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Old 2012-04-15, 10:33   Link #36121
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Where do you think I got the inspirations from?
Spoiler for spoiler:

That's about it though. The first one he's quite good at, while the latter he know only the basic.
Heh...

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Old 2012-04-15, 19:48   Link #36122
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THanks for the advice.
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BTW, What would Yuuno be like during Tranquil FUry? I'm curious.
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Old 2012-04-15, 21:07   Link #36123
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1 2

Yuuno comes in a classroom:
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:09   Link #36124
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^ Wait a minute, Mysterious Girlfriend S?
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:15   Link #36125
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I saw that picture, but I still can't understand what the hell is it/
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Uh, what?
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:17   Link #36126
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It's a parody of weird (if funny) manga titled Mysterious Girlfriend X. Explaining the plot here would be off topic, but Bhl88 already summed it above.
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:25   Link #36127
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Just look it up on tvtropes, and the plot summary weird me out.
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:27   Link #36128
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I go on haitus for a while and come back to find discussions about Yuuno breaking someone's neck?
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:34   Link #36129
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It's not like Yuuno being put in the spotlight is uncommon here.

...parkour, really? He can already fly, I think that beats any ground-based movement.
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Old 2012-04-15, 22:36   Link #36130
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Uh, an strong enough AMF could render flight impossible. What's to say they don't deploy it in their hidden temple/site/etc ?
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Old 2012-04-15, 23:21   Link #36131
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It's not like Yuuno being put in the spotlight is uncommon here.
Not really talking about the spotlight/exposure. More the fact that... we're talking about him breaking someone's neck.
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Old 2012-04-15, 23:31   Link #36132
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Uh, an strong enough AMF could render flight impossible. What's to say they don't deploy it in their hidden temple/site/etc ?
Well if you have to invent situations just for him to show off a given talent (one which you gave him), then...

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Not really talking about the spotlight/exposure. More the fact that... we're talking about him breaking someone's neck.
Part of what I meant. He's done lots of stuff on here he probably wouldn't in canon. But that does seem kinda grim-dark, even so.
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Old 2012-04-16, 00:12   Link #36133
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Given a severe enough circumstances I believe that Yuuno can do it. But only and only if the situation involves saving lives, and that life has to be very important to him. There isn't much characterization on him, but I'd imagine he's more realistic than Nanoha.
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Old 2012-04-16, 00:42   Link #36134
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Breaking neck I think not that far, ripping out someone's heart on the other hand...
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Old 2012-04-16, 01:00   Link #36135
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Thanks a lot Craxuan. I need to change things a bit, but this could work.
... Damn it, now I'm imagining an Nanoha Highschool AU. *groan*
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Old 2012-04-16, 01:53   Link #36136
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I think we've all considered or tried our hands at an AU for Nanoha at some point. :V
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Old 2012-04-16, 02:22   Link #36137
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Depends on how wide a person's concept of AU is. I'm a bit old-fashioned that I believe once an original story has been created, the following fan fictions should stick to the original universe as closely as possible. If scenarios (Though there aren't many that I'm interested in) and deliberate comedies are fine with me, but totally changing it into something like well, High School AU with no magic just doesn't sit well.

And you're welcome, Lhklan.
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Old 2012-04-16, 04:03   Link #36138
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@Justin
Thank for your advice. I'm reconsidering things, and I find that the parkour thing is, well, unsuitable for the settings without making him Gary Stu-ish. So I'm removing it.

... It is wrong for me to want to write even more YuunoxDue after finishing this fic?
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Old 2012-04-16, 04:53   Link #36139
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You could write anything you want as long as you stick to Nanohaverse.
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Old 2012-04-16, 08:21   Link #36140
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Spoiler for UYD Chapter 5:

This could still use some more polishing, particularly yuuno's reason for saving Due. Could you guys help me out?
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