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Old 2012-01-16, 09:28   Link #18421
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Alright, thanks

Side note - So should I have Ichika headbutt Tatenashi in the chapter or not? Sorry for asking, but I'm really stuck here.
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Old 2012-01-16, 09:43   Link #18422
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Maybe have Tatenashi do/say something that irked him. In his defense, she did that precisely to taunt him to work harder.

Going to sleep.
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Old 2012-01-16, 09:48   Link #18423
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Alright, thanks! Going o sleep, see ya!
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Old 2012-01-16, 10:18   Link #18424
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@ Meistah - I didn't forget about him. Don'r you remember that he gets an armored cycle and saves the girls later? That counts as power armor considering it covers his body and gives him abilities that you can't normally gain.
My bad... I better adjust this. Crack infections just kills characters don't they?

Also, I'm finally on a tsundere's route... IRL.
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Old 2012-01-16, 11:22   Link #18425
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crap, the prologue got too long.... (attempting normal story because fairytale spoiled certain secret...) Because I tried to explain IS again.....

Edit: Long because of unnecessary information
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Old 2012-01-16, 18:37   Link #18426
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@ Treme - No need for an info dump since most readers know what an IS is already.

@ Senpai - Would a punch from Ichika's byaku-shiki arm cause any lasting or permanent injuries like broken bones or internal bleeding?
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Old 2012-01-16, 18:47   Link #18427
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If he's able to control it's output, I doubt it.

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Old 2012-01-16, 18:50   Link #18428
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@ Meistah - Some guys get all the luck

@ Senpai - Bullets wouldn't pierce the metal of the arm, right? It's the only defense he has against bullets.
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Old 2012-01-16, 18:56   Link #18429
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Yeah, they won't. The armor can withstand heavy sniper rifle and shrug it like a peashooter.

Didn't Ichika use his I.S. outfit?
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Old 2012-01-16, 18:58   Link #18430
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It's a bit cramped in there and he was trying to sneak. He got caught and nearly got shot, so he panicked and summoned the arm to block the bullet.
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Old 2012-01-16, 19:06   Link #18431
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Don't forget to summon the headgear to use hypersensor later, also, vest armor.
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Old 2012-01-16, 19:08   Link #18432
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He summons it later after he takes out the first hostiles in the room. Summoning the wings in a cramped space while people are clustered together is a bad idea. Since Irish's segment takes place at the same time, would he hear what's happening on thw floor below him?
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Old 2012-01-16, 21:15   Link #18433
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@ Senpai - Are abandoned buildings usually demolished immediately? I'm writing the capter roght now (Need a break from Rom-com).

EDIT: New fanfic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7748734/...ky_of_Tomorrow
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Old 2012-01-17, 02:30   Link #18434
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Fanfics spotted!!

Infinite Stratos The Dark Sky
Infinite Stratos The Sky of Tomorrow

Be adviced; they're rated "M" for Mature.
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Old 2012-01-17, 02:52   Link #18435
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short break before submitting myself to mental abuse again @w@

The MayaXIchika idea snowballed, now it's become milestone moments in their student-teacher romance all amounting to the original plot bunny >.<
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Old 2012-01-17, 03:17   Link #18436
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@ Demi - Tell me about it
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Old 2012-01-17, 03:23   Link #18437
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The original plot bunny:

at first it was just supposed to be a what-if high school reunion. Maya and Ichika were once in a relationship despite Maya being Ichika's homeroom teacher. They broke up because Ichika knew during his graduation, his life would become hectic and he wouldn't have time for Maya, so he broke up with her thinking she'd be unhappy from neglect if she stayed with him. Ofcourse Maya didn't take it well. Now the reunion would be the first time they meet face to face after 8 years.

The snow-balled stuff would be how they got together in the first place. Their first kiss(!?) random stuff
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Old 2012-01-17, 03:24   Link #18438
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First kiss! Tell meeeeee!
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Old 2012-01-17, 03:25   Link #18439
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It's related to how they met and even though it's titled like that. They never actually kissed.
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Old 2012-01-17, 03:28   Link #18440
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Then tell me! I'm stuck and need advice on fic writing!
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