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Old 2012-01-07, 03:02   Link #35461
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According to canon I believe it is said that it's rare for mages to be born on earth but when they are they tend to be the most powerful mages of all. Remember when Nanoha was awakened she was measured as AAA rank.

In few decades in the future it is suppose to be the After Magic era you the world becomes aware of magic.
A nightmare then. Especially for the TSAB , since such a state of affairs on Earth could easily produce new Huckbien grade threats to the TSAB...
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Old 2012-01-07, 09:20   Link #35462
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A nightmare then. Especially for the TSAB , since such a state of affairs on Earth could easily produce new Huckbien grade threats to the TSAB...
Well not really remember the TSAB usually don't involved with none administrated worlds unless are traveling across dimensional space which earth has yet to do. With that being said no dimensional no problem for the TSAB however the discovery of this new found destructive power earth could result in a new kind of global warfare between nations.
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Old 2012-01-07, 11:20   Link #35463
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This is the first fanfic I'm positing on the Nanoha animesuki Fanfic forum. It was proposed on the Crossovers thread.

This is a Nanoha Zero No Tsukaima crossover , based on the very popular crossover asking what happens if Louise summons another , more impressive Familiar instead of the Wish Fulfillment Audience Avatar that's Saito.

In this case , Louise summons a Real Familiar from the Nanoha-verse. None other than Arf , Fate's Testarossa's Familiar.

The second premise of this fic asks: what if Halkagenia lies on the same Dimensional Sea as Mid-Childa?

The third explores what might happen if Arf was suddenly kidnapped into a distant , unknown dimension , back on Mid-Childa.

This fic is set around 25 years after Strikers S , so there's alot of speculation that I've made over the Fates of the Nanoha-cast in 25 years. Especially of the Striker S crew.

Spoiler for The Third Life - Chapter 1: Life Again:


I admit. It's not the best written fic in here , far from it. I greatly appreciate any comments , and tips for improvement.

Thanks to all.
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Old 2012-01-07, 14:23   Link #35464
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This is the first fanfic I'm positing on the Nanoha animesuki Fanfic forum. It was proposed on the Crossovers thread.

This is a Nanoha Zero No Tsukaima crossover , based on the very popular crossover asking what happens if Louise summons another , more impressive Familiar instead of the Wish Fulfillment Audience Avatar that's Saito.

In this case , Louise summons a Real Familiar from the Nanoha-verse. None other than Arf , Fate's Testarossa's Familiar.

The second premise of this fic asks: what if Halkagenia lies on the same Dimensional Sea as Mid-Childa?

The third explores what might happen if Arf was suddenly kidnapped into a distant , unknown dimension , back on Mid-Childa.

This fic is set around 25 years after Strikers S , so there's alot of speculation that I've made over the Fates of the Nanoha-cast in 25 years. Especially of the Striker S crew.

Spoiler for The Third Life - Chapter 1: Life Again:


I admit. It's not the best written fic in here , far from it. I greatly appreciate any comments , and tips for improvement.

Thanks to all.
Quite an interesting writing...

One thing I'd suggest is that you take care where you put your commas. I notice a lot of times your commas are , like , that. Instead, they should look more, like, this, ya, see, what, I, mean?

Also, at times it felt like you were telling rather than showing.

That being said...

Can we have some more, please?
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Old 2012-01-07, 23:24   Link #35465
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Old 2012-01-07, 23:52   Link #35466
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Another great snippet, Nanya.
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Poor Wendi.
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Old 2012-01-08, 00:51   Link #35467
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StrikerS 41

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Odin: Levi's gonna be screwed over when the whole thing was over.

Me: Dunno about that... Nanya's still cooking some juicy parts of the story.

Val: Looks like we got one of the early defectors....

Me: -_-"
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Old 2012-01-09, 07:49   Link #35468
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Old 2012-01-09, 08:04   Link #35469
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Mariemeia: Blame the authors and artist who made them beautiful, sexy, alluring and HOT, Fate-chan.

Elane: Hehehehe... She was so SHOCKED by Fate at the end.

