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Old 2003-12-13, 18:23   Link #1
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need some help on anatomy

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4217315/

I feel like this anatomy is wrong, can u give me some advice on how to do it properly.

Oh, and some help on how to draw wings is also greatly appreciated
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Old 2003-12-13, 19:18   Link #2
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if you tilt it at a 35-45 degree angle .... em... it should look more like he's glaring down ^^ o well~ just my POV ~

edit: here we go with the futurn time machine ^^
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Old 2003-12-13, 19:40   Link #3
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Originally Posted by Stofzuiger
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4217315/

I feel like this anatomy is wrong, can u give me some advice on how to do it properly.

Oh, and some help on how to draw wings is also greatly appreciated
perspective eh? those are always hard to draw esp if you're going to draw a human. if it helps, draw your character within box thats in perspective. its better if you have the angle view first then draw the box then character.


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Old 2003-12-13, 19:53   Link #4
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thnx guys/gals

yeah, the "camera" is supposed to be positioned above him, but I just can't get it to work

thnx for the advices though! Ima practise a lot, you'll be seeing more of my crappy attempts at sketches

but first, ima try this perspective
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Old 2003-12-13, 20:46   Link #5
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I'm guessing your trying to have it looking down on him? If thats the case, having knowledge of anatomy would only help out a little. In the area of foreshortening, it's all about practice. As for things i see wrong with this image:

-The head should be looking up, having it pointing down makes it kinda pointless.
-The spear should be closer to him and more forshortening on it.
-Right arm should go down a bit more and be shortened. Dont forget to add foreshortening to it as well. The hand gesture is also strange.
-The pants get bigger at the end which takes awayfrom the idea of looking down.

Suggestion: Dont start with foreshortening. It's the hardest area of illustration and should be dealt with last. Try drawing the character just faceing forward and then work from there.
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Old 2003-12-14, 02:35   Link #6
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The head should be looking up, having it pointing down makes it kinda pointless.
I think it gives it more of a artistic feel. It makes it more exiting than just a dull looking straight at him while he's looking straight. I like the head angle the way it is. Though I think you should bring the spear closer to him. Also, I think his arms are just a tad too long. Other than that the picture's anatomy is rather good. I really like the wings.
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Old 2003-12-14, 03:30   Link #7
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i personally think that the torso ir wrong, you must show the colar bone so you can get right the sholders and the arms...... for the moment it looks a little chubi, for the rest ilike it a lot, a good idea and superb shading
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