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Old 2012-01-08, 10:56   Link #17181
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Houki: What are you doing Ichika!? That was a rare chance!

Ichika: There's a boat down there. It'll get caught in the crossfire!

Houki: *checks data* It's just an illegal fishing boat, leave it be.

Ichika: Those are people down there.

Houki: They knew what they were getting into when they ignored the warning.

Ichika: HOUKI!

Houki: !?

Ichika: Why did you ask Tabane-san to build Akatsubaki? For what reason did you want that overwhelming power? Tell me Houki, is the strength you want really just for this?(last line is in a disappointed tone)

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Bonus points when this line is added: "Power without meaning is just violence!"
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:00   Link #17182
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I humbly embrace the dramatic conversation, HAIL DEMI!

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Old 2012-01-08, 11:07   Link #17183
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@ Senpai - Wait, a guy likes Rito!?

Side note - The main cast drinks awesome juice in your story

Side note 2 - They try to get out of it by staging a public break up scene. Any suggestions on how that'll fail?

Side note 3 - Wouldn't that be painful or noticeable?

Scene - I meant that it shows a genuine unheroic side to the protags. Seriously, when was the last time you've ever heard a tsundere say something like that?
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:10   Link #17184
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@era-era: Rin Tohsaka... forgot what she said but it was somewhere along those lines
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:12   Link #17185
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@ Senpai - Wait, a guy likes Rito!?
Saruyama.

Just joking, I mean some (many?) heroine tend to forget a guy that has genuine feelings to her, and prefer to chase the resident popular guy/ handsome bastard instead.

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Side note - The main cast drinks awesome juice in your story
Except Tatenashi who is nerfed... I just hope the change is for good since she's still the best fighter of all Heroine.

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Side note 2 - They try to get out of it by staging a public break up scene. Any suggestions on how that'll fail?
Third party claim because they want to go out in secret.... backstreet indeed.

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Side note 3 - Wouldn't that be painful or noticeable?
Usually unnoticeable especially if it's smaller than average, unless it went salute, and then the comes the pain...

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Scene - I meant that it shows a genuine unheroic side to the protags. Seriously, when was the last time you've ever heard a tsundere say something like that?
Yes, but Demi's version is more engaging. I changed just the conversation.
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:17   Link #17186
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@ Flame - He only has one year till his age abandons him

@ Treme - That's already in Daydreams
Really?!

*Age go read the latest chapter*

Edit: That chapter is a lie! T_T
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:21   Link #17187
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Are we really going to do the older harem thing? Either way I'm probably going to write random scenarios with that setting in mind
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:21   Link #17188
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@ Treme - It's not yet done! I still have to finish Tatenashi's first

@ Demi - That was due to her guilt for Sakura Even then she admits it was her being stupid and irrational.

@ Senpai - Who's the handsome bastard? Ren's a jerk at times, vut he definiteky doesn't qualify for that.

Side note - Give Tatenashi awesome juice and she would break the IS world

Side note - I meant more on failing during the event itself

Side note 3 - You sound like you have experience Anyway, can he wear long shorts under his skirt?

Scene - I meant don't change their actions. Changing the convo is okay
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:21   Link #17189
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@ Senpai - Who's the handsome bastard? Ren's a jerk at times, vut he definiteky doesn't qualify for that.
I mean Shoujo in general, kimi ni Todoke breaks the mold, bad boys didn't get proper girl, the resident harem king is a genki nice guy, only after become nice the manipulate boy get a real girlfriend material.

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Side note - Give Tatenashi awesome juice and she would break the IS world
Speaking the truth

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Side note - I meant more on failing during the event itself
Well, if it's epic fail.... I'll think about a scenario.

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Side note 3 - You sound like you have experience Anyway, can he wear long shorts under his skirt?
It's from a hentai manga, and yes, the crosdressing guy wears skirt most of the time.

EDIT: I said this because it is plausible and realistically depicted as impractical. Restraining movement and uncomfortable.

