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Old 2012-03-02, 08:35   Link #24501
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What city is ISA near in again?
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:36   Link #24502
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but day dreams' content is shoujo
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:39   Link #24503
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Really? Senpai said the first chapters were Shounen even if I tried to make it Shoujo.
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:39   Link #24504
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Odaiba.

I though we already talked about this, De javu? :3

EDIT: in my defense, I was talking about writing style. I.S. are more shounen than Shoujo, and your writing style is closer to canon long ago.
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:42   Link #24505
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What about my writing style now?
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:44   Link #24506
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Better, much better. Of course, that's my opinion.
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:45   Link #24507
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Doesn't it ever get confusing or redundant?

Side note - Arachne's a mom in FI
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:46   Link #24508
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You start feeling that way when you pay more attention to comparisons with other people's writing than want to tell your own story.
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:48   Link #24509
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I copy other peoples writing style. The one I'm using now is copied from Fujin's.
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:52   Link #24510
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I... get possessed. That's all I can describe it as
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:53   Link #24511
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Huh? I don't get it.

@ Senpai - Is it too much of an asspull that the cast always miss one another when they're looking for the other kids in FI?
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:57   Link #24512
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Yes, there are limits of suspension of disbelief. the frame of reference can be in-universe (hours, minutes) or out of universe (chapters).
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Old 2012-03-02, 08:59   Link #24513
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It's mostly time. They tend to miss each other by a few seconds to a few minutes at most. For example: Maya takes Celeste to the office just a few minutes after Ichika went there with Charles and Yuu. Kazuma and Shouta also missed Honne by a few seconds.
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:05   Link #24514
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Well, I'm now confused myself about that, all in all, have them meet soon (Meta-universe frame of reference)
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:07   Link #24515
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They do meet next chapter. Tatenashi and Maya's kid chase von cloney to the hangar where Kanzashi's kids recognize her. Laura's kid gets hungry so Maya decides to cook something for her at the home ec room where Honne an 4 other kids are.
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:14   Link #24516
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Hmm... for some reason, I imagine Ichika and Lyon's first meeting to be epic.

Ichika thinks Lyon's a girl. Then notices one arm missing and realizes it's the same arm the Silver Gospel lost... oh yeah...
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:17   Link #24517
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Wpuld Ichika even be smart enough to make that connection? Madoka looks exactly like Chifuyu.

Ichika: Hmmm, I'm gonna wait a whole novel before asking Chifuyu-nee. Oh, she said she;s not related? Okay then, must be a coincidence!
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:35   Link #24518
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He would be told that he was going to meet the Gospel's pilot... who was sharing a room with another person.
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:38   Link #24519
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Why would ichika be metting the Gospels pilot?
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Old 2012-03-02, 09:40   Link #24520
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Mostly because the person wanted to talk to Ichika. I think it's in his character to say yes to the request.
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