Me: As I would like to agree with this assassin *Points at Mariemeia.* but not in this one. Anyways, it looks like that Kyrie and Amitie are humans, for now.

Odin: I wouldn't be surprised if they're actually half-breed.

Val: Reference to the WMG of Fate being the daughter of Sanger Zanvolt/Wodan Ymir.
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Old 2012-01-09, 09:13   Link #35470
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Fate and Yuuno sharing this sentiment amuses me. X3
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Old 2012-01-09, 19:35   Link #35471
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From all of the chapters of this battle so far I like this one the most.

I didn't like it Arashi being able to Chaos-teleport, though. I found it plausible and well foreshadowed his use of chaos magic but I think the teleport was too much. =/

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This is the first fanfic I'm positing on the Nanoha animesuki Fanfic forum. It was proposed on the Crossovers thread.

This is a Nanoha Zero No Tsukaima crossover , based on the very popular crossover asking what happens if Louise summons another , more impressive Familiar instead of the Wish Fulfillment Audience Avatar that's Saito.

In this case , Louise summons a Real Familiar from the Nanoha-verse. None other than Arf , Fate's Testarossa's Familiar.

The second premise of this fic asks: what if Halkagenia lies on the same Dimensional Sea as Mid-Childa?

The third explores what might happen if Arf was suddenly kidnapped into a distant , unknown dimension , back on Mid-Childa.

This fic is set around 25 years after Strikers S , so there's alot of speculation that I've made over the Fates of the Nanoha-cast in 25 years. Especially of the Striker S crew.

Spoiler for The Third Life - Chapter 1: Life Again:


I admit. It's not the best written fic in here , far from it. I greatly appreciate any comments , and tips for improvement.

Thanks to all.
Let's see...

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Pups full grown.
Pups fully grown

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Harlaown

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That night is the day that this second life ends , and the third begins. It ends and begins with a certain desperate Green Oval portal leading to another , distant world , abruptly opening up in this room. It will trigger a sequence of significant events on both sides of the portal . It begins now.
Honestly I didn't like this paragraph. If I had to describe it it's like it's too rushed for that scene's closing (note the whole scene has been slow paced)

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“ No , Louise. This is your last attempt , and the Springtime Familiar Summoning means that you have to bind whatever you summon. Besides , he glanced”
This was the last attempt, past tense. Also, the closing quotation mark should be before "he glanced", not after.

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The surge kept continuing , as the runes began writing themselves on the back of the hands of both her familiar
I don't get what you want to tell here: both hands of Arf or both Louse and Arf's hands?

Lots of small mistakes, but I'm looking forward to see your take on a more mature Arf.
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Old 2012-01-10, 14:41   Link #35472
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Old 2012-01-10, 15:56   Link #35473
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Poor, Kyrie got left behind.
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Old 2012-01-10, 17:20   Link #35474
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Me: SHE'S NOW TRULY A GUNDAM!!!!!!!!!

Odin: Those who laid eyes on a Gundam usually don't lived to tell about it.

Val: Jeez... You activated Mega's Gundam fanatic for a bit.

Me: HELL YEAH!!!! Too bad Kuma gone Speedy Gonzales on us....

Reia: And left the air-head Kyrie behind....
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Old 2012-01-10, 19:31   Link #35475
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A rehash.

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Old 2012-01-10, 19:33   Link #35476
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A rehash.

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It appears someone tampered with the PSP timeline again...
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Old 2012-01-10, 19:42   Link #35477
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A rehash.

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Goddamn it, Vivio!! Didn't your mamas ever show you Back To The Future?! Messing with the past is BAD!!!
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Old 2012-01-10, 19:53   Link #35478
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Goddamn it, Vivio!! Didn't your mamas ever show you Back To The Future?! Messing with the past is BAD!!!
And now, Vivio and Yuuno will need to somehow make Nanoha and Fate to go togheter to "The Enchantment Under the Sea" dance xD!
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Old 2012-01-10, 19:58   Link #35479
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I thought it would be more fun if Vivio is sent back in time where Shiro have not meet Momoko and is still wondering around. She would have an even greater trouble to ensure that she would end up where she is as there is a need to matchmake her grandpa and grandma.
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