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Old 2012-01-16, 06:25   Link #18381
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@ Hawke - Sorry, I meant normal's only By your own admission, <Ren> wasn't a normal. i remember asking you multiple times about these.

@ Demi - Can you just write a summary for it?
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Old 2012-01-16, 06:28   Link #18382
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Finally...! Another chapter sent on its way~!
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Old 2012-01-16, 06:33   Link #18383
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@ Jak - When will you update your fic?
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Old 2012-01-16, 06:38   Link #18384
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[Sighs]...

Too much shit going on right now...

[Yawns]...
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Old 2012-01-16, 06:41   Link #18385
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@ Senpai - I posted a part of Daydreams on page 917. Can you twll me what you think about it?

@ Jak - Any idea how to start the chapter?
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Old 2012-01-16, 06:51   Link #18386
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Well, I did say I won't read daydreams, but I'll make an exception this time.

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Side note - Here's what I got so far.

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Any tips for improvement?
So in Tatenashi's daydream Ichika is submissive? I though you said Tatenashi will project Ichika as cool and manly?
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Old 2012-01-16, 06:58   Link #18387
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@ Senpai - I guess I don't know how Ichika would act inthat situation, so I'm stuck. Any advice? I tried reading the actual dojo scene from V5, but all I saw was Ichika getting his ass kicked.
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:00   Link #18388
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Are the girls from before in this one, too?

You know, those girls that tend to be "manipulative". One has the hots for Ichika and the other tends to "pray" on guys? Those girls.
If I need extra characters....yeah....why not?

Plus I have one Yandere in planning.....
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:03   Link #18389
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Doesn't meant Ichika should win, I mean, even if he lose, he lose gracefully (think a knight that lose a honorable duel), not being a pathetic loser that getting beaten the crap out, and worse if he's submissive while at it.

Anyway, just realized that Rin's Shenlong ain't that tall either, it lacked the overtly hueg foot extension.
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:08   Link #18390
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If I need extra characters....yeah....why not?

Plus I have one Yandere in planning.....
Ugh! I remembered that you posted a scene with Irish in it a while back.

If my guys saw what nearly happened to Irish in that scene, it would've been very disturbing. But for Brian (Ratchet), that would be an understatement.

It'll trigger certain memories he had when he was young, and those aren't good ones.
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:08   Link #18391
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I originally planned for the fight to continue woth Ichika using the back of his head to smash against hers and break the grip, but I was afraid of it being a major OOC moment. Think it'll be okay if I use that?

Side note - Aren't all IS the same size?
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:19   Link #18392
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@ ERas

Hmm, hard choice, we never knew what kind of guy Tate liked so it's hard to predict. We can justify the OOC-ness being Taste's mere fantasy, but I think you can find another way.

Side note - I dunno, Canon didn't explain that much. But I compare the official artwork then got this number estimation

Byaku Shiki + 40 cm
Blue Tears + 45 cm
Shen Long + 30 cm
Raphael + 45 cm
Schwarzer R + 50 cm
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:23   Link #18393
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Admittedly, that Scene is actually quite good.

I think I will add the modified version to the fic.....

Just to prove that you don't need blood to go into Nightmare region
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:33   Link #18394
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Admittedly, that Scene is actually quite good.

I think I will add the modified version to the fic.....

Just to prove that you don't need blood to go into Nightmare region
That scene where Umi was about to show Irish the relationship between a man and a woman and how she was about to do it... If Brian were to see that, he would have somewhat of a breakdown.

Here, read this: Brian's Background

You'll get a better understanding of why.
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:40   Link #18395
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@ Senpai - Actually, the sparring was supposed to be a real life segment. This is why I got nervous when I wrote the headbutt scene since it seems OOC for Canon!Ichika. (I got part of that scene from a Shadow Draft for when Irish and Tatenashi sparred and it's more combat based due to the combat pragmatism Irish has).

Side note - Maybe it's because Shenlong is a multi level unit. She uses both shock waves (Which have a lot of recoil) and double sided saber which requires acrobatics. It'd make sense for her to have the smallest unit.

Side note 2 - I'm writing Shadow after finishing this Daydream arc. Can I ask for your help in reading out parts of it? Don't worry, it's not rom-com.

@ Jak - Be careful about using rape in backstories. Many people use it to try and get sympathy points for characters and it's become a bit stale to read. Though admittedly, male rape is rare and mostly unseen.
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:46   Link #18396
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Correction, Male Rape is RARELY played sympathetic and seriously.

And I always been ready for Shadow, even if it's a rom-com segment
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:50   Link #18397
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Change Male lead to a new one because Imber is actually quite static for a character and I am not good enough to give Static character development.

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So changing Male lead again.... Good news is the prologue is still in work. The Male lead has no impact on the prologue.

The new Male lead has three theme:
Fire (Inbuilt, his nature)
Growth (Developing, to tame that nature)
Balance (Something which he need to strive to obtain)

When fire is use correctly, it can be very useful but incorrect use of fire can be destructive.
Hence his name:
Ignis.

New characteristic given to Male Lead:
> Impulsive and emotional
> Short temper and flare up easily (get into argument with others easily)
> Temper go down quickly too (only regret it later)
> Hot-headed and hot-blood (obviously)

His machine still specialize in things which other Male lead don't specialize: Scanning and healing.

It give me room to develop him.

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Note: Obviously run into trouble trying to develop Imber.....

Edit: Working on new way to introduce male characters (The kiss that lead to incident isn't going to work (due to Anime state that it is a drone and not everybody read the novel...))
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:50   Link #18398
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@ Senpai - Male rape is subverted in Shadow. Ichika looks and acts very uncomfortable when M makes remarks about raping him while he's tied up (she's bullshitting to scare him.) and Irish's segment features very violent reactions to actions of the same reasoning.

Side note - Alright, where do I start first: Irish's or Ichika's? This'll determine the sequence of events.

@ Treme - Just try sticking with one lead already. I'm not sure if I can develop Irish into a good enough character, but that doesn't mean I'm changing whenever I see something I don't like.
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Old 2012-01-16, 07:55   Link #18399
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Different Sequence? Hard choice if that's the case....

Let's try Ichika.
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Old 2012-01-16, 08:02   Link #18400
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@ Senpai - Michael's segment will always be last and you already know it ends. If Ichika goes first, then the rescue attempt will be shown first and his usage of partial deployment. If Irish's, then they'll discuss why Cecilia was taken and Irish will notice the bomb detonator in Sam's pocket.

Side note - By the end of the arc, all of the terrorists - bar Irish, Joshua, and Viktor - should be dead. Ichika only knocks out the mooks in his segment so that'll be a bit of a problem. Do you think it's possible for the building they're in to get rigged with explosives so when Cecilia, Irish, and Ichika leave the building, it collapses and kills anyone else inside?
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