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demino_hellsin · 2012-04-26, 10:20

hmmm seems legit? hahaha

Thanks for the input and bearing with the weird choice of topics.

Ima sleep now.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-26, 10:27

I reccomend it

Based on your complaints about IS, SAO solves most of them.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-04-26, 19:29

Fanfic marked.

The Obnoxious tale of Ichika OrimuraChan

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-26, 19:45

What the hell....

Eratas123 · 2012-04-26, 19:52

@ Senpai Can I ask for help?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-26, 19:59

Yes, of course.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-26, 20:08

I'm about nearly done with Laura's next daydream chapter, and I'd like advice on it. It's more of an introspective part where Laura and Ichika narrates their thougths of one another after their first week as training partners. Very little dialogue actually happens.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-26, 20:10

Sure, just P.M. me and I'll check it throughly, I'll see if I can borrow a laptop in school.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-26, 20:14

Can't I just post it here?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-26, 20:57

Of course you can

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-27, 00:00

^ That was awesome

First it's opened with non-sequitur gag, while seemingly unrelated, it highlight how all-female unit full of horny teen would be very dangerous if you insert enough rule of funny.

Laura's confusion about her feelings, and how she's trying to justify it logically (don't work at all, which makes it funnier)

Ichika was a little more attentive and positive than canon, I think I like this change.

And the Stinger with Chifuyu is priceless.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-27, 00:07

Laura's not too bitchy?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-27, 00:44

Nah, she's better than Canon I think.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-27, 01:38

Thanks. Took me a few hours to make that.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-27, 04:39

A thought occurred to me... what if there was a fanfic that was all about introducing OCs?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-27, 04:56

Eh? Plenty of fanfic do just that.

But honor goes to Jak's Project Silverback

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-27, 04:59

No... I don't mean a fanfic that is driven by OCs. I just mean introducing OCs...

The title would be something like IS: First Impressions.

The premise would be "Ichika meeting other people in ISA for the first time."

So the plot, or lack of it, is all about episodic encounters with random people AKA the OCs.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-27, 05:02

Nope, no such thing.

And probably, no one outrageous enough. Still, Jak's OCs drive the story entirely (though he set it as sidestories)

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-27, 05:05

outrageous?

I was thinking of taking the helm but I realized I'm working on too many things at once.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-27, 05:19

I say outrageous because I talked with one of the most stuck up critic in this fandom.

"This franchise's selling point is the girls. When people insist inserting overpowered male character as projection of their so-called manly ego, I was like...

. On the other hand, changed the canon characters is relative fine, even if it's out of character. Inserting female character are fine and dandy so long as they don't get more than they deserve"

If they got more development than the canon characters, that's just sad. Of course MYSELF is none to talk considering the list of my OC, who tend to stole spotlight when they appear, the only factor limiting that is that they appear rarely.

2012-04-26, 10:27	Link #30042
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I reccomend it Based on your complaints about IS, SAO solves most of them. __________________

2012-04-26, 19:45	Link #30044
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	What the hell.... __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-26, 19:52	Link #30045
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai Can I ask for help? __________________

2012-04-26, 19:59	Link #30046
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Yes, of course. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-26, 20:08	Link #30047
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I'm about nearly done with Laura's next daydream chapter, and I'd like advice on it. It's more of an introspective part where Laura and Ichika narrates their thougths of one another after their first week as training partners. Very little dialogue actually happens. __________________

2012-04-26, 10:20	Link #30041
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	hmmm seems legit? hahaha Thanks for the input and bearing with the weird choice of topics. Ima sleep now.

2012-04-26, 19:29	Link #30043
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Fanfic marked. The Obnoxious tale of Ichika OrimuraChan

2012-04-26, 20:10	Link #30048
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Sure, just P.M. me and I'll check it throughly, I'll see if I can borrow a laptop in school. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-26, 20:14	Link #30049
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Can't I just post it here? __________________

2012-04-26, 20:57	Link #30050
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Of course you can __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-27, 00:00	Link #30051
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	^ That was awesome First it's opened with non-sequitur gag, while seemingly unrelated, it highlight how all-female unit full of horny teen would be very dangerous if you insert enough rule of funny. Laura's confusion about her feelings, and how she's trying to justify it logically (don't work at all, which makes it funnier) Ichika was a little more attentive and positive than canon, I think I like this change. And the Stinger with Chifuyu is priceless. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-27, 00:07	Link #30052
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Laura's not too bitchy? __________________

2012-04-27, 00:44	Link #30053
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Nah, she's better than Canon I think. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-27, 01:38	Link #30054
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Thanks. Took me a few hours to make that. __________________

2012-04-27, 04:39	Link #30055
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	A thought occurred to me... what if there was a fanfic that was all about introducing OCs?

2012-04-27, 04:56	Link #30056
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Eh? Plenty of fanfic do just that. But honor goes to Jak's Project Silverback __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-27, 04:59	Link #30057
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	No... I don't mean a fanfic that is driven by OCs. I just mean introducing OCs... The title would be something like IS: First Impressions. The premise would be "Ichika meeting other people in ISA for the first time." So the plot, or lack of it, is all about episodic encounters with random people AKA the OCs.

2012-04-27, 05:02	Link #30058
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Nope, no such thing. And probably, no one outrageous enough. Still, Jak's OCs drive the story entirely (though he set it as sidestories) __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-04-27, 05:05	Link #30059
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	outrageous? I was thinking of taking the helm but I realized I'm working on too many things at once.

2012-04-27, 05:19	Link #30060
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	I say outrageous because I talked with one of the most stuck up critic in this fandom. "This franchise's selling point is the girls. When people insist inserting overpowered male character as projection of their so-called manly ego, I was like... . On the other hand, changed the canon characters is relative fine, even if it's out of character. Inserting female character are fine and dandy so long as they don't get more than they deserve" If they got more development than the canon characters, that's just sad. Of course MYSELF is none to talk considering the list of my OC, who tend to stole spotlight when they appear, the only factor limiting that is that they appear rarely. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"