senpai - What's with the blank response to the first question?
Side note - Ichika tends to get offers and at one point even an interview. Will the star part of being an idol be explored? @ Demi - Got something, eh? Just type it and we'll see.
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2012-01-06, 09:47 | Link #16693 |
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She's 15 in my story. She shadows Riz, who is her mentor. Her size is due to good genes I suppose; Erin is a bit taller and Mafuyu is shorter. Natalie is tallest, and has a huge rack from her mom.
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2012-01-06, 09:55 | Link #16695 | ||
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Ren's case is started after it's revealed that he's Lun's twin brother, boosting their popularity by huge margin. Spoiler for Lol:
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2012-01-06, 10:01 | Link #16697 |
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Chifuyu: *sits down to dinner and pops open a beer*
Chifuyu's daughter: Mom, you know you promised dad that you'd stop drinking without an occasion. Chifuyu: *sly smile and wink* Don't worry, he's not here now. Besides, there is an occasion. Chifuyu's daughter: really? Chifuyu: Yes, my daughter is now a teenager! Cheers! *she raises the can and brings it to her lips to chug down.* Chifuyu's daughter: That's not usually something parents celebrate about. Chifuyu: Why not? Chifuyu's daughter: Because teenagers are hard to control and keep out of trouble. It's the age they start dating and get into lots of really bad situations. Chifuyu: Well, you're a big girl and I doubt you'd really disobey the house rules... *cold stare* would you? Chifuyu's daughter: *gulp* no ma'am Chifuyu: Good girl *cheerfully slugs down the rest of the can* Chifuyu's daughter: But you really ought to stop drinking. Chifuyu: But I want t~o *whines like a child* Chifuyu's daughter: You used to be a lot more strict than this. Chifuyu: *glint in her eyes* are you implying that I'm loose? Chifuyu's daughter: No *looks nervous* just that you drink too much compared to before. Chifuyu: It almost sounds like you're going to do something about it. *she pops open a second can* Think you can? Chifuyu's daughter: *stares at her mother... then grabs the can and chugs it down straight* I challenge you to a drinking contest! Loser has to do what the winner says! Chifuyu: Ohohoho! My daughter's really grown up if she's so defiant *she has a look in her eyes that promises punishment* but I accept your challenge! the two start drinking. Chifuyu: You'll never beat me *throws down her 8th beer in the running* Chifuyu's daughter: I will! *forces down the 6th can of bitter liquid* This is my only chance to get you to listen to me. Chifuyu: Oh? How do you know that I won't just ignore the results? Chifuyu's daughter: Because you always do what dad says when he beats you at this. Chifuyu: *spits out her 9th can of beer and starts foaming at the mouth. Wondering if her daughter ever saw the prize daddy got whenever he beat mommy at this game* ---------------------------- I thought a few years of married life would make Chifuyu... a bit more lax so to speak. |
2012-01-06, 10:06 | Link #16698 |
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@ Meistah - Irish must feel sore about his own kid being about a head taller than him
@ Demi - You forgot to add the part where Ichika comes home and both of them suddenly have their clothes off Still, Chifuyu celebrating her kid being a teenager because she knows no one would be crazy enough to disobey her is effing hilarious. @ Senpai - Can you think of a fatal flaw for Ichika? Irish's is anger and Kyuukai's is pride. Ichika's was supposed to be his chronic hero syndrome, but that flaw seems a bit too positive. Side note - How do they hide Rito's status? Doesn't he go to IS afademy?
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