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Old 2010-12-31, 01:08   Link #221
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Wind Lord by DarthValgaav

The best part of fic........
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Hiashi opened his eyes and saw that he was no longer in his room. From the looks (and smell) of it he was in some kind of abandoned factory or sewer. There were pipes coming out of ground and out of the walls. The floor was concrete and the walls had steel plates on them.

He then realized that he was in some kind of chair. His hands and legs were bound to it by chakra enhanced steel chains. His head was locked in place by a steel clamp that kept him from moving it. In fact, the only thing he could move was his mouth.

Then he saw something move towards him. It was two power drills moving towards him at eye level. Literally. Then a voice came on the speakers behind him.

"Hello Hyuga Hiashi. I want to play a game. Your whole life you have hurt others with your words. Your harshness has caused people to lose faith in themselves and because of that they have died on missions or have hurt their team's performances. Others have simply given up hope for themselves like your former daughter Hinata. Now, you must use your words to save yourself.

"In front of you are power drills that are set on a timer. When it reaches zero they will thrust forward and stop just before they penetrate your skull. The only thing that they will take is what your clan prides its self for, your eyes.

"The only way to stop this is to say something nice about Hinata. But it won't be that easy. Those chains that are binding you will let me know if you are lying. If they tell me that you are, one of the drills will shoot forward automatically.

"You have sixty seconds.

"Let the game begin."


With that, the drills came to life.

"Why should I believe this is real?" screamed Hiashi. "You want me to say something truthful? Fine then! Hinata is and always will be useless trash!" Like promised one of the drills shot forward and impaled his left eye. The head of the Hyuga clan screamed in pain.

"Tsk, tsk," said the voice. "One more try. Oh, by the way, you have thirty seconds left."

Hiashi moaned and cried as his precious seconds passed him by. His brain racked its self to find something nice to say about Hinata. Sadly, only one thing came to mind.

"Ah, she's a good dresser," he said.

"Sorry Hiashi," said the voice as the other drill headed for his right eye. "Not good enough." Hiashi screamed as his whole world went black.

Then he woke up.

"No more 'Saw' movie marathons before bed," said a panting Hiashi aloud.
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Old 2011-01-10, 10:39   Link #222
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i'll add the my original drawing picture of sasuke soon, it is on _photoserver.ws its a bit complicated to retrieve it's new password
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Old 2011-01-10, 13:31   Link #223
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Wind Lord by DarthValgaav

The best part of fic........
That's hilarious. Never thought to see a Naruto fanfic with a Saw cross-over. XD
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Old 2011-01-15, 02:53   Link #224
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Wind Lord by DarthValgaav

The best part of fic........
Man that is disturbing and funny at the same time. XD
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Old 2011-01-17, 07:59   Link #225
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Anyone here familiar with Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha?

Do give me a private message; there are a few kinks in the plot of my story that needs to be addressed...
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Old 2011-01-17, 08:59   Link #226
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Anyone here familiar with Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha?

Do give me a private message; there are a few kinks in the plot of my story that needs to be addressed...
you the author or Arcane Heart & Twin Fates, right ? Read em both, except for the latest chapter of TF


have seen Nanoha ofc (but not read Vivid & Force mangas), but not sure how good my plot knowledge is
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Old 2011-04-27, 03:28   Link #227
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Minor profanity and subtle erotic humor included. It doesn't work without it.
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Old 2011-12-22, 02:26   Link #228
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So I noticed on a search that this was roriconfan's last post, and that he is banned. I've seen him make reviews on numerous anime and was curious, was he banned for the eroticism of this post or something unexplained?
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Old 2012-02-25, 20:17   Link #229
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ASN Naruto is a Naruto fanfic where he leaves Konoha after his secret is revealed and he is led to his clan’s home village in the Land of Whirlpools. Resurrecting his mother using a special puppet, they both set out to restore their village.
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Old 2012-03-23, 16:03   Link #230
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Old 2012-03-24, 03:38   Link #231
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Naruto: Wind Monk Banishment is a Naruto x Fuu fanfic where he leaves Konoha after being exiled by a mistake on Tsunade’s part. Four years later, they finally spot him in service to the new Wind Damiyo, and all the dormant forces in the world begin to move against the fox and his beetle.

This story is rated “M” because of violence, and swearing (Mostly Hidan).
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Old 2012-03-28, 09:26   Link #232
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wow. fanfic! i love these. I want a story of gaara )
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Old 2012-03-29, 01:15   Link #233
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Old 2012-04-11, 16:20   Link #234
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My fanfic Naruto: Wind Monk Banishment has been updated to chapter's 3 & 4.

Chapter 3 has Naruto, Fuu, and Gaara against Sasori and Deidara: Fanfiction.net & Twilit Dreams

Chapter 4 has Naruto vs Kakashi and Sasuke and Fuu vs Sai and Sakura: Twilit Dreams & Fanfiction.net
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Old 2012-04-12, 22:28   Link #235
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http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...0789&chapter=1

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Old 2012-04-15, 07:20   Link #236
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Umm, hello guys, this is the first time I joined this subforum and thread, and the first time I write Naruto fanfic.

Nothing original or new, just a bit.... different.

The main point of difference is one question: "What if people trying to accept Naruto?"

Feel free to criticize anything (including grammar, because I'm not even speaking English), or if you have any suggestion for it.

Spoiler for TRY Chapter 1 Part 1:


Here's two question whose answer I need before I can continue the next part
Spoiler for Please help:
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Old 2012-04-17, 12:17   Link #237
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Umm, hello guys, this is the first time I joined this subforum and thread, and the first time I write Naruto fanfic.

Nothing original or new, just a bit.... different.

The main point of difference is one question: "What if people trying to accept Naruto?"

Feel free to criticize anything (including grammar, because I'm not even speaking English), or if you have any suggestion for it.

Spoiler for TRY Chapter 1 Part 1:


Here's two question whose answer I need before I can continue the next part
Spoiler for Please help:
1.) You can have either one of the clan leaders watch over him, Teuchi, Tenten's Father, or an OC.

2.) Karin said she sensed bandits coming when her village was destroyed, so you can have here somehow find her way there.

ASN Naruto and WMB Naruto have been updated: TwilitDreams & Fanfic
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Old 2012-04-17, 17:50   Link #238
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Newer one, seems like a crack-fic in the works

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8035126/...of_Azumi_Kawai



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The person also does buffy fanfiction
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Old 2012-04-17, 20:37   Link #239
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Hello guys this will be my first time joining a Naruto fanfiction thread and first time writing a Naruto fanfic. The fanfic is a time travel.
It will start in the middle of Shinobi War. I`m not sure if I`m gonna put some OCs for some reason I don`t feel like making them because some people favor the Naruto cast over OC.

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Old 2012-04-22, 19:27   Link #240
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First chapter of Naruto - TRY

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