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Old 2012-01-27, 01:46   Link #1001
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I decided to slightly extend on your idea for a 'Cassandra' fanfic, Runty :P

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Old 2012-01-29, 00:36   Link #1002
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As I said before, Runty, I was away for a long time, tending to my SKYRIM addiction. But I said when I came back to writing fanfics I would make up for it with volume.

So here's what I wrote for the Zeri+Juliana+Melissa Dalen fanfic!

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Old 2012-01-29, 21:53   Link #1003
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As I said before, Runty, I was away for a long time, tending to my SKYRIM addiction. But I said when I came back to writing fanfics I would make up for it with volume.

So here's what I wrote for the Zeri+Juliana+Melissa Dalen fanfic!

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Pretty nice, but I still think it shouldn't be a case of Zeri being blinded by the explosion. It'd make more sense to have it such that Zeri's glasses break in the blast, rendering him unable to see clearly.

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Old 2012-01-30, 22:33   Link #1004
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Only worry about his glasses breaking is that the logical direction of the glass to shatter is inward, to his eyes.

Unless he's thrown, and the glasses fall off him as he falls, and he ends up accidentally crushing them as he's trying to pick himself up.

Also, sufficient trauma to the head, and you can start to temporarily lose your vision. An inability to focus is one of the symptoms of a concussion, as I recall.
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Old 2012-01-31, 02:30   Link #1005
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Well, I never said it was the explosion or anything from the explosion that made them 'blind'. They weren't blind, all the lighting got cut off *the overhead lamps or the lamps along the side of the tunnel after the cord got severed as a result of the explosion and the rockslide that blocked them off from the others*

Yes, they're in total darkness now, but as in the anime, Ragnite crystals 'glow in the dark'. When that happens, the miners don't need lamps, flashlights or such. But, they were only in a tunnel, not a mining shaft or mining area, so there would not be any ragnite crystals around to provide other means of light once other more 'artificial' means were cut off.

Was all I meant when I wrote that Juliana, Zeri and Melissa couldn't see.

P.S.- No review for the latest Nichol+Franca fic, or thoughts on the new idea for that Casandra one
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Old 2012-01-31, 03:04   Link #1006
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Only worry about his glasses breaking is that the logical direction of the glass to shatter is inward, to his eyes.

Unless he's thrown, and the glasses fall off him as he falls, and he ends up accidentally crushing them as he's trying to pick himself up.

Also, sufficient trauma to the head, and you can start to temporarily lose your vision. An inability to focus is one of the symptoms of a concussion, as I recall.
Maybe they break as they hit the ground, or some rocks end up falling on them. Best logic would be "knocked off the head and THEN break".
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Old 2012-02-01, 04:00   Link #1007
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Maybe they break as they hit the ground, or some rocks end up falling on them. Best logic would be "knocked off the head and THEN break".
Runty, that is what I suggested.
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Old 2012-02-04, 03:06   Link #1008
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Been a bit busy, so these reviews are late.

Spoiler for Nichol+Franca:

Spoiler for Cassandra:

Now for something new, starring Mischlitt this time! (You can change details as needed.)
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I honestly think Mischlitt needs a spotlight fic, don't you? She carries so much of the Darcsen ideology in her that makes the VC series interesting.
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Old 2012-02-14, 02:03   Link #1009
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So... nothing yet to update with, Snowman?
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Old 2012-02-21, 00:26   Link #1010
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Sorry, at the moment I'm focusing on getting my Dragon Age fanfic finished *sorry for off-top/non-VC stuff* Two more chapters till its finished :P

Once that's out of the way, I'll continue on with my VC stuff.
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Old 2012-02-22, 20:19   Link #1011
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By VC stuff, does that include your AIW and Just my Luck fics?
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Old 2012-02-23, 17:20   Link #1012
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Actually, Snowman, are you still taking requests? I have one to ask from you.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:30   Link #1013
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Sure, just write out you're think about and I'll take a look at it later.
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Old 2012-02-23, 22:38   Link #1014
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I was thinking of a chapter between Jugin and Lavinia. Both had known Leon before he went missing, and both had memories of him.

I was thinking of a scene where they both get together and start talking about both their shared memories of Leon and their guilt after his death, Jugin's being that Leon took his place in Project Valhalla and Lavinia's being that Leon died before fufilling their promise to destory the Ghost Tank.

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Old 2012-03-04, 02:31   Link #1015
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I found a fanfic with a crossover between Bad Company and the VC universe.
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Old 2012-03-06, 22:27   Link #1016
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Hm, so you did; I see the writer did decently at keeping BC's trademark humor intact.

On another note, folks here might recall some of the... stranger... ideas I'd postulated for VC crossovers and fusions. Well, what with the XCOM franchise making a comeback (see this thread over in the Games forum), we now have another one to toss on the proverbial barbie. A couple of variations come to mind here...
  • Alpha: on what was supposed to be a routine mission - practically a 'milk run' - Squad 7 comes across an EBE (Extraterrestrial Biological Entity) incursion... and the polyglot force confronting it;
  • Bravo: Welkin hooks up with Squad 7 just in time to find out they've been tagged as Gallia's contribution to XCOM from the word 'go'.
Either way, weirdness ensues. Note that this could work just as well with the VC2 or 3 casts.
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Old 2012-03-07, 03:41   Link #1017
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This guy has a pretty good start already. I'm keeping an eye on this one.
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Old 2012-03-08, 02:54   Link #1018
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Quick question involving 'Kisses'

I know kisses are expected to happen, and they probably will, in my Morris+Coleen fanfic. But I have a few questions, involving the possibility of 'other' kisses in my current fanfics. Right now, I'm confused as to whether or not, I should involve some 'couples' kissing. It's all about their 'relationships' to eachother.

Spoiler for Zeri+Juliana+Melissa Fanfic moment:


Spoiler for Nichol+Franca Fanfic moment:


Because believe me, even though this much time has passed since I last updated any of my 'Valkyria Chronicles' fanfics, I have never, ever forgotten about any of my stories.

I.E. A'dventures in War, Just My Luck, and My One-Hit-Fanfics'

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Old 2012-03-08, 18:07   Link #1019
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Spoiler for Zeri+Juliana+Melissa:


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Old 2012-03-10, 16:03   Link #1020
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New chapter with the BC/VC crossover.
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