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Scene - I meant don't change their actions. Changing the convo is okay
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:25   Link #17190
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@age: it was already in concept at around page 600+ I think
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:28   Link #17191
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I said it's not yet done! Yeesh, one little typo and you two go check immediately I still have to beta-read White Night then comes furture imperfect and Tatenashi's chapter before I do that one!

@ Demi - I get Tabane for the older harem fic She's the least romantic
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:43   Link #17192
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@ Sempai - None of the protags in TLRS fit this mold since they're nice. On the oher hand, trying to be a bad boy to attract girls in a women dominated society sounds extremely stupid.

Side note - I take it back, give Chifuyu Awesome juice and PT will go on it's knees and beg

Side note 2 - Please and thank you.

Side note 3 - What manga is that? Anyway, I thought of something again: Don't people have a hard time sleeping in an unfamiliar place? Irish is used to sleeping in small rooms either on the floor or up against a wall. Ditto for the prison cell since this is hownhe slept there. Wouldn't syddenly transferring to a bed like the one's in ISA cause some sleeping problems due to the fact that he's not used to it?
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:52   Link #17193
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Damn.... still lack the inspiration for IS fanfic.....

Probably because I got sided-tracked by Phantom.....

Edit orz. Anyway, any good songs that would give you inspiration for writing IS?
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:55   Link #17194
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I'm nervous whether I should make chapter 3 of FI just genuine ship tease or more kids being introduced.
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:56   Link #17195
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look on the bright side, you guys are still hopeful. I just gave up.
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Old 2012-01-08, 11:59   Link #17196
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@ Demi - What do you mean give up?
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Old 2012-01-08, 12:01   Link #17197
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@ Sempai - None of the protags in TLRS fit this mold since they're nice. On the oher hand, trying to be a bad boy to attract girls in a women dominated society sounds extremely stupid.
Yes, that too.

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Side note - I take it back, give Chifuyu Awesome juice and PT will go on it's knees and beg
And I.S. will end in less than 6 volume... no, 4 volume. Because the brocon is so awesome it will cause a wincest ending by default.

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Still need time.... maybe Demi can help...

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Side note 3 - What manga is that?
Forgot the tittle, but apparently amongst the guy's family crossdressing is common stuff. He confessed to her friend since child, said friend initially hesitated and sad, but then she accept it...and then... well, BOW BOW CHIKA CHIKA WOW WOW.

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Anyway, I thought of something again: Don't people have a hard time sleeping in an unfamiliar place? Irish is used to sleeping in small rooms either on the floor or up against a wall. Ditto for the prison cell since this is hownhe slept there. Wouldn't syddenly transferring to a bed like the one's in ISA cause some sleeping problems due to the fact that he's not used to it?
Yes, it did. There's also sleeping mate issues.

My bed ain't that small, but I had to share the room when I was little. I got kicked and get my own room later, actually larger than before but for some reason i felt uncomfortable.

The same goes for Irish, since he has to share a room with Tate, usually sleeping by himself.

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Credit to demi for "Corruption garden" by Luka, now I can't look AWAY from gospel fight even though I was supposed to finish V2 first...
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Old 2012-01-08, 12:01   Link #17198
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expanding on AE but probably never going to publish another chapter of it.
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Old 2012-01-08, 12:10   Link #17199
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@ Senpai - Imagine a bad boy trying to get girls in ISA world He's ginna get his ass beat

Side note - The harem would be intimidated to do anything. There goes 90% of the content

Side note 2 - Tell me that manga name! I'll just skip the sex scenes like I usually do.

Side note 3 - They're sleeping in seoarate beds Tatenashi has her limits when it comes to stuff liek that Would this cause him to saty awake and be unable to relax? By the way, he has an aversion ti bath's since he didn't do it everyday due to being on the run. Cue dragging tothe bathroom

@ Demi - How about another fic? You do oretty good plots.
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Old 2012-01-08, 12:13   Link #17200
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It's hard to find motivation to write for a population of flamers though I will consider it.
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