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Old 2012-04-23, 17:31   Link #36201
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Oh! Some screentime for Zelgadis.

I guess that answers my questions about Kuma.

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"Partially. I just don't want a relationship where you two would think of me as your master. You aren't my slaves, and I don't want that type of relationship." Kuma moved his arms so that he could caress Amitie and Kyrie's cheeks. "Maybe one day, but for now, I just want to make sure that you two are able to live happy."
The specific wording gives the impression Kuma may want a slave/master relationship later. I don't think it's what you intend.

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Old 2012-04-23, 17:37   Link #36202
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Teana shook her head. "The Riot Force is under-staffed at the moment and I don't want too many people over-hearing. If I had my own apartment, I would have invited you to my place to talk." When Zelgadis raised an eyebrow and smirked, Teana blushed and shook her head. "Not like that. I meant over this case."

Zelgadis chuckled at her embarrassment. "It's fine, you're lucky that this place is slow right now, what did you want to talk about?"
lol poor Tia XD
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Old 2012-04-23, 20:46   Link #36203
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Get a room you two!

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So I'm feeling sentimental. Sue me.
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Old 2012-04-24, 07:06   Link #36204
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Nanya-muse: Mouuu... You make it sound like I make him write only harems!
DC-muse: And you don't?
Nanya-muse: *Dramatic pose* That's besides the point!
DC-muse: Uh huh, I think I'm going to leave now...
Nanya-muse: *Glomps DC-muse* WAAHHH! Don't leave me! Besides, I haven't washed your clothes from last night yet!
DC-muse: *Red* Guh! I told you not to bring that up!

My muse is weird.

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Old 2012-04-24, 13:11   Link #36205
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Me: *Looks at Val.* How in the world that 765 yr old fox got here anyways?
Obviously walking through the front door.

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Old 2012-04-24, 21:19   Link #36206
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*sulk in a corner* What am I? Chopped liver?
BTW, great chapter Nanya.
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Old 2012-04-25, 04:18   Link #36207
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@Nanya-muse & dc-muse
Get a room you two!
DC-muse: The last time that happened... *Turns red* No! I'm not thinking about it!

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Spoiler for Another universe, another end:

So I'm feeling sentimental. Sue me.
Fairly sentimental.

Good grammar, vast improvement over what you did when you started, but you've got some spelling errors in there. It's nothing major, thankfully, but it's something you should work on.

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*sulk in a corner* What am I? Chopped liver?
BTW, great chapter Nanya.
Thank you, as for chopped liver... *Looks at the grill* Huh... I think I'm cooking it.
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Old 2012-04-25, 06:47   Link #36208
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ARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHH!!! IT BURNS!!!!! *runs around like headless chicken*
l-muse: Baka. *stares at Nanya's response* I don't even want to know.
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Old 2012-04-25, 18:12   Link #36209
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Kuma never has it easy when dealing with those two. XD

And, lhklan, you should already know you're chopped liver. =P
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Old 2012-04-25, 20:17   Link #36210
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... What do you think Lyco?
Also, I though you were the chopped liver?
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Old 2012-04-26, 07:57   Link #36211
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... What do you think Lyco?
Also, I though you were the chopped liver?
Nope, not quite. XP
...and I really should get back to writing "One-Half and Eleven" sometime soon. =~=
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Old 2012-04-26, 10:23   Link #36212
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I mean what do you think about my snippet above.
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Old 2012-04-26, 10:37   Link #36213
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I mean what do you think about my snippet above.
A mixture of heartwarming and tragedy, definitely. I liked it for the most part. ^^
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Old 2012-04-27, 00:19   Link #36214
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Is there a reason why you don't upload the chapters here to fanfiction.net? Just asking
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Old 2012-04-27, 01:08   Link #36215
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@Nanya-muse & dc-muse
Get a room you two!

Spoiler for Another universe, another end:

So I'm feeling sentimental. Sue me.
This was indeed, quite the improvement.

And I did feel a sadness from the scene. Heartwarming and tragic indeed. T_T
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Old 2012-04-27, 01:39   Link #36216
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Thanks Iron.
How's your fics progressing, BTW?
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Old 2012-04-27, 01:54   Link #36217
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Is there a reason why you don't upload the chapters here to fanfiction.net? Just asking
He does. He just generally waits until he's finished writing an arc before doing so.
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Old 2012-04-27, 02:01   Link #36218
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Thanks Iron.
How's your fics progressing, BTW?
Absurdly slow owing to gearing up for graduation, but I did manage a decent chunk of Swords and Shields' next chapter.

I really want to finish it so I can get to the rest of my menu, but I don't want to rush it either... T_T
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Old 2012-04-27, 02:10   Link #36219
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Hey, take your time. I was just wondering, seeing as you seem to be busy.
And graduation? From highschool or from university?
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Old 2012-04-27, 02:20   Link #36220
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Hey, take your time. I was just wondering, seeing as you seem to be busy.
And graduation? From highschool or from university?
No worries. Chapter 8 will probably be the end of Swords and Shields. Then I can put more work into Medieval Belka's planning and crank out these Yuuno/Fate bunnies which won't leave me alone.

As for graduation, I'll finally be graduating college. With a BS in Geographical Information Systems and a Minor in Computer Science. Then its off to the job market with me. =3
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