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Old 2012-02-03, 00:19   Link #20621
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@ Rain - Finally working on Shadow again. I tell ya, it feels awesome

@ Yachi - Ichika becomes paranoid. He wonders if any of his other kid's are crossdressing.....then he looks at Shouta and Charles
So does that mean, 4 of them in the bathroom?

That would be... uhhh... weird
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:23   Link #20622
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@'Yachi - They're using the big bath (remember that one?) It's big enough that the kid's swim in it

@ Rain - Writing Irish's hold up scene now.'Making sure he doesn't curse is annoying.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:24   Link #20623
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@ Eratas: If I were in his shoes, I'd curse at a lot of things.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:25   Link #20624
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@ Rain - I want to avoid the whole "I curse like a sailor" stereotype. He's too busy thinking of a way not to get shot. Thankfully, Ichika smashes the wall in the lower floor and distracts him long enough to get close.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:28   Link #20625
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@'Yachi - They're using the big bath (remember that one?) It's big enough that the kid's swim in it

@ Rain - Writing Irish's hold up scene now.'Making sure he doesn't curse is annoying.
Yeah, but then, I hope the other two won't think of anything once they discover Yuu's personality

By the way, what's their ages again? Charles, Shouta, Kazuma and Yuu?

And still, thank God they're not in the Bathroom of the dorms
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:29   Link #20626
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Charles is 7, Shouta's close to 9, Saito's 8, and Kazuma's chronologically about 5.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:30   Link #20627
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@ Eratas: An interesting way to portray such a scene would be having him work over possible scenarios proceeding, then showing the possibilty of failure in each one.

So you could have him imagine a short action based on his environment and what he's fighting, and then procede with him imagining his scenario self getting riddled with holes and/or failing at what he was trying to do, putting emphasis on him being pragmatic.

And when he quickly thinks of one that has a good chance of success, have him act on it. It may or may not work, but it'll show he gives rational thought instead of an impression of being a death-seeker.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:33   Link #20628
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Charles is 7, Shouta's close to 9, Saito's 8, and Kazuma's chronologically about 5.
Ah I see. Then that's good. I hope they're properly educated about "that" thing.

I'm still 10% of chapter 6 of Everything is Radiant, I can't think of better scenes ._.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:36   Link #20629
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@ Rain - He's not a death seeker Not height scared of death and actively looking for it are different. Anyway, I can't make the chapter too long since after the Ichika and Irish fight, I have to do the death scene for Michael.

@ Yachi - What thing?

Side note - What do you need help with?
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:40   Link #20630
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@ Rain - He's not a death seeker Not height scared of death and actively looking for it are different. Anyway, I can't make the chapter too long since after the Ichika and Irish fight, I have to do the death scene for Michael.

@ Yachi - What thing?

Side note - What do you need help with?
I'm deciding if I should do a time skip or make this continue

Spoiler for EiR:


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Old 2012-02-03, 00:40   Link #20631
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@ Eratas: For Micheal's death scene (I have two friends name Micheal, so when I wrote "Michael's death scene" in an earlier post, he thought I had turned him into a character and made an elaborate death for him. ), are you gonna use the one you posted up here?
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:42   Link #20632
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Bikini IS suit is a custom IS suit (the wearer is obviously a rep or rep candidate)

It BOOST 200% HIGHER SYN RATE (due to more skin exposed)!

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I think I will modify the story I currently had... little to commemorate Bikini IS suit
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:43   Link #20633
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@ Rain - I'm gonna add more details. Specifically: He almost dies no less than three times in the entire segment. So it looks like he's gonna make it.....then he gets shot when he tried to explain

@ Treme - Will you re-do the entire story?

@ Yachi - Continue. It's better than timeskipping.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:44   Link #20634
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Bikini IS suit is a custom IS suit (the wearer is obviously a rep or rep candidate)

It BOOST 200% HIGHER SYN RATE (due to more skin exposed)!

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I think I will modify the story I currently had... little to commemorate Bikini IS suit
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~?
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:47   Link #20635
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@ Eratas: That's going to throw your readers for one hell of a twist.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:50   Link #20636
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@ Rain - Not really. Sam says that Michael's already dead/going to die before the POV switches to him. That makes it kinda obvious he's going to die.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:52   Link #20637
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@ Eratas: I'm a thousand words away from finishing the Nasuverse fic. I'll be completely immersed in trying to finish it.
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:56   Link #20638
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@Eratas: Not entire story.

Just additional stuff.

Think of it as add-on/DLC to the Main campaign.

The main plot remains the same.

On the other hand...things like that make male OC fun to play with..... (being accused of being a pervert).
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Old 2012-02-03, 00:57   Link #20639
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@ Rain - Finished? It's only one chapter?

@ Treme - Good luck with that
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Old 2012-02-03, 01:00   Link #20640
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@ Eratas: Nope, I meant the first chapter. But since the protagonist's travelling across the multiverse, his homeworld is the first to be brushed up on.

The next world is going to be an alternate universe, about an entire miniarc crammed into a chapter.

Each of these worlds has the potential to be actual fics, with the exception of the times they visit canon places.
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