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Old 2012-04-26, 10:20   Link #30041
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hmmm seems legit? hahaha

Thanks for the input and bearing with the weird choice of topics.

Ima sleep now.
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Old 2012-04-26, 10:27   Link #30042
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I reccomend it Based on your complaints about IS, SAO solves most of them.
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Old 2012-04-26, 19:29   Link #30043
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Fanfic marked.

The Obnoxious tale of Ichika OrimuraChan
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Old 2012-04-26, 19:45   Link #30044
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What the hell....
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Old 2012-04-26, 19:52   Link #30045
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@ Senpai Can I ask for help?
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Old 2012-04-26, 19:59   Link #30046
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Yes, of course.
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Old 2012-04-26, 20:08   Link #30047
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I'm about nearly done with Laura's next daydream chapter, and I'd like advice on it. It's more of an introspective part where Laura and Ichika narrates their thougths of one another after their first week as training partners. Very little dialogue actually happens.
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Old 2012-04-26, 20:10   Link #30048
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Sure, just P.M. me and I'll check it throughly, I'll see if I can borrow a laptop in school.
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Old 2012-04-26, 20:14   Link #30049
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Can't I just post it here?
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Old 2012-04-26, 20:57   Link #30050
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Of course you can
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Old 2012-04-27, 00:00   Link #30051
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^ That was awesome

First it's opened with non-sequitur gag, while seemingly unrelated, it highlight how all-female unit full of horny teen would be very dangerous if you insert enough rule of funny.

Laura's confusion about her feelings, and how she's trying to justify it logically (don't work at all, which makes it funnier)

Ichika was a little more attentive and positive than canon, I think I like this change.

And the Stinger with Chifuyu is priceless.
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Old 2012-04-27, 00:07   Link #30052
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Laura's not too bitchy?
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Old 2012-04-27, 00:44   Link #30053
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Nah, she's better than Canon I think.
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Old 2012-04-27, 01:38   Link #30054
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Thanks. Took me a few hours to make that.
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Old 2012-04-27, 04:39   Link #30055
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A thought occurred to me... what if there was a fanfic that was all about introducing OCs?
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Old 2012-04-27, 04:56   Link #30056
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Eh? Plenty of fanfic do just that.

But honor goes to Jak's Project Silverback
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Old 2012-04-27, 04:59   Link #30057
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No... I don't mean a fanfic that is driven by OCs. I just mean introducing OCs...

The title would be something like IS: First Impressions.

The premise would be "Ichika meeting other people in ISA for the first time."

So the plot, or lack of it, is all about episodic encounters with random people AKA the OCs.
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Old 2012-04-27, 05:02   Link #30058
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Nope, no such thing.

And probably, no one outrageous enough. Still, Jak's OCs drive the story entirely (though he set it as sidestories)
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Old 2012-04-27, 05:05   Link #30059
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outrageous?

I was thinking of taking the helm but I realized I'm working on too many things at once.
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Old 2012-04-27, 05:19   Link #30060
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I say outrageous because I talked with one of the most stuck up critic in this fandom.

"This franchise's selling point is the girls. When people insist inserting overpowered male character as projection of their so-called manly ego, I was like... . On the other hand, changed the canon characters is relative fine, even if it's out of character. Inserting female character are fine and dandy so long as they don't get more than they deserve"

If they got more development than the canon characters, that's just sad. Of course MYSELF is none to talk considering the list of my OC, who tend to stole spotlight when they appear, the only factor limiting that is that they appear rarely.
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